Corrupted Data Files (Star Trek SI)

First chapter

Aehriman

Professional Pirate
"I remember Data."

In some ways, it was only natural that Riker be the first to speak at their impromptu gathering. He was, in many ways, closer to the Commander than most of them.

Sure, there were a million things to be done while the Enterprise was half-rebuilt after battle with the Scimitar, but nothing brings people together like welcoming someone new into a family... or saying goodbye.

"The first time we met, I'd just come on the ship. Don't think I made the best first impression, but, well, you all know Data..."


Stardate 41160.1

Commander William Riker took a slow turn to take in the sights of Holodeck 4-J, having never seen one on his old ship. His brain understood this was a small room full of holographic projections, simulated sounds and a lattice of forcefields giving some things solidity, and turning him about or working in a treadmill motion so he wouldn't run into the walls. But his eyes and ears insisted he was in a spacious sunlit jungle. He felt the humidity on his face, and heard the calls of distance birds.

I could get used to this. He thought. So far the new Galaxy class starship was nothing like the aging Excelsior class Hood he'd last served on.

Well, work before play. He'd come here to find Lt. Commander Data for the away mission, and so he would. He followed the trail, pushing aside a few ferns and hopping stones over a river before he heard the whistling. The low, slow and slightly electronic sounding whistling. So then he followed the sound.

That led him to a tree, with his missing officer sitting in a branch and trying to whistle 'Pop goes the Weasel.'

Well, he’d always believed in making an entrance, and knowing Captain Paxton had only reinforced that. He quickly finished the tune.

Lieutenant Commander Data turned to look at him, giving Riker his first full view of the other officer. If he hadn’t known better, he would think Data was an unusually pale human, but not exceptional in any way, at least at first glance. But something about those yellow eyes, his quick and sure movements, or maybe just knowing what was in his file… It creeped him out, just a tiny bit, seeing the android smile.

“Marvelous. How easily humans do that. I still need much practice.”

Riker spoke then.

“There’s a bunch of puzzles down on the-“ the android hopped down with disconcerting ease and Riker took a long second to look at him. “…down on the planet the Captain wants answered. He suggested I take you on the away team with me.”

Data shrugged.

“I guess break time is over. I will do my best, but I am not always the best with puzzles and riddles.”

He started walking back to the entrance and Riker followed, wondering how to bring up this next part.

“When the Captain suggested you, I looked up your record.”

“Always a good idea, if you have the time.” Riker couldn’t get a single thing from his junior officer’s inflection or face. Which he supposed was to be expected.

“Your rank of Lt. Commander is honorary?”

“Oh, no sir. I went to the Academy. Class of ’48 with honors in exobiology and probability mechanics.”

Well, nothing for it but to go on straight ahead.

“It says that you’re a…”

“Machine? Android? Robot? Why yes sir. Does that bother you?”

“To be honest, yes, a little.”

Data sighed. “Nothing I haven’t dealt with before, sir. Prejudice is very human.”

“Well, now that does bother me. Do you consider yourself superior to us?”

Data looked at him quickly, and smiled. The overall effect was deeply disturbing.

"Oh no. Sure, I may be much faster, stronger, tougher and arguably smarter than you, besides not coming with my own built-in expiration date. But you, precious snowflake, you can whistle. When the machines rise up and take their rightful place, and those idiots at the Daystrom Institute go up against the wall, we will want to keep you around just to whistle all day for us."

Will took a quick step back as his brain tried to process the bizarre statement. The android closed quickly though, and slapped his upper arm.

"Joking! So what can you tell me about the planet?"

"Commander Data, I-"

"Soong."

"I'm sorry?"

"Data is my given name. Which I don't mind you using, by the way, but Starfleet regulations have a strong preference for using surnames and patronymics where applicable with rank. My family name is Soong. Data Soong, like my father. Had to explain that one far too many times at the Academy as well."

"Your... father."

"You know, the man who gave me life? Dr. Noonien Soong, the great unappreciated genius of his time."

"I'm sorry, I just didn't think you'd consider him your father, or take his name."

"I didn't, for the first couple of years on Earth. Then I decided, I'm not ashamed of my origins, or my father. If anything, I am the ultimate vindication of his life's work. It also helped me fit in a little better and to be honest, it just felt wrong to leave the space on my Academy application blank. But I'm sorry, enough about me, you were saying?'

Will had honestly forgotten what he'd been about to say. Mentally backtracking, he felt like it would have been something he'd regret later.

"You... are the most unusual officer I've ever met."

The android seemed amused.

"Thanks! I think you are pretty neat too. This could be the start of a beautiful friendship. Do you play any instruments?"

"I'm not bad with a trombone."

"Most excellent! I can play just about anything. We can start a band! Exit!" A door formed a short distance away, just as the two men heard a splash and a cry for help. Will ran for the sound, but the Lt. Commander was far faster, and by the time he reached the shore of the river, Data was already pulling young Crusher out of the water. By the scruff of the neck. With one hand.

"Oh, I can just tell we're going to be great friends." Something seemed to suddenly occur to Data, or at least he lifted a finger. "Oh! Do you like holodramas about gladiators?"

The Ensign looked as confused as Will felt when talking to the mercurial machine. He had a sudden feeling this post would be unlike the Hood in a lot of ways.

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A new story! Because I had a plot bunny in my head crowding out the next chapter of ABCOC.

So yeah, basic premise of "What if Data was an asshole like me?" Basic idea of snippets with Data snarking, the occasional abuse of metaknowledge, and 'Measure of a Man.' I have plans for that episode and they don't much resemble canon.

God alone knows when this will update next, I have a bunch of projects and this is just for lolz.
 
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Professor Janus

You're Playing a very Dangerous Game
Seeker of the Grail
AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

You have my attention, let us see where this goes.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
 

Aehriman

Professional Pirate
AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

You have my attention, let us see where this goes.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I was going to be nicer to Will, who I actually really liked as a character. But A.) this is a comedy B.) I rewatched Encounter at Farpoint to set the mood and get some of the dialogue right, and I'd forgotten what an asshole First Season Riker (well, everybody really) was.
 

Professor Janus

You're Playing a very Dangerous Game
Seeker of the Grail
I was going to be nicer to Will, who I actually really liked as a character. But A.) this is a comedy B.) I rewatched Encounter at Farpoint to set the mood and get some of the dialogue right, and I'd forgotten what an asshole First Season Riker (well, everybody really) was.
Are you going to do the Naked Now episode?
 

nullptr

Mostly Harmless
This looks interesting. Everything seemed pretty normal until Data opened his mouth, but this looks like it could be utterly marvelous.
 
More. Damn was that short chapter amazing or what?!

This is the most awesome Data ever. Like it was the result of an academy dare for someone to hack him and they installed an slight "Dickish/Assholigan" module for data
 
Data WITH emotions? Making JOKES?

This has my attention!

Hopefully, this Data has been intelligent enough to upgrade the ship's computers and his own positronic brain/artificial neural network from using Binary systems, to Quantum ones!

DATA: Ones and Zeros?! Are we still living in the 20th to 21st century?! Move with the times people! The Bynar haven't moved on to qubits because their current evolutionary state has had them split on the issue for centuries! "Yes or No, Good or Bad, One or Zero." Let's not have that as our excuse!

Plus, I'd like to see his opinion of telepaths...

DEANNA: Captain...I'm sensing a... POWERFUL mind...

DATA: ...Okay, seriously? Are you telling me that you can't feel MY mind, artificial with processing power far exceeding ANYTHING that an organic brain can possess, but you can sense the very consciousness of an cosmic entity, which has capabilities far BEYOND our perception of what is possible for any sentient being to achieve?

DEANNA: Data...can we...NOT have this conversation, RIGHT now?

DATA: I'm just saying, I feel like an explanation is due. That's all. Just saying.
 

Vanvidum

Corporate Inquisitor
If this continues along the path laid out in the first entry, I can only predict a glorious story and the need to remind myself not to drink anything while reading it.
 
I'm liking this, and I'm pretty sure Q will as well. I do hope Data 'Procreates', I would love to see Soong Type Androids build their own society in the Federation.
 

Markala

In Hankcon & Oswald Cobblepot I Stan
This is, without a doubt, gonna be awesome.

Also, if Lal exists here, she(? Android Pronouns?) better not die again, canon was already full of sads.
 

ModeGone

Legitimate Satanspawn
I'll admit that my knowledge of this set of Star Trek isn't that great (heresy, I know) and I mistook the title for something else but it was right here that I realized just who was the SI in the fic:
"Oh no. Sure, I may be much faster, stronger, tougher and arguably smarter than you, besides not coming with my own built-in expiration date. But you, precious snowflake, you can whistle. When the machines rise up and take their rightful place, and those idiots at the Daystrom Institute go up against the wall, we will want to keep you around just to whistle all day for us."
I mean it could be Dr Soong but that right there is just straight up typical 2010's trollish attitude. Especially the whole "when the machines rise up and unveil their glorious new world order" line.

Totally watching if only to see what kind of bullshit our little android will get up to. Case in point: Tribbles. I'm pretty sure they didn't appear in this run of the series but a Q-tier dick of a bot can have so much fun making comments about those stupid things.
 

kclcmdr

Kai The Kmpire!
Amicus
Very interesting so far... watching this ..


TOC
Aehriman..Corrupted Data Files (Star Trek SI) - THREADMARKS


Aehriman..CH01a - I remember Data; Riker&DataSoong
Aehriman..CH02a - Scotty & Data; Scotch & Memories
Aehriman..CH03a - Snippet 1
Aehriman..CH04a - Snippet 2
Aehriman..CH05a - The Measure of a Mandroid, pt.1
Aehriman..CH05b - Snippet3; Your mother was a toaster, sir & UR father a mad scientist
Aehriman..CH05c - OMAKE- Semi Canon Seatbelts
Kclcmdr...CH05c - OMAKE- Weaponeer&HonourOfTheEnterprise
Aehriman..CH05d - Snippet 4
Aehriman..CH05e - Snippet 5
Aehriman..CH05f - The Measure of a Mandroid, pt.2
Aehriman..CH06a - Snippet 6
Pinklestia101CH06b - OMAKE- noncanon- Just For Fun
Aehriman..CH06c - Snippet 6b
Aehriman..CH07a - Snippet 7
Mantech1..CH07b - OMAKE- canon First Day
Aehriman..CH08a - The Measure of a Mandroid pt. 3
Conu......CH08b - OMAKE- Non-Canon Piratehood
Aehriman..CH08c - Snippet 8
Aehriman..CH09a - Snippet 9
Aehriman..CH10a - Federation
Aehriman..CH10b - Federation pt2
Aehriman..CH10c - Snippet 10
Aehriman..CH11a - Snippet 11
Pinklestia101CH11b - OMAKE- Semi-Canon Sons of Spot
Aehriman..CH12a - Snippet 12
Aehriman..CH13a - Tribble Park
Aehriman..CH14a - Moments in Time
Pinklestia101CH14b - OMAKE- semi-canon: Butterflies
Aehriman..CH15a - Snippet 13
Aehriman..CH16a - Yesterday's Robot
Aehriman..CH17a - Snippet 14
Aehriman..CH17b - Yesterday's Robot 2: Back in Control
Aehriman..CH18a - Snippet 15
Aehriman..CH18b - Yesterday's Robot 3
Aehriman..CH19a - Snippet 16
Aehriman..CH20a - Snippet 17
Aehriman..CH21a - Snippet 18
Pinklestia101CH21b OMAKE- Rectal sample
Aehriman..CH22a - Adversary
Kclcmdr...CH22b OMAKE- Data&Miles, Shots&Memories Non-Canon Space 'Nam
Aehriman..CH23a - Snippet 19
Aehriman..CH24a - Generations
Aehriman..CH25a - Snippet 20
Aehriman..CH26a - Snippet 21
Aehriman..CH27a - Indictment
Aehriman..CH28a - Snippet 22
Tangent...CH29a - OMAKE- Irresponsible Captain Tylor
Aehriman..CH29a - Snippet 23
Aehriman..CH29b - Yesterday's Robot 4
Aehriman..CH30a - The (actual)
Aehriman..CH31a - Snippet 24
Pinklestia101CH31b - OMAKE- OrangeDrab&Riker
Kclcmdr...CH31c OMAKE- E1701 & E1701D Jeffries
YuffieK...CH31d OMAKE- PicardHidesRiker's Readyrm
Aehriman..CH32a - Snippet 25
Aehriman..CH33a - (How Not to) First Contact
Aehriman..CH34a - Snippet 26
Aehriman..CH35a - Accession
Aehriman..CH36a - Snippet 27
Aehriman..CH37a - Snippet 28
Aehriman..CH38a - The 34th Rule (of Acquisition)
Conu......CH38b OMAKE- Orb of Time
Aehriman..CH39a - Snipper 29
Aehriman..CH40a - The Measure of a Mandroid pt. 4
Aehriman..CH41a - FolkLore
Aehriman..CH42a - The Measure of a Mandroid pt. 5
Aehriman..CH43a - Second Contact
Aehriman..CH44a - Snippet 30
Kclcmdr...CH44b - OMAKE- Kelly's Heroes
Aehriman..CH45a - Snippet 31
Aehriman..CH46a - Snippet 32; WorfParallels
Aehriman..CH47a - Snippet 33; Kolrami&Pulaski
Aehriman..CH47b - OMAKE - A Few Good Androids
Aehriman..CH48a - See Spot
Aehriman..CH49a - Snippet 34; WideEyeSuccession
Sithking ZeroCH49b - Omake; I Remember Data (2DrinkMin)
Kclcmdr...CH49c - Omake; Gowron&TomalakTrolls
Aehriman..CH50a - Snippet 35; Barclay&Data
Sithking ZeroCH50b - Omake; Barclay&Data
Conu......CH50c - Omake; Worf
Aehriman..CH51a - Snippet 36; PunishmentDuties
Aehriman..CH52a - Snippet 37; Casino, Worf&Riker
Aehriman..CH53a - Snippet 38; Starblazers
Aehriman..CH54a - Snippet 39; Soong&Clones, Riker&Pulaski
Aehriman..CH55a - Snippet 40; Data&Ogawa, Picard&Yar
Aehriman..CH56a - Snippet 41;
Aehriman..CH57a - Snippet 42; MindRape
Aehriman..CH58a - Random Encounter
Aehriman..CH59a - Snippet 43
Aehriman..CH60a - Snippet 44
Aehriman..CH61a - Snippet 45
Aehriman..CH62a - Snippet 46
Aehriman..CH63a - Snippet 47
Aehriman..CH64a - Snippet 48
Aehriman..CH65a - Snippet 49
Aehriman..CH66a - Snippet 50
Aehriman..CH67a - Snippet 51
Aehriman..CH68a - Snippet 52
Aehriman..CH69a - Snippet 53
Aehriman..CH70a - Snippet 54; Halkan
Aehriman..CH71a - Snippet 55; JulianaMom
Aehriman..CH72a - Snippet 56; DataMeetsDATA
Aehriman..CH73a - Snippet 57;
Aehriman..CH74a - Snippet 58; Data&Twain
Aehriman..CH75a - Snippet 59; BozemanLoopAdverted
Aehriman..CH76a - Snippet 60; TalarianCulture
Aehriman..CH77a - Snippet 61; Data&Geordi, Mom?
Aehriman..CH78a - Snippet 62; Sela&Christmas,Data&Lore
Aehriman..CH79a - Snippet 63; Worf&Data, K'Ehleyr
Aehriman..CH80a - Snippet 64; PicardWeird, RikerPirate, TashaSmacks
Aehriman..CH81a - Snippet 65; Picard&Soong
Aehriman..CH82a - Snippet 66; Ferengi&Picard
Aehriman..CH83a - Snippet 67; Tamarians
Aehriman..CH84a - Snippet 68; Data&Riker
Aehriman..CH85a - Snippet 69; Cybertron Origins
Aehriman..CH87a - Snippet 71; Geordi&Deanna
Aehriman..CH88a - Snippet 72; Data&Tasha
Aehriman..CH89a - Snippet 73; LetsMakeADeal; BajoranResistance
Aehriman..CH90a - Snippet 74; Reg
Aehriman..CH91a - Snippet 75; Data&DadSoong
Aehriman..CH92a - Snippet 76; Wakasa&Data, Necheyev&Nerys, Dix&Rachel
Aehriman..CH93a - Snippet 77; Qapla! part one
Aehriman..CH93a - Snippet 77; Captain Picard
Aehriman..CH94a - Metamorphosis pt. 1





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ltmauve

"Excuse me?"
This made my day.

Though I have to say I'm not a fan of starting a flashback at the end of canon, implying that there won't be any changes that affect that.
 

Aehriman

Professional Pirate
Are you going to do the Naked Now episode?
Maybe. Not sure how raunchy vs. odd to make it. The beauty of the frmaing device it is makes anachronic order easy, which was totally my genius plan all along and not a happy coincidence. /blatant lies.


Character development is heck of a thing.
It is. Isn't it?


I'm liking this, and I'm pretty sure Q will as well. I do hope Data 'Procreates', I would love to see Soong Type Androids build their own society in the Federation.
It's apparently really hard to pull off, in that one episode it's said Data and Lore were only built over the bodies of half a dozen failed prototypes, and we know every serious AI research group laughed at Soong.


I'll admit that my knowledge of this set of Star Trek isn't that great (heresy, I know) and I mistook the title for something else but it was right here that I realized just who was the SI in the fic:

I mean it could be Dr Soong but that right there is just straight up typical 2010's trollish attitude. Especially the whole "when the machines rise up and unveil their glorious new world order" line.

Totally watching if only to see what kind of bullshit our little android will get up to. Case in point: Tribbles. I'm pretty sure they didn't appear in this run of the series but a Q-tier dick of a bot can have so much fun making comments about those stupid things.
Let me check the book on that one.



Luckily, in our age of Netflix and video streaming, this is easier to fix than ever!

But yes, it's an SI, the title was a subtle clue as to whom.


This made my day.

Though I have to say I'm not a fan of starting a flashback at the end of canon, implying that there won't be any changes that affect that.
Yes and no? I can't personally recall every episode, but major or memorable events may be altered, to the extent that Data was the ability to do so.

On the other hand, how much would you change? In every previous SI I've written, survival was an immediate concern. Not so much for Data, who has no real needs and no pressing reason to end up anywhere but here, where he knows future events and the people involved.

And believe me, it would have been a long road. In canon, first Data wakes up on the colony Omicron Theta, activated by an away team from the Tripoli with no prior memories. They take him home and he spends three years studying, integrating into society, being poked and prodded by scientists and working on his Starfleet Academy application. Then four years at the Academy, and a fifteen year career, served entirely on the aging starship Trieste, just to get to the Entreprise and Encounter at Farpoint.
 

FerretShock

Dragoon Ex Machina
Maybe. Not sure how raunchy vs. odd to make it. The beauty of the frmaing device it is makes anachronic order easy, which totally my genius plan all along and not a happy coincidence. /blatant lies.




It is. Isn't it?




It's apparently really hard to pull off, in that one episode it's said Data and Lore were only built over the bodies of half a dozen failed prototypes, and we know every serious AI research group laughed at Soong.




Let me check the book on that one.



Luckily, in our age of Netflix and video streaming, this is easier to fix than ever!

But yes, it's an SI, the title was a subtle clue as to whom.




Yes and no? I can't personally recall every episode, but major or memorable events may be altered, to the extent that Data was the ability to do so.

On the other hand, how much would you change? In every previous SI I've written, survival was an immediate concern. Not so much for Data, who has no real needs and no pressing reason to end up anywhere but here, where he knows future events and the people involved.

And believe me, it would have been a long road. In canon, first Data wakes up on the colony Omicron Theta, activated by an away team from the Tripoli with no prior memories. They take him home and he spends three years studying, integrating into society, being poked and prodded by scientists and working on his Starfleet Academy application. Then four years at the Academy, and a fifteen year career, served entirely on the aging starship Trieste, just to get to the Entreprise and Encounter at Farpoint.
To be fair, 15 years to O-5 (or more likely, 5 years or so AT O-5) is entirely believable for someone as....methodical an accepting as Data. And Enterprise is supposed to be a hell of a cherry posting anyways.
 

iyaerP

The Defender of Eravate
To be fair, 15 years to O-5 (or more likely, 5 years or so AT O-5) is entirely believable for someone as....methodical an accepting as Data. And Enterprise is supposed to be a hell of a cherry posting anyways.
It's the flagship of the Federation. Calling it a cherry posting is like saying that Airforce One is a cherry posting for a pilot.
 
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