AnotherSetOfEyes
Eye can see you...
Love the shift in calling her Liang here.“Parents can be hell,” Liang said slowly, voice strangely small.
Oooh, shoutout to Luminous?
Love the shift in calling her Liang here.“Parents can be hell,” Liang said slowly, voice strangely small.
Oooh, shoutout to Luminous?
Give her some SCBA gear and an earpiece to receive targets and she could monitor audio, pick off targets, even just level an entire neighbourhood while being essentially undetectable and invulnerable. God damn she is versatile.Concrete and metal parted around me with the ease of a shark slicing through water, only the top of my head visible to allow sight and breathing as I approached my target.
Something I hadn't expected bloomed in my mind, an indecipherably complex device with the shape and dimensions of an egyption sarcophagus.
I'm sorry, you've got some shady handoff involving evil mercenaries, weird future-tech sarcophagi, and an old professor - I am now picturing him as Indiana Jones.The strange device in the van above me was perfectly fitted to the woman they were holding hostage, and I'd bet my left boob that one of the other vans had one just like it for the old professor-looking guy they were holding.
God DAMN she is versatile.Before they'd advanced a single step, my hand touched the underside of the van once again and I used my power to seal it completely shut. I slipped underground and advanced to the next vehicle in the line, but there wasn't anything inside besides the seats the mercenaries had presumably rode in on. I sealed it anyway, fucking with the engine block for good measure. As I'd suspected, the last van had another tech Sarcophagus perfectly fit for the other hostage. I slipped back beneath the ground before anyone had time to notice my sabotage
Menagerie and the gang of half-animal henchpeople had the opportunity to go full ham and a small part of me is disappointed they didn't take it. Mouse Protector would have a field day here.The smaller of the two had some mouse in him, rounded ears twitching periodically as he shifted his weight from foot to foot. The individual next to him was more still, sharp teeth and scales akin to a crocodile's giving her a dangerous air.
Well, this is terrifying.With my armor and the awkward angle she couldn't get in more than glancing blows before the ground beneath her became more liquid than solid, disturbing her footing and letting me get in a few solid hits with fists sheathed in metal. Once she was suitably distracted the concrete beneath rose up to immobilize her, successfully this time. Iron tendrils sprouted from the material covering her up to the neck, forming an improvised muzzle to keep her from revealing my presence the second she could make noise again.
"...Do you think she's going to come back?"I stowed them in one of the nearby abandoned buildings, behind a door that looked like it had rusted shut before I’d been born.
As always, the juxtaposition between her areas of competence and complete inexperience is hilarious.With my thinker power I could trace the knife’s path through the air before it even left his hand, allowing me to completely fail to move out of the way before it rang my metallic mask like a bell.
"And at that point, I knew I had won. I didn't even need to look at him as I spoke the last words he ever heard. 'Omae wa mou shind-'"Layers of armor and padding reduced the blows from potentially crippling to largely irrelevant, particularly since he’d lost this fight the moment he’d stepped within a few feet of me.
Some of the Bastards get cool but pretty normal animal traits that are fun to show off at parties. Others... do not, it seems.an eight-eyed spider person hot on his heels with well timed leaps from building to building.
GOD DAMN she is versatile.I let my power off of its leash for a short burst, a chaotic collage of iron spikes, wooden limbs and stone bones bursting forth from the ground like a mushroom unfurling in timelapse.
Telling that literally the first thing to cross her mind after getting decked by a brute, following involuntary pain responses, is that she has somehow failed her teammate by getting her tech broken. And yet, she's totally okay with disobeying a direct order from that same teammate, 5 minutes after it was given, on her own initiative. Carmilla is an interesting person.My back hit the ground with a muffled impact, and I involuntarily curled in on myself with a groan of pain. Immediately following that was a crushing pang of failure at getting Presto’s quieting card thing broken.
Interesting. Initially this gave me the impression that they were all regular people being body-puppeted by some Master with literally the most evil power of all time but the more I think about it they might be remote-controlled creations of some kind. Potentially related to those sarcophagi - maybe the Parahuman is actually a tinker, who creates fake bodies which are then controlled by people in a kind of nerve-connection suite?Then all at once he and the mercenaries he brought with them began to twist and shudder like broken engine blocks, smoke and blood pouring from eyes and mouth and spine. They fell like puppets with strings cut, enormous holes in their bodies where parts of them literally disintegrated in front of us.
If at first you make a poor impression... keep making poor impressions and hope it wraps around to grudging respect?She shifted back into normal form, regarding the Bastards and mercenary corpses with a completely unreadable look. Her helmet slowly turned to look at me. “Sepulcher.”
I waved at her, face breaking out into a nervous -almost manic- grin under my mask.
Thank you, it's fixed.I want to imagine Liang built the pose adjuster for some other purpose before realising its utility, like for a dance contestor she's a JoJo fan
btw, there's a couple of typos, if you're interested.
grandpa’s.” > grandpa’s,”
tell.” Said > tell,” said
which were as > which was as
already a > already had a
recruit, the > recruit; the
part, she’d > part; she’d
“Presto.” She > “Presto,” she
okay?” She > okay?” she
“Presto!” Said > “Presto!” said
vans.” > vans,”
help.” She > help,” she
“Oh.” Said > “Oh,” said
Jesus, I thought she was like 14 here, minimum. She's certainly learned some choice language for a 10-year-old. Seems remarkably mature as well, although I guess trauma has a way of aging people.
Oh cool, it's some kind of teenage runaway thief commune. In a neighbourhood so sketchy that it rents out to 13-year-olds, no questions asked. Yikes.It was almost dark when Liang got back to the hideout, she’d had a bunch of errands to run once they were finally flush with cash for a bit. Food for everyone, new clothes, Jessie’s medicine, it was disheartening how fast it got used up. She fumbled the door unlocked and shouldered it open, blinking at the sudden change in brightness while she tried to close the door behind her with a foot. Laughter drifted from the living room, putting a smile on her face even through the exhaustion that had settled over her like a thick blanket. The seven of them rented space in a shitty house in a shitty neighborhood that didn’t bother asking questions about who you were or why you were living there so long as you paid on time.
Aww, they've got a little family thing going on. This is pretty wholesome actually.Monica was leaning on the doorway leading to the family room, giving her another one of those ‘concerned looks’ she was so fond of.
Adorable, although given the earlier mention of her need for medication some of the implications here regarding 'her' stuff are a little depressing.Jessie had her own chair she liked to sit in while she watched her shows, religiously recording them on tape and drawing pictures of her favorite characters
Nice that he's contributing I guess, but- WAIT ARE THESE FRIENDLY YOUNG RUFFIANS THE BEGINNING OF THE WESTLAKE BASTARDS??? Nice little teenage gang looking out for each other grows up to become one of the biggest criminal organizations in Greater fucking Seattle, except for one of their earliest members who runs off and joins the Protectorate. Also they do human trafficking now. I imagine there's quite a bit more to be explored here - I look forward to seeing where you take it.Alex lounged in the beanbag chair next to her, occasionally scratching at the horns sprouting from his head in between his mocking commentary on the ridiculous situations the characters kept finding themselves in.
Carmilla has a Skrillex cut? Sick. Rock it like it's 2011, I suppose.“-be fine,” the girl she’d popped in next to was saying, sounding distracted. The young woman Presto had done all this to get a private conversation with was white, almost pasty, wearing a purple jacket that was cut like a light, feminine trench coat, peering out the window from behind a pair of worn out glasses. She was kinda cute, hair cut short on her left side and shoulder length on her right, the bottom half bleached blonde.
And here we see what the competence and drive she displayed at 10/12 years old can accomplish for a career Tinker with Protectorate backing. Presto is hard-fucking-core. It shouldn't be surprising given that we were told she's a team (co)leader at only 20 years old back in 1-6a but she's done a very good job of maintaining a particular image in the story so far. Interesting that what Carmilla thought of as just 'Presto making a wacky introduction' was a calculated attempt to catch her off guard and gather information. Given what was just shown about Presto's history as a conwoman it's not surprising, and given the information she had at the time her actions weren't unreasonable, but as the reader I can't help but feel a bit bad for Carmilla. With all that said about her competence, though...
Correct.
Correct again! I suspect that somewhere in those other dozen times is not recognizing what Sepulcher was getting at with her question about forcefields at the top of the Space Needle. There were other conversational missteps she took, but with what we see now about her thought process I wonder how many of those were intentional...?I’m a fucking idiot, Presto thought -not for the first or even the twelth time today
It's hilarious that PHO thought these two were an item. Not surprising, but hilarious.Bullrush turned her way, somehow managing to glare at her in a faceless helmet.
“Presto,” she said in a flat tone, warm and welcoming as ever.
Presto grinned, slowly counting down from ten in her head and and striving to keep her breathing steady.
Presto's calculating nature is further reinforced. She does legitimately care about Sepulcher, but is happy to accomplish more than one thing with a conversation if she can.It was hard to reconcile that anxious, vulnerable girl she’d spoken to at the Space Needle with Bullrush’s terse summary and the calculated destruction she’d witnessed on her way here. There was something Presto had missed about her, something important. It was time to find out what.
Wholesome end to the conversation and the chapter. Presto learned a lot about Sepulcher but interestingly didn't seem to push her on the disconnect she noted earlier - probably wise.Liang helped her new teammate to her feet and headed back towards the Space Needle, tired enough this late in the day that she ended up leaning on Carmilla as much as Carmilla was leaning on her.
Edited, thank you. Music Box is a changer.Wow, music box is really interesting. Is he a case 53?
btw, there's a couple of typos, if you're interested.
january,” my > January.” My
it’s is > it’s
to.” Sounded > to,” sounded
both of them (as in gasconade and merlin? imo it's a bit strange to count the cat in)
on-site, we’d (maybe add a so)
forming.“What (missing space)
push the > pushed the
No comment.Oh boy. I hope Carmilla isn't too closely based on yourself, that sounds like a really fucking toxic environment to grow up in.
