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Magica Madoka Veneficus Puella

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by TheOneMoiderah, Jun 6, 2011.

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  1. Dalek Ix

    Dalek Ix Angry Mexican Dalek

    Shield: Mechanical failure. That was a casing built by insane Daleks led by an even more insane Emperor. Who were made out of whatever they could scrounge up in 300 years in deep space. The last time someone went for the eyestalk on a properly built Dalek...well:

    "MY VI-SION IS NOT IM-PAIRED!"

    Temporal resistance: True, most Daleks would be affected by Time Stop, unless they could lock on to [TECHNOBABBLE REDACTED]. Remember how THe Cult of Skaro could detect the Cybermen on a "planetary scale"?

    Also, can we leave this discusion as it is? Remember, the thread isn't called "Daleks vs Homura". It's called "Magica Madoka Veneficus Puella".

    Back to current topic: CyberPuella.

    Thoughts? Opinions?
     
  2. linkhyrule5

    linkhyrule5 Hero of Time

    Uh... that's still a Doctor Who/PMMM crossover... *sweatdrop*
     
  3. Dalek Ix

    Dalek Ix Angry Mexican Dalek

    No, Moiderah said that the Veneficusverse has it's own version of the show Doctor Who. It involves Witches in it's plot, to give it "realism".

    Hence: CyberPuella.

    Edit: PROOF!
     
  4. linkhyrule5

    linkhyrule5 Hero of Time

    CyberPuella still stand a better chance than the Cybermen. For one thing, we don't know how many mahou shoujo actually have corporeal attacks. Mami may or may not shoot actual bullets, Kyouko's spear does way too much damage to, say, rock to be a normal spear, and Madoka (even w/o Madokami) shoots pink lasers that track their targets.
     
  5. linkhyrule5

    linkhyrule5 Hero of Time

    So... how goes that update? :p
     
  6. iospace

    iospace The reason we can't have nice things

    that quote was from june >_>

    How much longer before we unleash angry as all hell!homura on him?
     
  7. linkhyrule5

    linkhyrule5 Hero of Time

    The Akemi Death Star Barrage still hasn't been tested...

    And speaking of which, someone needs to write that into an omake.
     
  8. iospace

    iospace The reason we can't have nice things

    Thank you for volunteering ^_^
     
  9. linkhyrule5

    linkhyrule5 Hero of Time

    Still writing Touhou crossover :p. Thanks for volunteering!
     
  10. Techlology

    Techlology I have to dig.

  11. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    That would be awesome, but Tsubasa Wo Kudasai will not be playing, I'm sorry.

    Sprinter will be playing.

    Look, I hate this holiday a hell of a lot. Seeing as I am still a teenager, I am bound by those two morons who call themselves my parents. That being said, I was yanked from my home by 3:00 with little to no warning, and was only able to come back at 9:00

    I am not making this shit up.

    The chances of an update are nil. Expect one Tomorrow, as there is no other option.

    I'm really, really sorry about this guys.

    ...

    Fuck my life.
     
  12. iospace

    iospace The reason we can't have nice things

    I'M GOIGN TO TAKE THIS LIFE...

    and fuck... gently.
     
  13. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    So smooth...so gentHOLY GOD WHAT DID I JUST TYPE?!
     
  14. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    Ladies and gentlmen, I just sent it in for editing! Expect something amazing, awesome...

    And pants-shittingly terrifying.
     
  15. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    Update has been uploaded. Enjoy your nightmares.
     
  16. iospace

    iospace The reason we can't have nice things

    Were the section separators supposed to look "corrupted" towards the end?

    On that note.

    I hate you

    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much.
     
  17. Ixenathier

    Ixenathier I cast my sight across worlds...

    ...Well, that went about as expected...

    Homura does need to get a grip on her self though. This is no time to let you emotions get away from you.
     
  18. greencynic

    greencynic Tenuous sanity

    The section breaks looked quite fitting at the end, there...

    Why is EnBey called an Interceptor, anyway? He intercepts potential Venefici/witches before TorBey gets to them?

    Also, how much of that could Kyubey have predicted, anyway? Due to considering it "Phase two"...
    ...Well, I guess if he basically designed the universe, he'd be able to know the effects of Homura's contracting, but still.





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  19. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    He calls himself "Interceptor" because it sounds cool he's a thorn in the Incubators' side. You hit it right on the mark.

    And yes,
    Kyubey saw this from a mile away. He knew this was going to happen; he selected this universe, and its very flawed EnBey, all for this Optimal Outcome
     
  20. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    How the fuck can she? She's pretty much a PMMM witch now...but she's reversible.
    Expect something that will betray Puella Magi's premise in a fashion most awesome.
     
  21. iospace

    iospace The reason we can't have nice things

    So the demons are forming a psuedo barrier?
     
  22. greencynic

    greencynic Tenuous sanity

    Wait, is that including the PMMM witches' utter insanity along with their grief-spreading? Hope not, for the sake of the other characters.
     
  23. TheOneMoiderah

    TheOneMoiderah Healing-Type

    A-yup.

    It's a lot slower than the original witch's, and if it's removed, all physical damage will be removed, but I can't say too much about the psyche of anyone who's not a VP.
     
  24. Ixenathier

    Ixenathier I cast my sight across worlds...

    A joke it was my good entity. What with the demons being living embodiments of her emotions and all.
     
  25. greencynic

    greencynic Tenuous sanity

    This universe seems ever so slightly less optimal than that of the fic with that title.
    Like, nuclear armageddon compared to a stubbed toe.


    http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/818/okwiththis.png
     
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