Summon-A-Servant the Third (Fate/Stay Night Crossovers)

@Shiki: I agree with Stormwind on all points.

Clock Up needs to be in there as a separate Noble Phantasm. Like Storm suggested, make it simply that it grants a huge boost to Agility for a short period of time at the cost for gigantic prana usage.
Lower Endurance to C for Rider Form.

I would keep the amount of skills the way it is. I don't know if Tachyon Generator could even fit as one. I'm not too sure on Protection From Arrows either...

Perfect Harmony could work as a nice skill. Something like "the ability to work with others in perfect sync, regardless of their ability or state of mind" (IE working perfectly with Berserker even in his most enraged states). Unfortunately, it would suffer a penalty because Yaguruma strayed from it, leading to TheBee leaving him.

Wow, any person can become TheBee. Hell, even the Master can, but probably doesn't do so unless in a dire situation to preserve his/her life. Until TheBee is destroyed, he'll just keep coming back. My god, that's awesome.

As for TheBee's personality... I can't get the image of a really haughty woman out of my mind...

Also, completely irrelevant to TheBee, something needs to be said about Odin's Steal Vent in that it can't steal other Rider Belts, just the Rider's weapons. I just noticed that after all this time, wow.

@SJC: I thought another NP for Phoenix. The Mason System he got built in Apollo Justice. A support NP that improves his ability to analyze and present information.

Of course, on the side, he did also built up a rep of an unbeatable Poker player, although that was with Trucy's ability to catch the opponent's tells.

Meanwhile:
Battle continuation EX: Contingency/Victory from beyond the grave.
Ability to make successful plans whose key element is planner's own death and what are able to to bring desired outcome in even most unlikely of situations

Making the adjustments to the shee as suggested as of now.

@Koolerkid: Sorry about the mess, I'm working on the cleaner second draft right now. Also, do you want me to put the list of Types into a seperate post?

@Lucaris: I was betting on Tsundere, but Queen Bitch? I never thought you were a punner.

Anyways, I'll make the adjustments. But regarding the Tachyon generator I just had a terrible idea: From what I remember about the Seventh Holy Scripture, as long as the user is powerful enough, they can make Seven appear in spirit form; her's is a young girl with a tail and hooves, which is based on the fact that the SHS is made from a spirit from a young girl and a unicorn.

What I propose is that the Tachyon generator can weather the prana upkeep of TheBee(but not so much for the NPs?), and still provide enough juice for the Zector to take a humanoid-like form. Maybe something like Suzumebachi perhaps?

Humanoid TheBee?
His Rider Form, only in more monstrous SiC style?

Either that, or maybe something like this. . .

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@Koolerkid: Can I add Clock up as a NP, or is three too many for Assassin?

I have a template here, but really don't have a mission for it (let me know if one fits). Still, critiques are welcome.

Dirk Pitt

Crossover- Dirk Pitt

Alignment- Lawful/Chaotic Good- Dirk has been known to skirt orders if he feels the need to ensure justice on his own terms.

Class- Archer


Parameters:

Strength (D)

Agility (C)

Endurance (A)- Dirk has survived countless dangers, giving him a legend of near-invincibility.

Prana (D)- Although he comes from a relatively mundane world, Dirk is descended from gypsies, giving him a degree of magical affinity.

Luck (A)

Noble Phantasm (C)


Skills:

Independent Action (Class, B)- Dirk has a very independent and perseverant spirit, and can survive and function on his own if need be.

Magic Resistance (Class, D)- Although he comes from a relatively mundane world, Dirk is descended from gypsies, giving him a degree of magical resistance.


Battle Continuation (A)

Charisma (C)

Eye for Art (E+)- Dirk has a bonus when identifying cars, ships, and wine.

Eye of the Mind (True, B)

Guardian Knight (D)

Military Tactics (C)

Riding (D+)- Dirk can pilot almost any form of land, air, or water transportation known to man.

Voyager of the Storm (A)


Noble Phantasms:

Clive Cussler (E)- The author of Dirk Pitt, Cussler can be summoned briefly as a ordinary human, albeit one with fourth wall knowledge. He then provides some useful information to Dirk and whoever he is with, and then departs. Clive Cussler emits an effect akin to Information Erasure, making everyone forget where they received the information; due to this, Dirk can only use this Noble Phantasm once before he forgets it.

Max (B)- While technically the possession of Dirk’s friend Hiram Yeager, Dirk can utilize Max as a Servant. Max is a computer system, and must be specially installed into a large indoor chamber. She is a surprisingly intelligent and human A.I., capable of using human emotions and reasoning. Max has seemingly infinite stores of information about archaeological and naval history in Dirk’s world, and can quickly accommodate her library to include information gleaned from computers across the world. Although Max is mostly defenseless against outside threats, she can project an image of herself that, thanks to the addition of Prana, can fight to a degree in the physical world.

Holy Lance (D)- Recovered by Pitt during an adventure in Antarctica, the Holy Lance is enhanced with holy powers that bless wielders of good hearts. Rank reduced since the weapon comes from a relatively mundane world.

Titanic Rising (A+)- In commemoration of his achievement of raising the Titanic from its watery grave, Dirk summons it in this Noble Phantasm. Due to the emphasis on rising, the ship emerges directly below the point at which Dirk unleashes it, bursting through earth as easily as water. The ship is accompanied by a deluge of water, but the ship quickly runs aground if not at sea. Nevertheless, the ship exists indefinitely, requiring only large amounts of Prana to summon it and raise it with none to maintain it apart from physical decay. Due to the ship’s enormous size, it can easily serve as a base.

1) As koolerkid said, something awesome.
2) Yeah, likely. But that wouldn't stop recreating the Gurren via tracing.

....Yes, I am evil.
3) Indeed. The first clash will probably result in massive destruction, followed by... I don't know what.
4) *Snerk*
5) Seems about right.

Okay, abandoning the Makuta idea and submitting a new Lancer for Fate/Space Alien!

Ratchet

Crossover- Ratchet and Clank

Alignment- Chaotic Good

Class- Lancer


Parameters:

Strength (B)

Agility (C)

Endurance (C)

Prana (E)

Luck (A)

Noble Phantasm (B)


Skills:

Magic Resistance (Class, D)


Eternal Arms Mastership (A)

Golden Rule (B)- Ratchet can find money simply by destroying mechanical equipment and collecting the wreckage.

Guardian Knight (D)

Item Construction (E)- Ratchet is able to construct a number of inventions, but they are generally technological and not magical.

Nature of a Rebellious Spirit (B)

Riding (E)- Capable of piloting a number of technologically advanced forms of transportation.

Subversive Activities (C)


Noble Phantasms:
Clank (B)- A small, innocent-looking robot, Clank is Ratchet’s greatest asset and partner. Clank can modify his body into several forms, including a backpack version that allows Ratchet to carry him. He has a number of jet upgrades that allow him to hover and fly for a time. A machine, Clank is immune to oxygen-loss, poisoning, and other such ailments that affect organic beings. In addition, Clank has limited powers over time, capable of slowing it down for a short interval.

Wrench (C)- A common weapon for the Lombax race, the wrench rarely leaves Ratchet’s side. Apart from mechanical work, the tool functions as a ready weapon in battle. The wrench can be used in multiple fashions in a fight, and can be upgraded with special powers.

Gadgetron Vendor (E/A)- Ratchet summons a Gadgetron vending stand using minimal Prana. Once summoned, the vendor can exist indefinitely, and is near invulnerable. However, the vendor has an independent mind, and will not help Ratchet or his allies normally. Upon being paid large amounts of mechanical fragments though, he will open his shop up to Ratchet, selling him new weapons along with ammo. The items range from relatively useless devices to extremely powerful weapons.

:wtf:

Right, I see nothing of the normal characteristics that make a Lancer, not a long ranged melee weapon nor speed. And I'm entirely doubtful whether that wrench should be a NP at all, Servant can have weapons that aren't NPs, and I see nothing that pushes that wrench up to a Divine Mystery.

And before arbitrarily changing the statsheet so he can have the required speed, please justify it.

Warri, that's Archer.

@SJC: *dramatic finger point* APPROVAL!

@Shiki: Not really necessary to repost them, I think. I already have a million links on the OP, I don't want to add more unless it's really relevant. Also, all Servants have a max of three NPs (except Archer, who has a max of five), but I encourage people not to create NPs just because they have the room. A Noble Phantasm should be truly epic and unique, a pure crystallization of that character's legend. It should be amazing and breathtaking, not just one item in a list of weapons. The fewer NPs a character has, the more 'special' each one feels.

@Warri: Warri, as it's been said, there is absolutely NOTHING that qualifies Ratchet for Lancer. He's not especially fast, he doesn't have a fitting weapon, and his Wrench really doesn't deserve to be a NP as written. Again, NPs should be incredible, breathtaking, badass crystallization of that character's legend. If it wouldn't make a layperson stop and go 'woah...' than it shouldn't be a NP.

EDIT:
@Zap: Gah! Just realized I never approved Drac! Have a belated approval.
I'm late! I'm late! For a very important APPROVAL!

Piercing the Heavens

Felt like trying my hand at writing a snippet. I apologize if it isn't terribly good; I'm not much of a writer. Fate/Almighty Fury, if it doesn't become evident immediately upon seeing the not-at-all-disguised-in-anything-but-name Servants. Follows the canon closer than most would, but, then again, its the summoning, and divergences never happen till after that.


Shiro Emiya sighed and tightened his heavy jacket as he walked home under a cloudy sky, white powder drifting slowly down. He always wanted, no, knew, that he was a Hero of Justice, there to help the helpless, but these days, it seemed like the ability to reinforce things and good archery skills didn't quite match the problems. Two weeks ago, despite it being mid spring, the weather had been sweltering 41 degrees Celsius, and both the reservoir and the river had dried up, causing massive problems when the forest started burning.

Then, last week, volcanoes all over the world had started to slowly belch clouds of ash that blotted out the sun all across the Pacific region and brought temperatures down near the freezing point; Shirou still wasn't sure if the white powder that kept falling was snow, ash, or a mix of both. Fuyuki wasn't as bad as other places, really; in Yokohama the news was advising that people not leave their homes without breath masks. Shirou had been preparing for years to be able to defeat evildoers and save those in need, but how could you fight off the earth itself going out of control?

Before he had a chance to muse on it any further, however, he stopped and ducked into an alley as he heard a sound of steel on steel. Looking out, he saw... was that a half-naked overly thin boy with antennae and a sword dueling a Victorian schoolmarm with a giant scythe? Shirou, unthinkingly, chuckled at the ridiculousness of the sight. Unfortunately, the schoolmarm, trained by years of teaching giggle-prone small children, heard him, and left the battle, her scythe held high, and shouting words of apology. Confused and fearful, Shirou ran until he could not see or hear any chase, and then proceeded home.

Unfortunately, when he got there, the schoolmarm was waiting for him, sipping tea. Upon seeing him, she sighed, put down her tea cup, and picked up her scythe. "I really do apologize for this, boy", she said, Shirou still far too confused by incongruity and fear to say anything in response. "I've been told I have to kill anyone who sees me, which is really quite rude and impractically silly, and isn't even really necessary at this point but then, I don't have any more choice in this than you do, and it seems my current master is one of those fools who clings to tradition rather than common sense and changing circumstances.

For what it's worth," she said, hefting the scythe, "you feel like you might be a node, so there's a good chance I won't be able to kill you. Either way, this won't hurt a bit". Before she could swing it down, however, Shirou ran to the backyard as fast as he could. Just as he was reaching the old shed, however, he heard, no, felt, he say to him, STOP. CALM DOWN AND SIT, SO WE CAN GET THIS OVER WITH AND I CAN HOPEFULLY GET BACK TO GOING TO TRY TO WHEEDLE OUT OF ALBERT WHAT IN DUNMANIFESTIN IS GOING ON. Against Shirou's will, he obediently began to sit.

Unfortunately for the schoolmarm, as he sat down, his hand brushed against a long-hidden circle on the wall, causing it to erupt in bright light. When the light faded, there was a young man with blue hair, only a few years older than Shirou, standing between Shirou and the Schoolmarm. He wore a blue jacket with a strange flaming skull symbol on the back, and around his neck a tiny drill on a chain.

The Schoolmarm, clearly exasperated at this turn of events, sighed again and loudly muttered, "And who the heck is this? Why is nothing ever simple as it seems to Grandfather?" Hearing her, the blue haired man smirked, as if having expected some variant of that statement.

"Who am I, you ask?", he said in a booming voice, seeming to stand taller as he grasped the tiny drill and it glowed a pale green, "Who the hell do you think I am? I am the warrior of the spiral, risen from beyond to once again lead the world into life and glory! I am the one who shall shatter the chains that bind this world to its doom, the man of burning blood before whom the gods themselves tremble with fear!"

At this point, the once-tiny drill's pale green glow had grown into a small aura of green flame, and the drill seemed to be larger, somehow. "I", the man cried, "am the one who shall PIERCE THE HEAVENS!" With this, he raised the drill, and the flames grew brighter and larger, until a shaft of flame emerged and dashed towards the clouds and spread, the clouds seeming to fade and draw away, leaving a hole that looked about three miles wide letting a glorious moonless night sky shine through. "Gaze up," shouted the man, "for the very stars themselves shine and smile upon my return. I am SERVANT LANCER!"

With this, he turned around and offered a hand to the sitting Shirou. "I ask of you, are you my master?"

Too narmy at the end with Simon. Plus, separate the lines into more paragraphs - wall of text.

Which reminds me - how is Simon not a Rider? That's gotta be some kinda heresy ...

Also, I don't think he has a spear.

When it comes to Gurren Lagann speechifying, there is no such thing as too narmy; there is only ham.

As for spears, no, he doesn't have a particular one as a phantasm or major part of his legend... just an extreme affinity for drills and the ability to create any matter he sees a need for, which is more than close enough; the one he's using is just the walking stick he had in the epilogue of the last episode (not a Phantasm, but summoned with him anyway because it fit the class) modified with Spiral Energy to look more dramatically appropriate and be more combat-effective. Besides, the Rider class was already taken by Guy, since Shirou is, I think, the last one to summon.

Also, split it into more paragraphs.

@Zap: FLAWLESS VICTORY.

That was so, SO Susan. And the sheer ridiculousness of the scene of her and Laharl fighting each other... priceless. I imagine her having very little patience for Simon, though.

As I side note, I had imagined this taking place AFTER the Fifth War, but hey, whatever. Could you add a title so I don't have to make one up?

Title Added. Also, as for replacing vs. taking place after the Fifth War, really, two reasons. One, this gave me something of a template to follow and modify from. Two, by replacing the Fifth War, all of the known masters except Bazett are still alive and in the grail city, so we don't have to replace any of them or worry about which ending to follow.

Also, I really don't see anybody who survived the Fifth War as being willing to take part in another one, at least not Shirou and friends; they know just enough not to trust anything relating to the Grail, after all, and might think its a trick by Angara Mainyu or something.

Better. A few grammatical mistakes here and there, but no longer a chore to read.

Doesn't need it - his core drill is his 'lance' - a little spiral energy, and he can punch through Servants.

Like I said, I'm not a terribly good writer, I simply had this bouncing around in my head for a few days. Also, you're right, fixed, lance is gone and replaced by the core drill.

Will someone please suggest the relevant details for Fate/Curbstomp Servants so I can write snippets?

What details do you need? I can probably provide.

Referenced:

Finally finished Draft 2 with more legible notes and questions in parentheses. If it needs anymore cleaning up for submisssion, just tell me.

Also some hypothesis that I'd like to run with you guys:

Hypothesis 1: What makes Assassin a worrying opponent is that it is the Zector that is the Servant, allowing the Master to become KR TheBee. Going by what I remember, Zectors seem to fly away when the Rider(or in this case, the Master) takes enough damage. What makes this even more deadly is that TheBee, with Independent action can contract to another Master within a two day period, allowing TheBee to 'return' to the fight.

Hypothesis 2: The Idea that the Zecter could take a humanoid form was based on that of Seven's(Seventh Holy Scripture). Not sure if this is correct, so feel ree to correct me.

Hypothesis 3: (Crack idea that you may or may not ignore)When Zect[spoiler] or the Natives[/spoiler] created the TheBee Zector, they decided to give it a limited AI. Since it was a 'bee' motif, they decided to make a the controling personality feminine, a "queen" if you will. However, due to limitations(or bugs, forgive the pun), the AI on the Zector only has two modes: A default "Harsh Mode", and a secondary "Soft Mode".

In short, Zect purpously made TheBee Zector to be a Tsundere.
[spoiler] This is why some aliens should not be exposed to popular culture[/spoiler]

Been on a Mutineer's Moon kick lately, had a funny idea.

Someone summons Colin MacIntyre, the Emperor of Humanity.

He's fast and strong, of course, and has good senses, but overall doesn't seem that impressive...

Until his ride shows up.

"Dahak, target hostiles and fire for precision effect, on my mark."

Cue enemy shitting themselves when they realize the moon just opened fire on 'em.

My approval. You has it.


As for why I statted Simon as Lancer, it's because of the fact that drills sorta-count as lances, and that, you know, Rider was taken.