Point of order: Agatha is far more chaotic than her mother. Slaver wasps and similar are things of order. Tyrannical order maybe but still order. PoO 2: Griffons are not the apex predator on that tame deathworld. That title, probably, goes to the dragons. Or maybe the Ursa Major. PoO 3: Ponies by all evidence, such as cake, can stomach meat. Although raw rabbit, with fur, would probably be a stretch. Doubly with her expecting to throw up. Didn’t much like the ‘A MARE’ bit. All male mines have very, very unpleasant implications. So... no comment on solid clouds? No comment on Gilda being able to fly, while encumbered, with a five foot wingspan in contemptuous defiance of physics? I very much like that you aren’t rushing straight to the mane six.