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Local Rocket Surgeon
During a few recent threads involving the Starcraft ‘verse, I found myself having to flip through "Queen of Blades" by Aaron Rosenberg on more then one occasion just to find one miniscule quote or the like. Needless to say, it's quite tiring in the long run. It's far easier to do the same with the novels I have stored in eBook format.
So, I decided to re-read the novel, and quote everything that might be of importance. And since I'm already in the process of doing that, why not transcribe it all here while I'm at it? Along with comments on this and that and perhaps even some analysis.
The novel itself is... mediocre at parts, below that in others. The author doesn't seem to have much of a sense of scale and the whole military aspect is poorly written. Not to mention that the author also seems to have a questionable knowledge about Starcraft as a whole. That latter part will be elaborated upon during the course of this novel.
A few notes before I start. For the most part I will be quoting entire paragraphs even if the interesting bit is just a sentence long, in the hopes of giving the important bit of text a little context and to help people looking for it find it easier.
I will also be keeping track of dates, timeframes and the like, even if at first it might seem as if they’re pointless. Basically I want to peg a hard timeframe to episode two from the game (which this novel covers). I’ve also found that sometimes when you don’t keep track of time, you regret it later on, because it could’ve been used to measure faster then light travel and a number of other things.
And yes, I know, my thread regarding “Firstborn” is still somewhat uncompleted, but I’m sure I’ll get to that at somepoint.
Prologue
What’s worth noting is the efficiency and speed of the communication. There seems to be literally no lag time between orders given and orders carried out, both in the case of cerebrate to overlord communication, overmind to cerebrate communication as well as overmind to minion communication. Yet the overmind was situated on Char during the fall of Tarsonis. Basically, their telepathic communication reaches across interstellar distances with very little lag time. Though so far I haven’t been able to peg down any hard figures for this, suffice to say that they seem to be so small that you could very well peg them as ‘instant’.
It’s a little unclear of exactly how and why it was vaporized. The Protoss were clearly responsible for it and it’s more specifically said their landing ships caused it. Giving how that is termed, my first impression was that this might’ve been caused by their thrusters. But then again, that’s a lot of energy to be coming from the thrusters of landing ships, they’d literally level anything directly beneath them. Which is stranger still when you consider that shuttles in-game, and in descriptions regarding their other vessels – there usually is no downward thrust from their engines at all. But then neither would it make sense to assume it was weaponry that did it. Why would the Protoss fire into a lake for no reason? What’s the goal behind vaporizing a lake and glassing the ground beneath that? Creating a safe LZ perhaps? Where you can guarantee no Zerg are burrowed and lying in wait? It would make some sense since turning that much water into vapor would cause a serious case of bad visibility as a side effect.
All in all, that’s a lot of energy injected into a lake for reasons that aren’t entirely clear.
Chapter 1
Edited in Char instead of Chau Sara. Honestly, how do you get those two planets mixed up?
Also, a little info on Terran warp-travel. Apparently it doesn’t take place in normal reality.
That’s enough for now. In the next few chapters the action is going to be picking up rather dramatically, so expect more interesting stuff in those. All in all this novel has quite a lot worth quoting compared to titles like "Nova", "Firstborn" and "Shadow Hunters".
So, I decided to re-read the novel, and quote everything that might be of importance. And since I'm already in the process of doing that, why not transcribe it all here while I'm at it? Along with comments on this and that and perhaps even some analysis.
The novel itself is... mediocre at parts, below that in others. The author doesn't seem to have much of a sense of scale and the whole military aspect is poorly written. Not to mention that the author also seems to have a questionable knowledge about Starcraft as a whole. That latter part will be elaborated upon during the course of this novel.
A few notes before I start. For the most part I will be quoting entire paragraphs even if the interesting bit is just a sentence long, in the hopes of giving the important bit of text a little context and to help people looking for it find it easier.
I will also be keeping track of dates, timeframes and the like, even if at first it might seem as if they’re pointless. Basically I want to peg a hard timeframe to episode two from the game (which this novel covers). I’ve also found that sometimes when you don’t keep track of time, you regret it later on, because it could’ve been used to measure faster then light travel and a number of other things.
And yes, I know, my thread regarding “Firstborn” is still somewhat uncompleted, but I’m sure I’ll get to that at somepoint.
Prologue
”Carefully,” warned the brood’s cerebrate, observing their progress through the overlord floating just above the sphere. Because the cerebrate itself could not move, the airborne overlords served as its eyes, ears, and mouth. “The Chrysalis must not be harmed!”
Obedient to its will, the ultralisks shifted slightly closer and slowed their pace, allowing more time for the brood before them to open the way.
Alright, here’s a little something that might give us a better idea on how zerg communication works and what their command structure looks like. The basics are pretty much the same as were already elaborated upon in the game and the manual. The overmind controls everything, he’s at the top of the proverbial pyramid, issuing orders via a form of telepathy. Beneath him are the cerebrates and those in turn control a number of overlords. A quite simplistic system.“We have it, Master,” the cerebrate announced in the depths of its own mind. “We have your prize.”
“Good.” The reply echoed from within, rising from the deep well of the zerg hive-mind. “You must watch over the Chrysalis, and ensure that no harm comes to the creature within it. Go now and keep safe my prize.”
What’s worth noting is the efficiency and speed of the communication. There seems to be literally no lag time between orders given and orders carried out, both in the case of cerebrate to overlord communication, overmind to cerebrate communication as well as overmind to minion communication. Yet the overmind was situated on Char during the fall of Tarsonis. Basically, their telepathic communication reaches across interstellar distances with very little lag time. Though so far I haven’t been able to peg down any hard figures for this, suffice to say that they seem to be so small that you could very well peg them as ‘instant’.
A mentioned of a vaporized lake. It’s not really important but I thought it very strange, and that’s also why I’m bringing it up.On the Zerg marched, the city burning around them. At last the Swarm had gathered itself within a vast crater where once the city’s vaunted lake had stretched. Now the surface was glass-smooth, seared by the force of the protoss’s landing ships and unmarred by the heavy feet that had trekked across toward the city under siege.
It’s a little unclear of exactly how and why it was vaporized. The Protoss were clearly responsible for it and it’s more specifically said their landing ships caused it. Giving how that is termed, my first impression was that this might’ve been caused by their thrusters. But then again, that’s a lot of energy to be coming from the thrusters of landing ships, they’d literally level anything directly beneath them. Which is stranger still when you consider that shuttles in-game, and in descriptions regarding their other vessels – there usually is no downward thrust from their engines at all. But then neither would it make sense to assume it was weaponry that did it. Why would the Protoss fire into a lake for no reason? What’s the goal behind vaporizing a lake and glassing the ground beneath that? Creating a safe LZ perhaps? Where you can guarantee no Zerg are burrowed and lying in wait? It would make some sense since turning that much water into vapor would cause a serious case of bad visibility as a side effect.
All in all, that’s a lot of energy injected into a lake for reasons that aren’t entirely clear.
A description of what zerg warp travel looks like. The description is pretty much the same as the visuals in the game cinematics. It also appears to be quite different from what the Terrans use, visually at least, as there’s never been a mention of a giant swirl or anything like that when they warp.As the cerebrate swelled with pride, a great darkness descended upon the crater, a shadow of the mass that drifted into view high above them. Beyond the upper reaches of the planet’s dying atmosphere hung a massive storm, a swirl of orange and violet gases that spun around strange flickering lights. They moved faster and faster, the colors merging in their fury, until the center of the storm collapsed in upon itself, light and color giving way to a shadowy circle far darker then even the space hovering beyond.
“Now you have grown strong enough to bear the rigors of warp travel with the Swarm,” the Overmind stated, its words sending a thrum of power through the Swarm. “Thus we shall make our exit from this blasted world and secure the Chrysalis within the Hive Cluster upon the planet char.”
Chapter 1
A timeframe given. Though it’s not certain what it refers to. Almost two months since what? The fall of the Confederacy and the establishment of the Terran Dominion? More to come later in this same chapter.“…but of course Mengsk – pardon me, Emperor Arcturus the First – claims this was all necessary. According to his spokesperson, the new Terran Dominion is doing everything necessary to remove the alien threat and make the colonies safe once more. It has been almost two months, however. In this reporter’s opinion…”
So Raynor steals 13 vessels from the Dylarian shipyards, the same shipyards that are featured in Brood Wars. Not sure exactly what type of vessels these are. But they’re almost certainly all military vessels, since the Dylarian shipyards is a military installation. In Brood War you steal 25 battlecruisers from the place, for instance.Still laughing, Raynor stood up and crossed the room, Duke’s short fuse had cost him the Hyperion, and Mengsk had received the first public defeat of his new Terran Dominion before he’d even declared its formation. Raynor had left with the Hyperion and a dozen other ships, his own private fleet, leaving Duke bound and gagged behind him.
Alright, so Raynor has been cruising around for six weeks since he left Mengsk. This gives a good starting point for mapping out how long a timeframe episode 2 occupies. Because leaving Mengsk was the last thing you did in episode 1.The question, however, was what to do after he deserted. He hadn’t thought much about it at the time, since he’d planned to go off alone. But having others with him changed that. They looked up to him, depended upon him, sat patiently waiting for his orders. And he didn’t have any. Oh, they’d stolen the ships, of course. And they’d hit a few outposts, singed a few patrols. But he didn’t know what to do next. He didn’t know where he was going. It had been six weeks he still had no idea.
The first description of the planet, which I initially forgot to include.Stepping up beside Horner, he began inputting details into the navigational system. “Warm,” he muttered to himself as he typed, “though not unbearably so. Air a bit sticky and filled with ash. One visible sun. Two small moons. Red ringed planet nearby. Covered in ash, pale gray, at least an inch thick. Some hills and small mountains, black rock rather then dirt. Fire and smoke all around. Probably volcanoes everywhere. No vegetation or animal life.” The terms came back to him easily, a holdover from his days as a marshal on Chau Sara describing plots for potential colony use. He finished typing in the description and stepped back as he let the computer search its files for a match, staring off into space through the wide portholes that lined the front of the room.
Confirmation on the fact that the Confederacy fell six weeks ago.Tarsonis has been overrun. The zerg had taken the entire planet. It had been six weeks.
More descriptions on Char. But wait, didn’t he just say that there were no animals and plant life on the planet? Curious, since it does have a semi-breathable atmosphere. I’m no expert on ecospheres of planets though, could the constant volcanic activity explain this somehow?He recalled the feel of his feet on the ground, of the ash swirling around him. “Normal. Full Terran gravity.” Then he remembered something else. “High sulfur content in the air. High oxygen count, too.” He had felt almost light-headed when breathing, despite the ash’s almost choking him.
Edited in Char instead of Chau Sara. Honestly, how do you get those two planets mixed up?
So, a mention of a scoutship with faster then light travel capability. Nothing especially interesting there. But I thought it might be prudent to bring up all new ship-classes and the like. One question though, is this ship part of his fleet or is it part of the fighter/dropship compliment on his BC?His first impulse was to grab a scoutship and head out alone, at maximum burn. But that wouldn’t have been smart. Tarsonis had fallen to the Swarm, and Kerrigan with it. She couldn’t have escaped them. That meant they had her. It would explain the nightmarish figures in his dreams—zerg, but more so, somehow more powerful and more terrifying then the creatures ha had already faced.
Two things to note here. First off, a little over 400 people occupying and piloting the 13 vessels. That’s quite a low figure. Not only out-of-universe speaking, but in Liberty’s Crusade it was said that each Battlecruiser housed 500 or more people.Two hours later the Hyperion prepared to jump, the rest of Raynor’s rebellious little fleet trailing behind it. Ten people had left before the ships could depart, out of over four hundred. The rest had signed on for the mission and whatever came out of it. Most had been excited jittery, and he knew only part of that was the thought of rescuing fallen comrades. They were all just pleased he had taken decisive action. He was leading, and they were ready to follow. He just hoped they weren’t following to their dooms.
Sitting in the captain’s chair on the Hyperion, Raynor watched as space folded around them, letting the massive ship glide from normal reality and accelerate rapidly toward the ash-covered world of his dreams.
Also, a little info on Terran warp-travel. Apparently it doesn’t take place in normal reality.
That’s enough for now. In the next few chapters the action is going to be picking up rather dramatically, so expect more interesting stuff in those. All in all this novel has quite a lot worth quoting compared to titles like "Nova", "Firstborn" and "Shadow Hunters".

