[MLP:FiM-HiE] Arrow Mision Contact Logs

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by AdmiralTigercla, Feb 29, 2012.

  1. AdmiralTigercla GCFA Fleet Command

    On request.

    Note, the blank spot in the text was where I forgot the term for that old drawing of a human. I know how to find it, so you don't have to tell me. I just don't have time to sit down and connect both ends.

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  2. metalmachine Death Metal Cyborg of Justice

    The term you're looking for is "Vitruvian Man", overall I enjoyed this alot and really want to see more of these mission logs.
  3. Zege Brother

    This is a great read so far, can we expect more? I love the way you've been handling First Contact, the math exchange is actually what I would expect an actual scenario to follow.

    I'm not sure who the yellow eyes are supposed to be, unless it's supposed to be Zecora? She has blue eyes, but they do show them glowing yellow in the dark oddly enough...
  4. Vulpine Fury It's MAAAAAGIC!

    It's Derpy, natch! ;)
  5. Felidae Sola Scriptura

    I wonder what his reaction will be when he figures out Celestia is making the Sun orbit the Equestrian planet... :drevil:
  6. JonBerry FanFic Writer

  7. Baladar Mad Scientist In Training

    You have my interest sir.
  8. Weird Guy Has no idea what he's doing.

    I like this story so far.
  9. Richardson Not a Chicken

    Actually, the yellow eyes are likely just that Manticore that got him. I don't remember off the top of my head seeing them in the text again after he drives it off.
  10. Gilda has yellow eyes.
  11. Rc1212 Homura Akemi is GAR

    This is interesting.

    I look forward to more.
  12. AdmiralTigercla GCFA Fleet Command

    [transmission recieved]


    (There is an error in capitalization in many of the paragraphs. This is not due to typing, but appears to be something the board reacts to when you have all-caps in brackets. It's weird, and I'm not going to fix it just for here. It'll be correct on FimFiction.)
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  13. Mac

    what do HiE stand for?
  14. Harry Leferts That Suave Kaiju

    Human-in-Equestria
  15. 'Carbon inserts'?

    I'm curious to see what Rarity does with sprucing him up.

    While I find the idea humanity would send one guy by himself deep into space to be hard to believe, I am otherwise totally loving this story.
  16. Cody Fett Transitional Phrase Nut

    I'm sorry, I wish I could read the update further, but its utter refusal to capitalize people's names riles me so much that I can no longer comprehend the story.
  17. Richardson Not a Chicken

    Blame SB, and read it on FiM if it bothers you that much.
  18. Sydonai Highfunctioning Sociopath

    Carbon inserts are used to absorb smells, he can go 90 days without changing clothes.
  19. Khaos GMT +8

    He'll be amazed that somehow Rarity has a grasp on human fashion without ever having been on Earth :D
  20. I am grinning a happy grin. :D
  21. JadeCriminal Procanistrator Adept.

    I would love to watch this on FiMfiction but can't seem to find it.
  22. AdmiralTigercla GCFA Fleet Command

    Probably because I'm not at home to do cleanup and upload yet...
  23. You know, I really love this for it's entertaining first contact, and actually following realistic procedures and hypothesis. :)
  24. JadeCriminal Procanistrator Adept.

    Yeah not being published yet would somewhat increase the difficulty of finding it.


    "Applebloom! Put away the tempo-dimensional mod-de-modulator, I am not doing that again, do you know how much they charge trans-temporal side-dimensional surfing? The speed stinks anyway."

    "But mister Hooves I wanna read it noooow!"


    "Well you will just have to be... Oh crud, vocal recording off."

    Transmission interrupted, auto posting...
    Complete.
  25. Vulpine Fury It's MAAAAAGIC!

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