Breaking In Louise (ZnT Discussion) Pt 2

I was just about to do this. But continuing on from the last thread, I'm interested in what could be written for Okuu.

I think the key point with Okuu is to not introduce her in her full humanoid glory. Keep her in raven form for a while first, let everyone think Louise just has a normal familiar.

When you reveal her would vary depending on if you're going more canonical somewhat dense uber-powerhouse, or the cute'n'sweet Karaagetarou version.

... Really starting to like the idea of cute'n'sweet version. Especially if it's post gaining nuclear power, but before she realizes what kind of hellish firepower she has access to. Could be interesting if it was all framed in the idea of 'begin cute'n'sweet version, end somewhat-dense uber-powerhouse version'.

Cute'n'Sweet wants to do whatever is needed to make sure that Satori Louise is happy. And if it means she has to fight. She might have to.

Karaagetarou's Okuu is kinda dense (The entire eating of the "God of Eggs" comes to mind) but she and Orin are both dedicated in one thing. They just want to help. And damnit if it might hurt them. They give it their all.

Even if Okuu discovers her powers she's going to be working to use it to protect the one she had. Madness may come but the force controlling the control rod will be the one she cares about.

What if Louise summons Cattleya.. And the Gandalfr runes make her healthy?

Just in case my suggestion at the end of the last thread got missed...

Tank Girl....

You want to bring in.....Tank Girl.

Dear god.

If she finds the Holy Land, all is screwed.

Even before then, if her tank comes with her all is screwed.

She would probably turn Louise into one of her Girls even!

Something like......Boom Girl! or Nuke Girl!

Actually, I'm not all that convinced that TG would be all that opposed to the windstone threat. "Target practice."

But you know it would be awesome. Even if only for a one-shot.

Then write it.

[spoiler]NOW[/spoiler]

Minor problem with that: I'm a shitty writer.

Now, if only more people understood this about themselves.

But you only improve by writing and then actually trying to improve.

Louise summons Katanagatari's Yasuri Nanami and makes her healthy. Someone with Cattleya's temperament- unless you're her opponent, in which case she's basically a pretty little monster that can instantly copy fighting techniques by seeing them performed once, and can cut through you with her bare hands.

She's also got a death wish that will never be fulfilled because she's too fucking strong to die.

Breaking Of if you let her copy magic spells, but probably just Breaking In if not.

Just for the hilarity, Louise actually summon a true familiar. That is Albert Chamomile from Negima. A minute after the summoning, all the female panties are complete gone. After a week with Chamo and no sign of panties ever staying inside their drawer, she probably wouldn't raise an eyebrow at Saito perviness anymore

Yes. YES.

Would Chamo try to make Louise start a harem like he did with Negi?

Almost certainly.

His income depend on it (he gain 50,000 ermine dollars per pactio) so probably

Hermione is behind it? I was not aware of this.

Maybe, maybe not.

Getting 50k 'ferret dollars' or whatever for every pactio was a big part of his motivation. Which wouldn't be the case in Halgekinia.

Brimir had four familiars.

Louise will have fifty. Because if a ten-year-old Negi can get around thirty five girls, then a seventeen year old is going to have fifteen times as much Harem-Blood as Negi.

Just a bit of brainstorming here, but how could I go about to successfully integrating Seras Victoria into the ZnT storyline while keeping it interesting? (Post-manga, meaning she has consumed Pip). Conflict is mostly foregone (unless upping the caster's powers means they can use different techniques on our vampire here).

Negi has the Springfield Gene though, which is even more potent than the Tohno Gland. He's got an unfair advantage.

Got some ideas for a WoW crossover but I'm not sure how to parse the information. Quick, someone prompt me!

Maybe, maybe not. If he get the impression that he will come back to earth, he might do it anyway as he could argue that he would just get paid later.

On Negi case i can only conclude that he must not reach puberty or he will get all the woman.

Louise summons Guerilla Burialgears. Or Dodok Sabrefrenzies.

[spoiler]Or Emperor Sankis.[/spoiler]