A Prison of Glass (Worm CYOA)

Chapter 1
After a great deal of lurking I finally got restless enough to try my hand at writing. Naturally, I went for the simple CYOA formula, using version 1 because who doesn't want obscene levels of power in their Worm story? I'm mostly doing this to practice writing, so comments and criticism would be very helpful! Enjoy.

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Chapter 1

Taylor jogged through wet streets, the squelching sound of shoes on concrete matching her heavy gasps. Jaya ran at her side, a rock in a storm, each step perfectly synchronized, each breath utterly calm. Taylor grit her teeth and fixed her posture, re-assuming what Jaya had called her runner's form. For the past three weeks the pair had run together in the evenings, Jaya providing helpful advice and Taylor striving to keep up with her companion. It was impossible, Taylor eventually concluded despite her competitive pride, to rival someone who had clearly been at this for a long time. That she was willing to match Taylor's pace was touching, almost like they were friends instead of two strangers who ran together, and Taylor strived to at least give the older girl a minor workout.

They made an odd pair, jogging through the docks, all the way down to the beach, well past the Boardwalk. Taylor was tall for her age, well on her way to six feet, with pale skin, twig-like arms and legs and a slight, if receding, gut. Gawky. That was the term that best described Taylor Hebert. Awkward, maybe as well. Plain, certainly. With a wide mouth, thin lips, and large eyes, she could easily be mistaken for a boy if not for her long, curly black hair. Jaya disagreed, when Taylor briefly mentioned it. A runner's build, Jaya said, or a model, once they toned her arms and legs up. Taylor appreciated the lie.

Jaya said a lot of things, after all, most of them insane. Taylor could be called shy on her best days, but quickly learned if she didn't speak during their runs Jaya would. And when Jaya spoke she did not stop. No topic was off-limits to her, as she seemed to have an opinion about literally everything, and made zero effort to control her volume. She seemed most at ease when giving scathing criticisms of everything from inter-dimensional trade to Scion himself. Eventually, Taylor forced herself to actively control the conversations, after Jaya gave a particularly loud and oddly hostile diatribe about the 'staggering arrogance' of the local Protectorate leader, while they ran through a packed Boardwalk. They changed to running along the beach not long after.

The girl was the opposite of Taylor in nearly every aspect. She was impulsive, utterly unconcerned with the opinions of strangers, and seemed to take perverse pleasure in making people uncomfortable. Even her looks contrasted sharply with Taylor. Where one was tall, the other barely broke five feet. Rather than twigs, Jaya had actual limbs, well toned and tanned, though slim enough to look natural. Her long, straight black hair was streaked with light blue highlights and pulled into a perpetual ponytail with locks framing her face. Gawky, she was not. Hardened, maybe. She had the face of a weathered soldier, hard angles and intense expressions and eyes that betrayed a slight Asian heritage. Cold, almost, or at least at first glance, and far too jaded for a seventeen year old.

Taylor had been petrified the first time the older girl appeared next to her, matching pace without a word, and following like a specter. It happened again the next day, and the next, before Taylor screwed up her courage and asked her silent companion just what the hell she wanted. Jaya had burst out laughing, "I wanted to see how long it would take you to ask me that." She spent the next five minutes offering unasked for advice on running form, before bidding Taylor goodbye and rocketing past her. Taylor had ignored the crazy girl, because clearly she was crazy, and continued her routine. The next day the girl returned, critiquing Taylor's choice in outfit and shoes, before once again sprinting off into the sunset. This happened every day for a week before Taylor changed her running path and times. When she ran into the strange girl yet again she finally gave up and took her advice. One thing led to another, and they started running together. Dealing with Jaya was good practice, Taylor figured, for when she was out on the streets and had to deal with the general insanity that seemed to define Brockton Bay.

This was important, because Taylor wasn't like most people; Taylor had something special, something that made her different, something allowed her to make a difference. Taylor was a parahuman, a cape, a hero, or at least she would be, just as soon as she finished her costume and got into acceptable shape. It was a secret, her biggest secret, and so far she had told no one. She didn't see that changing any time soon. Trust wasn't something she gave out easily these days, not since the last person used it like a shovel and buried her social life.

Besides, it's not like she knew any capes that she could ask for advice, and the only other person she might have thought to tell was her father, but that would only worry him. So, she trained, her powers and her body. She studied up on the capes in Brockton Bay, heroes and villains, evaluating the competition, and tried to come up with strategies for how she would handle each one. She wasn't very successful. All she had to work with were bugs after all. What could bugs do against monsters like Lung and Kaiser? Even so, she had the responsibility to try. That was what heroes did after all, they tried, and if necessary died, to protect others. Not that she was in a hurry to die. No, dealing with the major players was something she'd prefer to avoid when possible.

If there was one thing bugs were good at, it was stopping small-time crimes. Her radius was pretty good from what few comparisons she had found online, over two blocks in every direction, and Brockton Bay had a lot of bugs. She had eyes everywhere, so to speak, even if they were tiny, imprecise eyes. Finding crimes to stop should be a simple thing once she finally started patrolling.

"Taylor." Jaya's voice, soft and warm and never quite matching her face, snapped Taylor out of her introspection. The pair had finished their run, and were performing the cool down exercises that Jaya always insisted on, and Taylor had zoned out while Jaya was talking.

"Uh, y-yeah sorry, what's up?" Taylor mentally cursed her inattentiveness. She didn't understand why Jaya was helping her, but paying attention to her was the least she could do in thanks. Perhaps the girl was simply bored? It seemed like the sort of bizarre reasoning she would have.

"I wanted to know if you'd like to take Krav Maga lessons with me. There's this little place just past the Boardwalk that gives lessons and I was thinking about going."

"Oh um, that's like karate right? For self-defense?" Jaya nodded with an amused grin, "I don't think I could afford that," Taylor said, somewhat morosely. It was unfortunate but true. She had very little spending money, which was a shame because learning how to fight properly would actually help her hero career. At the moment her close combat plan consisted entirely of 'use lots of pepper spray and hope for the best.' Hardly the most foolproof strategy.

"Nah, don't worry 'bout it." Jaya waved her hand dismissively, "The guy who runs it owes me a favor so the first month is on the house for me and a friend."

Taylor blinked in surprise as she digested this new information. Why on earth was Jaya inviting her of all people? "Are you sure? I mean, I'd love to go but I don't want to take a spot from one of your friends..."

The older girl's brow furrowed and she stared at Taylor with a frown forming on her face. Taylor fidgeted under the intense scrutiny, but stuck to her guns. Jaya could be pretty air-headed sometimes so she probably just forgot to ask other people first. Unfortunately Taylor's tact was completely wasted on her companion, who simply maintained her piercing gaze. Finally, Jaya sighed and massaged the bridge of her nose. "Taylor, you do realize you are my friend right? I mean, I assumed that was what was happening here," she gestured between the two of them, "because I don't hang out every single day with people I dislike. Since I'm not trying to sleep with you, I think that only leaves one option."

"Oh." Oh. Taylor's brain frantically sifted through her dusty tomes of social interaction while her mouth continued to move of its own accord, "I-I just meant if you wanted to invite any other friends, er- instead of me that is. That you might have... known longer..." Taylor trailed off lamely as Jaya continued to stare. Finally, with a cheer of success, Taylor's brain transmitted the appropriate social cue, "Yes Jaya, I would love to learn self-defense with you."

Her friend smiled victoriously, "Good! We'll start next Monday kay? I'll be busy the next few days, so we won't be able to run together until the weekend. If you give me your number I'll call you when I'm free again."

"My number?" Sift sift sift, "Right! Yeah, of course." They swapped numbers, and Jaya gave her a hug of all things, before the two went their separate ways.

Taylor made it home in good time. She hopped over the rotted front step and unlocked the door to see her father lounging on their old couch, watching television in the living room. He gave her a wave and a small smile, "Welcome back pumpkin. How was your run?"

"It was fine." Taylor replied automatically. A moment passed as she recalled the mountain of awkwardness that had been her evening. "I think I made a friend."
 
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Chapter 2
Next chapter tomorrow, then I'll probably be posting an update every other day or so, as I've got about 20k words written up. Assuming nobody points out some gigantic plot hole.
Oh dear.

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"I don't like it." Brian remarked, his hands drumming a nervous pattern on the kitchen table. "People don't mess with him for a reason. If he finds a way to follow us-"

"If we do it right that should be impossible." Lisa argued back, one hand massaging her brow. The two of them had spent all morning... discussing the implications of their latest job. Lisa didn't understand why Coil wanted to piss off Lung, but she had little choice but to obey. She'd lost the right to choose, the moment the man put a gun to her head. Do or die was not a position she ever wanted to be in, but she would survive for as long as it took to escape the bastard. In the meantime, she would play her part, and follow the sadistic asshole's orders.

Still, even with the large advantage her power provided, convincing Brian that robbing a literal dragon was a good idea had been taxing to say the least. Thankfully she knew him well enough to make a convincing argument, even if he had several legitimate concerns. "Think about it what this will do for our rep," she continued, "We are the getaway specialists right? What better way to cement that than to rob Lung and get away with it?"

"Yeah except if we don't get away with it, he burns us alive." he said wryly, "What are our chances of taking Lung on, just Lung, four on one?"

"Not...great." Lisa admitted. Her foot bounced up and down against the carpeted floor for a few moments while she reformulated her arguments. Brian watched her with a raised brow and a smug grin, her grin dammit, as if he knew she thought this was a bad idea. He was right, of course, it was a terrible idea, one that was as likely to get them killed as not, but Coil had made the consequences for failing this particular mission abundantly clear, the fucking bastard.

"Alright look," she began, finally deciding on a plan of attack, "Even if Lung somehow tracks us down, the boss has informants in every gang. Nothing high level, but if there's a posse forming for our heads he'll hear about it in time to warn us, and we should have plenty of time to decide what to do. He'd be happy to pay for new accommodations," maybe, "if we decide to run, and if not, well, while fighting Lung directly is a terrible idea, getting the jump on him with Rachel's dogs before he ramps up might work out." She shrugged helplessly, out of arguments and needing an Advil.

Brian sighed heavily, running a hand over his shoulder length cornrows. He turned towards the other two people in the room, Rachel and Alec, who were both watching television on the couch, "Any thoughts?"

Lisa suppressed a laugh. She did not dislike her other teammates, but neither of them ever contributed much towards mission planning, not through lack of intelligence, but rather desire. Rachel lacked the desire to act in any way that didn't scream out her dominance, and Alec lacked the desire to... well, to do anything really. Lisa knew the former was a result of her power, and the latter was a result of a frankly awful upbringing, so she didn't begrudge them their lack of input. Much. She did enjoy being the brains of the operation, so to speak, but it would be nice if the success of a plan didn't fall squarely on her shoulders. There was enough stress in her life just from the psychotic super-villain whose power she still couldn't figure out. Brian was a solid leader, he understood the subtleties of cape 'politics', how actions formed the invisible shield of reputation that stronger groups enjoyed, and his tactical sense during a job was serviceable enough, but it was Lisa, or in this case Coil, who chose the targets and created a workable strategy. She was utterly unsurprised then, when Rachel grunted and said, "We can take him," while Alec unhelpfully chipped in with, "I don't care."

Their fearless leader glared at the pair, who were back to watching television, before turning back to Lisa with a grimace. "Fine. Tell the boss we'll do it if he covers any relocation we might need from the fallout of this job. Also I expect you to go over every single step of your plan with me, as many times as I need you to before I'm satisfied." He pointed at her, his other hand curled into a tight fist, "I'm serious Lisa, we're about to enter the big leagues here. No half-assing this."

Lisa nodded with relief, he didn't need to tell her the stakes, and sent a quick text to Coil. Hopefully this would satisfy him for a while. She could use the room to breathe while she figures out how to strangle the bastard.

"If you two are done arguing you should come watch this," Alec's voice drifted from where he was splayed out on the couch. After a moment he added, "Downtown is on fire."

"What!?" Lisa and Brian both shouted simultaneously as they scrambled to look at the screen. On the television an attractive blonde woman spoke into a microphone against a backdrop of a smouldering wreckage, "-speculates terrorist involvement, though no comment has yet been made. It was a matter of pure chance that nobody was hurt in the fire, most of the employees having just left for lunch and the rest able to evacuate, when an intern pulled the fire alarm after smelling smoke. At this time we do not know why the building collapsed, but the fire fighters we have spoken to all agree that the suggested cause of an electrical fire could not have caused this kind of reaction."

The report cut to an amateur video of the office building, still standing at twelve stories tall, and very on fire. Lisa's power worked furiously as the building swayed and crumpled, collapsing on itself in a neat pile and smothering the flames. Firefighters correct, fire burned through building supports far to quickly, likely parahuman involvement. Building fell in a way to eliminate spread of fire. Building did not fall until all civilians evacuated. Parahuman did not want civilian casualties. Parahuman did not care about property damage. Parahuman likely has control over fire. Interesting, but what was the point of burning down a building? Parahuman wants to send a message? No. Easier ways than destroying a building. Maybe the building itself was significant? Office building located nearly in the center of commercial district. Located outside of major gang territory. Barely within territory of Coil's Organization. Location equidistant from the three major gangs. Ideal location for Coil's base of operations.

Someone is attacking Coil.


Lisa shut down her power with a gasp, staggering back against the wall. Brian was speaking to Alec, "-just a building, not the whole damn district. Don't say shit like that man," but she didn't care. Someone attacked Coil. Someone dropped a building on Coil. Did that mean-

Her phone buzzed. She suppressed a flinch through sheer force of will.

She flipped it open with trembling hands, nearly crying out loud when she saw Coil's name replying to her earlier text. The keypad clicked as she entered her password, the new message automatically appearing on the screen.

Today 12:54 PM
Evil Asshole: Hello Lisa
Evil Asshole: I have a gift for you.
Evil Asshole: Your favorite bench at the Boardwalk. 2 p.m.
Evil Asshole: See you soon.

Lisa let out a shaky breath, sagging against the wall in relief. Not Coil. Not hostile. One hand covered her face, the other biting on a knuckle as she silently left her teammates, ascending the staircase towards her room, shaking with suppressed mirth. In the privacy of her room she collapsed in bed, crying and laughing and rolling around with glee. Someone had Coil's phone, which meant they got it from Coil, which meant Coil was most likely no longer a factor. Now she just had to deal with this mysterious third party. She clamped down on the urge to use her power, she simply did not have enough data to justify it, and she'd need to be at her best when she went to the Boardwalk in...

Shit. An hour. Lisa sat back up, quickly wiping her face and recomposing herself. Two Advil went down the hatch and she dug through her closet for an outfit she could wear to the Boardwalk but still run away in. The meet probably wasn't a trap, but she was dealing with an unknown and possibly unstable parahuman. Worst case scenario, they would want to use her the same way Coil did. Backup was not only prudent, it was necessary. She took a deep breath, idly wondering how she would explain this situation to Brian, and walked back down the stairs. She survived Coil's bullshit, she'd get through whatever this is too.

And then, finally, she might be free.
 
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Well I didn't cringe while reading this so this wasn't a bad start. Though I am curious regarding the title as CYOA, to me, means incredibly strong powers.
 

Inkling

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Nothing quite as fun as watching the stations of the canon derail before the first point, and even better it's in (kinda?)limited 3rd person. This looks good.

Watched.
 
I couldn't help but notice you made an error in your sentence there, matey- but don't worry! I fixed it for ya.

Curious, though. What version of the CYOA are you using, OP? I prefer using the Update Bet version myself.
I'm using, from what I can tell, the first CYOA:
The exact choices the CYOA character made don't seem all that necessary to post, but I can do it if people want me to. I think the ambiguity might add something to the story, but that's just me.
 
Chapter 3
Just so it's clear, we're going back in time just a tad here.
Also, writing an unrepentant sociopath is surprisingly difficult.

Enjoy!

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Life was good for Thomas Calvert. Years of effort, and dozens of plans, would all come to a conclusion in these next few months. Soon, he would have his own little realm to rule, a city where his word was law and his desires, a decree. It wasn't easy, oh no, and he had his share of suffering for his dream, but it would all be worth it in the end, when he ascends to his rightful place.

Discipline, it defined him. He had extraordinary power at his command, but it required patience to utilize. A lesser man would have failed long before achieving anything of note. Deception, cunning, ruthlessness, these things were all necessary for the disciplined man. Even now, just months from his goal, he played his role with care. In one timeline, he sat in his small suburban home, cooking breakfast on his gas stove, the portrait of a lower middle class working man. In the other, he sat in his underground base, reading emails and making plans for the future, his future.

Thomas could have the best of both worlds, after all. A good night's sleep, a healthy breakfast, an entire night of planning, his power gave him all these things and more. He had time, more time than anyone else in the world he suspected, to accomplish his goals. Failure was an inevitability with his power, but, as Thomas had long ago discovered, failure was the universe teaching you how to win. So he would try, over and over he would try. Risk did not exist for Thomas Calvert, no, for he would learn while his enemies wallowed in ignorance, and in the end he always won.

That being said, there was no reason not to cheat every now and then. A new asset had appeared on the horizon, a Thinker that Thomas suspected was his natural companion, even if she did not know it yet. The power to tell the future, a strength that nearly rivaled his own, Thomas almost salivated at the possibilities. She would make a fitting subordinate, one to be cherished and protected so long as she served him well. He would need to train her first, of course, though her age would likely make that simple, and from all accounts the girl was as mature and intelligent as a child could be. She would learn quickly. Still, her... position, as the mayor's niece, made acquiring her difficult. Arranging a distraction for the local heroes would undoubtedly be necessary. The mayor would throw a fit of course, but the man would lack the influence to actually accomplish anything. Thomas could easily conceal his acquisition, at least until she learns her place.

But those were problems for the future.

For now, while one timeline ate breakfast, he furiously researched the ABB's newest recruit. The bomb tinker, despite her appropriately volatile personality, would be incredibly useful. Lung was keeping her close for now, likely cementing her loyalty through some barbaric form of violence. The brute simply did not understand the finer points of indoctrination. Intimidation could be effective, Thomas allowed, and fear was an effective motivator, a simple glance at his Tattletale would confirm it, but fear could only grant control, not obedience. Even now, his pet was trying to break her leash, and it was only through constant exhaustive efforts that he maintained his hold. If only her power didn't require her cognizant, he could so easily- Ah, no need to dwell on it now.

The point was, he needed Lung to be distracted. Angry, really. Enraged to the point of stupidity would be optimal. The kind of fury that would arise from discovering a group of teenagers had robbed him blind. The leader of the ABB was such a simple creature to manipulate.

Once Lung left his tinker alone, Thomas would take her. Well, Coil would take her. With luck he may even buy her loyalty the standard way, without gratuitous amounts of coercion. If the girl had any sense at all, she would thank him for rescuing her from Lung's tender care, and beg him for permission to use the expensive tinker laboratory he had set up. Thomas rather doubted she would cooperate, unfortunately, but he lost nothing by trying. Well, assuming the Undersiders escaped their little heist unharmed. While the majority of the teenage villains were replaceable, losing his Tattletale would be costly. Thomas made a mental note to keep tabs on Lung's movements for a few days following the robbery.

The future King of Brockton Bay wrapped up another email, a simple offer to his... contact, Accord, about a particularly troubling group of villains. With any luck, he would have yet another group of capes under his control, with no one the wiser. In his other timeline, he finished his breakfast and began rinsing his dishes, when a strange smell caught his attention.

Sulfur? Thomas frowned in concern at his gas powered stove. Many comforts were sacrificed over the years, all in the name of a perfect cover, but his current living situation was one of the most irritating. The very first thing he would purchase, once he assumed control of this city, would be a mansion that would make kings weep. And an electric stove. He grunted in irritation, and opened the cabinet beneath his stove, to check the connecting valves. He was no mechanic, but manual labor was not beneath him. Yet. Thomas dug a flashlight out of a nearby drawer, and shined it on the piping that connected to his counter top. The light gave him a perfect view of the spark that vaporized him.

Thomas flinched in his remaining timeline. That was... incredibly unfortunate. He quickly split off a new timeline, pausing to think about his situation in one, and continuing to work in another. The question, he supposed, was whether his death was the result of a freak accident, or an assassination attempt. It was singularly unlikely that his identity as Coil was compromised, as the number of people with that knowledge numbered in the not a fucking soul. Trust was for younger, dumber men. The one man who might discover his identity was firmly under his control, bought with a vice that only Coil could provide. Unlikely did not mean impossible, unfortunately. The sheer number of powers out in the world made such terms as 'impossible' laughable. It was not even the first time Thomas had died, though it was a first for his civilian persona. He had learned to despise these moments, when his two selves were so synchronized, so vulnerable. The idea that someone could kill him permanently was an ever present threat. Still, it was possible that he was the victim of an unfortunate accident. His house was old, after all, and a leaking gas line was not out of the realm of possibility.

But being paranoid never hurt anyone. With this mantra firmly in mind, Thomas' idle timeline quickly scribbled down his address on a blank paper, and called in his... he supposed secretary was the appropriate term, "Mr. Pitter, I have a job for you."

The door to his office opened, and the short, unassuming man entered the room and stood attentively, "Yes sir, how can I be of assistance."

Thomas restrained a sigh, the man was utterly devoted to him, to the extent that it was almost uncomfortable. He was generally dependable though, and serviceable as a gopher. He held out a hand with his address, "I want you to send a team to scout this location. Just scout. Have them survey the surrounding area and report back if they find anything unusual." he paused for a moment in thought, "Also have them check possible vantage points for surveillance." Thomas would need to end this timeline once he heard back from his men, in order to protect his civilian identity, but the waste was necessary. He was safe as one could be, here, behind a score of hardened mercenaries and enough concrete to withstand an Endbringer.

Mr. Pitter left to carry out his orders, and Thomas considered what else he could do. This reality was officially a throwaway, so he might as well accomplish something with it. Perhaps he should have another question and answer session with his Tattletale? He was positive the girl was hiding things from him, and with his most recent assignment... well he expected a certain amount of resistance.

Hmm, but perhaps his safest option was to wait for his men to finish their investigation. The fear of being stuck in a bad timeline was something Thomas had never quite overcome. He would take the safe route, as always, and wait.

He had plenty of time, after all.
 
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TheRedSir

It's Complicated, it always is...
Good job, most people mess up Coil because they assume he's extremely sadistic in all his timelines, but it's stated in canon that he never does anything that couldn't be explained away. So you got his caution down perfectly.
 

Numen

Longtime Creeper
This is a very well written Coil.
Edit: getting some serious serial killer vibes from him. Good job.
 

Mgunh1

Mark XVII
Subscriber
I'm using, from what I can tell, the first CYOA:
The exact choices the CYOA character made don't seem all that necessary to post, but I can do it if people want me to. I think the ambiguity might add something to the story, but that's just me.
I honestly like this style, myself. I've always found stories told from the second person to be some of the most interesting, especially with an OP hero. It is a great way of avoiding all those annoying Mary Sue tropes, despite your MC being (if not exactly one) very close to sue-Dom (namely whenever these are from the SI's pov, it always seems to degenerate into 'aren't I so great? I have all these stupidly OP powers coming out of my arse, watch me succeed at everything!')
Which the first CYOA will always create, without exception... unless you dump the SI's pov and make the readers watch the events unfold from the eyes of those around them. Which you did, which is why I'm enjoying this so much :p
 
Chapter 4
It's rather difficult to write timeline shenanigans, especially when I'm trying to avoid the Timeline A: / Timeline B: format.
I'd appreciate feedback on how I did. If things are too confusing let me know, and I'll try to clarify what is happening.
Enjoy!

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If Thomas had to guess, he would say that things starting going downhill around when the building caught fire. It started simply enough. In one reality, he sat in his office, checking stocks and the local news. In the other, he was recieving a report from Mr. Pitter confirming, yes, his house was now a hole in the ground, from what appeared to be a gas explosion, when the base alarms started blaring in both his timelines. After a few moments, the noise cut off, and Thomas looked expectantly at the short man beside him.

"That was the fire alarm, sir." Mr. Pitter answered his silent question.

Thomas frowned as the icy grip of paranoia crept up his spine, "I do hope the base isn't going to burn down. It's mostly concrete after all."

"No sir, that seems unlikely." His secretary glanced nervously at the door before continuing, "Perhaps I should check in with the men... just in case?"

"Perhaps you should." Thomas replied dryly, waving his hand to dismiss the fool. He licked his lips in thought, quickly forming a plan, then closed the timeline. He split reality once again, demanding an update from his base commander in one, while furiously packing in the other. Thomas did not believe in coincidences. This was either a very odd day, or an attack. His survival instincts, refined through years of paranoia and a city of aberrations, screamed the latter.

Finally, after a tense few seconds, his base commander replied to his query, "Sir, someone pulled the fire alarm in the building above us. The fire department is en route, and people are evacuating."

"Is there actually a fire? Where did it originate?" Thomas demanded.

"Yes sir. Somewhere on the upper floors. We aren't sure of the exact location." came the stoic reply.

Thomas paused, quickly considering his options. "Consider this base compromised." he ordered, "Have a team clear the area around the rear exit. We are moving our operation to location Delta." If he was wrong about things, well, it was time for a move anyway. The new location was still under construction, but it was in a less strategically apparent position. Thomas should never have given in to convenience, this base's location was far too obvious!

In his other reality, Thomas finished piling his personal items into a duffel bag and left his office, barking orders at the nearest mercenary. "You!" he threw his bag at the man, "Find Creep. Tell him to change into civilian clothes and leave through the rear exit, then bring a van around to the front of the building and wait for my signal." The man snapped off a salute and hurried to complete his orders. Thomas whirled around to his secretary, "Mr. Pitter, I'm leaving the base. Have a plan drawn up to move our operation to location Delta within the next two days." Thomas left the room without waiting for acknowledgement.

His current base originated as an unfinished endbringer shelter. Thomas had repurposed it for his own needs, bricking up the stairwell that would have let large crowds of people enter the structure. There were only two ways in and out of the base. A heavily concealed underground tunnel that led to a warehouse half a block away, or the express elevator from the office building above. An elevator which required a keycard to use, and had a hidden fingerprint scanner for secondary verification. Thomas regretted not rigging the thing with a Claymore or five as he entered it, quickly stripping out of his Coil costume and dumping it before the doors closed. He swiped his card, held his finger over the scanner, and sighed in contentment as the elevator ascended.

Safe. All he had to do was blend in with the crowd of evacuating civilians. He wasn't Coil, he was just Thomas Calvert, here visiting his friend Claire Rutherford, who worked as a secretary for Lynx Tech on the third floor, for lunch.

Cover stories were a way of life for him at this point. Unfortunately, it did him little good, as he made it four steps out of the elevator before a cold hand clamped onto his neck, and he lost all feeling below his head. He collapsed in a boneless heap, groaning as his head connected with the floor.

"Hello Thomas." a woman's voice, colder than the depths of space, hissed into his ear, "I've been looking for you."

Thomas took little joy in having his paranoia confirmed. "Please help me!" he shouted in not entirely mock terror, "I've been a prisoner of the super-villain Coil for almost a year now! She's been blackmailing me into acting as her figurehead, but I managed to escape in the confusion of the fire!"

In his other reality he barked out orders on his intercom, "Take a team through the service elevator, full gear! Kill any woman you find, within fifty feet of the elevator! Now!" The attention he would draw from such overt action was meaningless next to someone knowing his civilian identity. He could survive any retaliation, so long as he had his cover intact.

In the meantime, his captured self desperately searched for a lifeline, "Are you with the Protectorate? They can confirm who I am! I can offer information on the real Coil! She's a thinker with super intuition, she can tell everything about you with just a glance! She probably has compromised every level of the local government through coercion and blackmail!"

The concrete floor scraped against Thomas' face as his captor flipped him over. He quickly memorized the appearance of his enemy, ruthlessly supressing his bruised pride at her age. "So you're just an innocent caught in all this?" she asked, her voice tinged with dark amusement as she laid a hand on his cheek, "Then I guess you won't mind if I unplug that power of yours, just in-"

Thomas slammed that timeline closed. He took a shaky breath, trying to calm his pounding heart. Was she bluffing, or could she interfere with powers somehow? No. It didn't matter, he had to assume she could. A single touch could be disastrous. He split reality once again.

In both timelines, he broadcasted a description throughout the base, "Our enemy is a young, short female. Asian descent, black hair with blue highlights. She is at least a Striker 6, able to paralyze with a touch. Try to take her alive, but lethal measures are authorized." He would prefer to interrogate her, discover how exactly she knew of him, but he would settle for a corpse at this point. The girl was too dangerous to live.

In one reality, he continued his orders, "Furthermore, we are locking down the base gentlemen. Anyone not currently assigned a task, is to guard the entrances in full gear." He then sat back at his desk and picked up his phone. It was time to call in more men.

In his other reality, he again began the process of packing away his personal items. Thomas suspected staying in his base would be the safest course of action, but keeping both his realities so close together was galling to him. Once he received an all clear from his ground team, he would take the rear exit and flee this position.

Circumstances refused to cooperate with his caution, however, as the base shook around him in both realities, and the fire alarm began blaring once again. A few moments later, Mr. Pitter rushed into his office, "The building above us has collapsed sir! The service elevator is on fire and smoke is starting to enter the base. We need to evacuate!"

Thomas frowned in frustration and considered his options. This base was not equipped with a self-destruct, but it did have a purge function for the local network. He would lose an uncomfortable amount of data but... With a sigh, he punched the codes in on both timelines. Hesitation would do him no good here.

"Mr. Pitter," in one timeline, Thomas dug through a nearby locker, and passed over a half dozen spare Coil outfits, "Have some men put those on. It's time to leave."

The other Thomas instead handed over a single outfit, "Put that on. It's time to leave." He opened the deepest drawer in his desk and removed a large bag, ignoring the frightened little man complying with his orders. He entered his personal bathroom and unzipped the bag, revealing a kevlar jacket, a black shirt and cargo pants, a foldable tinker-tech rifle, and a balaclava.

It's not paranoia if people are really out to get you.

Fully disguised as just another mercenary, Thomas left his office to join the group Mr. Pitter had assembled. In his other reality, Thomas was already making his way through the long tunnel that led to the rear exit, surrounded by his mercenaries, of which, six were dressed in 'Coil' outfits. The path was lit by small bulbs, their soft glow providing just enough light to navigate by. This path was rarely used by his men, and he could see where the boot prints of the clearing party had disturbed the dust.

Thomas made it to the halfway point, while his Mercenary self only just entered the tunnel, when the lights flickered and died. A tense moment passed with a frantic rustling of gear, before each mercenary flicked on a light. The tunnel was wide enough for four people to stand shoulder to shoulder, so their formation was a simple square, with the disguised Coils in the middle, each protected by a man with a large gun. The strategy was perfect for defending against a lone striker, who would have no idea which Coil was the correct one, and have few options for closing the gap.

It did absolutely nothing to defend against the concrete ceiling melting, and crashing down upon them like a waterfall.

A plethora of screams were cut off as the slurry surrounded each man and hardened, while tinker-tech weapons were crushed into powder under the weight of hard stone. Thomas hurled the man in front of him into the wave of grey liquid, and trod on his back as he leapt past the chaos. He managed to touch solid ground, breaking into a roll to conserve momentum, before a river of concrete flowed around his legs and locked him into place.

A small shape dropped into view, illuminated only by a fallen flashlight, and slowly approached him. Thomas could barely make out a pleased smile, before he closed the timeline.

He split his remaining timeline once again, giving orders in both. "She can manipulate the concrete in the ceiling and floor," he whispered to his minions, "Spread out. She is hiding in the ceiling. Once the lights flicker, open fire immediately."

In one reality, he went forward with his men, in the other he lingered at the tunnel entrance. His enemy clearly had some way of identifying him, but while his disguise was useless, his gun would work just fine.

The lights flickered, in both timelines. Shouts of "Open fire!" echoed up and down the tunnel, and the crackling screech of tinker-tech lasers joined the din. The ceiling disintegrated as heat ripped away layers of concrete, and for a moment Thomas felt triumph. Then, from within the storm of laser-fire, a rippling wave of pressure tore downwards, and through the assembled soldiers. A crack of displaced air set Thomas' ears ringing, and the shock wave hurled him off his feet.

In his other timeline, he listened carefully, but only heard the constant whine of lasers. "Do you have a visual?" he shouted urgently into his radio, "Is the target-" The ceiling above him melted, and Thomas reflexively closed the timeline, as a hand reached through the liquid towards his face.

Thomas groaned as he rolled to his feet, shakily examining his surroundings. His mercenaries were all in various states of disorientation, their weapons broken upon the ground. Thomas glanced at his own rifle, shattered and useless, hanging off his shoulder. He lacked the clarity of a concussion-free timeline, and could only stare blankly, as a wave of concrete detached from the wall and surrounded him.

Trapped! Vulnerable! Adrenaline thundered through his veins. He thrashed at the hard walls, screaming himself hoarse, until a lack of oxygen ate away at his consciousness.

He closed his eyes, welcoming the darkness that consumed his mind. Anything to escape this fear, this cage, this tomb.
 
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Kolarthecool

Burning bright in the dark of night.
Scary.

Truly it is a sad day when upstanding citizens like Mr. Calvert are menanced by parahumans when the dastardly villain Coil lays just a few meters away.
 

EyeStar

I can see my house from here!
As far as a review of your timeline style:

I think your format in describing the alternate timelines was pretty good. It was fairly intuitive to follow and the opening and closing of timelines was pretty clear. The only thing that I don't think worked too well was the transition of one timeline to another. The simultaneity of both timelines was not expressed very clearly and the "In the other timeline, ..." felt like it was starting a new attempt at something rather than adapting a plan already in motion. That said it's very smooth overall and is much better than the Timeline A, Timeline B stuff. Keep up the good work!
 
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