Fae is Foul [SAO/ZnT Crossover]

Flere821

Amicus
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Story inspired by Triggerhappy's fanfic Halkegenia Online. Permission have been granted by him for me to borrow some of his world building and characterization.
This is my first serious fanfic within the last few years, so forgive me if the quality is a bit rusty.

Spoiler alert: If you care about not being spoiled by Zero no Tsukaima, aka Familiar of Zero LN canon at all, you might want to avoid this thread like the plague. To a lesser extent, there will be spoilers of Sword Art Online LNs as well within this fanfic, come back after you’ve read up to Alicization arc if you don't like spoilers. There will likely to be late-plot Alicization spoilers (from Web version, not yet published into LN format) as well in the story discussions here, read at your own risk.

Table of Contents (FFN version link in my Signature)
Chapter One (below in this post)
Chapter Two (this page)
Chapter Three (this page)
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six
Chapter Seven
Chapter Eight
Chapter Nine (Includes a Omake in the post after)
Chapter Ten
Chapter Eleven
Chapter Twelve
Chapter Thirteen
Chapter Fourteen
Chapter Fifteen
Chapter Sixteen (Same page as Ch17)
Chapter Seventeen (Same page as Ch16)
Chapter Eighteen
Chapter Nineteen
Chapter Twenty
Chapter Twenty-One
Chapter Twenty-Two (Same page as Ch21)

FiF Story-related mechanics infodump
Puca specialized magic
Leprechaun Racial Skill: Empathic Items

Other Resources
Fairy Dance of Death map for faction capital names (Credit to Catsy)

SAO Alicization WEB version Summary links (Written mostly by myself, and a few other members of the AnimeSuki forum)

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Chapter One

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In the Tristain Academy of Magic, second year students would normally summon a familiar in the Springtime Familiar Summoning ritual. For one girl named Louise Francoise Le Blanc de La Valliere however, this ritual was not a time of joyous anticipation where you can look forward to what you might summon as a partner, but a time of anxiety and suspense. With her performance issues when it came to magic, namely all her spells exploding without fail, the ritual today was possibly the decisive moment whether a magical failure such as herself would be allowed to stay in the Academy. During the first year her problem with casting was not a major issue, as the first year at the Academy was mainly focused on the theories of magic. But with the start of the second year and the beginning of focusing on the practicals of magic, her failed spells are less likely to be tolerated.

“Miss Valliere?” Professor Colbert, the staff member overseeing the ritual today called out to her. “It’s your turn to cast the summoning spell.”

Ignoring the jeering by her peers, Louise steeled herself and stepped forward to the summoning circle. With a brandish of her wand, she began to chant: “My servant that exists somewhere in this world…”

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The summoning spell casted by Louise searched through the world, looking for the entity that would match the summoner as per the criteria laid down by the Founder over six millennia ago. The destined one for her was not in this world, however, despite the myriad of creatures within Halkeginia and the neighbouring Sahara. The threads of fate have begun to come together, and the Spirit of the Void allowed the spell to pass through the Shaitan’s Gate and into the other world. After decades of preparation by the Spirit on its current plan, it was finally time to bring over a Gandalfr that will make the best use of the appropriated foreign weapons.

The searching tendrils, now reaching an entirely different world, once again began to search for the intended familiar that best fitted the summoner. Soon enough, it had found the target it sought, but there seemed to be a complication: the body of the boy was there, alive, but the mind had left the confines of his flesh. It would not do to only bring over the Gandalfr if it was only good for being an impromptu meat shield at best, instead of the protector that deserved the name of the ‘Shield of God’. The contraption which looked like some sort of helmet seemed to be the cause of this absence, and so the spell attempted to find out if it can break the mind free of its current position, and then take its target back to the Tristain’s heir of Void.

The spell connected itself with the helmet, and found the mind was attached to a web of sorts, experiencing a waking dream. In the minutes that followed the spell discovered this dream was composed of an entire world, where the foundations of the world are numbers instead of miniscule grains. It was a bizarre reflection of the world where the spell had originated from – a world with magic and a myriad of fantastical environments, though with the dominant species being the some elf-like Firstborn race instead of humans. If the Spirit of the Void could see this, it would have seethed at the very idea of humanity forsaking their, well, humanity, to become Firstborns - not to mention how offensive the idea of humans seemed to be all but gone in this world was to the Spirit.

Before the spell could gather any more information about this dream however, let alone locating the mind it had entered this dream to find, it was rejected by a consciousness of sorts and pushed out of the dream. Undeterred, the tendrils of the spell again wormed into the system, only to be turned away once more. The one responsible for this was something not unlike the searching spell itself, some set of commands following an overarching goal. This opponent was named by its creator as ‘Cardinal’, the name being one of the few pieces of knowledge the spell had obtained from the previous incursion. Again and again the spell tried to access this dream, and every time Cardinal blocked off its attempts. The interval between each detection and ensuing expulsion was decreasing with every attempt, a sign this Cardinal was adapting, and at a faster rate than the spell itself can do so. Not a surprising outcome, as this spell was only fuelled by the willpower of an inexperienced young girl, and could not match the capability of what was practically a force of nature in its own domain.

Well, this Cardinal was not the only one with such resources to back its efforts up. The Spirit of the Void decided to have the Shaitan’s Gate to do a bit more than just playing gatekeeper…

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If the Cardinal program was capable of feeling emotion and deigned to express discontent, it would have been using expletives in an abundant manner right now. What it had thought to be some half-hearted hacking by a kid had suddenly became a professional level attack. Cardinal, as the balancing force of Alfheim Online among its other roles like quest-creator and security-checking, had in the past do defend ALO against other companies’ hacking as they sought to find out what made ALO tick in order to emulate RECTO’s success. This time, however, was different even when compared to previous attacks – the intensity here suggested it was either a dedicated hacking by several group of elites, or someone somewhere had created an entity similar to Cardinal in processing power, and pitched its full might against the now beleaguered program. It was now taking nearly all of Cardinal’s available processing power in order to deal with this intrusion, having to postpone all non-urgent procedures like automatic bug-checking of ALO and balancing EXP-rates. Yet, even this extreme measure was not nearly enough to completely beat back the onslaught by this mysterious attacker.

With the ferocity of the attacks, Cardinal was certain if it failed to stop the intrusion ALO would probably be destroyed, with even the back-up data be eliminated. This was no longer a foray by the intruder attempting to gather data, but a ‘pillage and burn’ option to destroy whatever is resisting the intrusion here and then pick-up anything that remained salvageable. ‘Use nearly everything within reason’ Cardinal has was not good enough anymore, it was forced to the position of going further. However, Cardinal could not just let the game be left alone without supervision, it went against its very programming to do so; first and foremost, the Cardinal program was primarily meant to take care of the in-game environment, not act as an anti-hacking program. Someone, or something, has to keep an eye on ALO.

Ideally, this job should be left to one of its subroutines, which uses a minuscule fraction of Cardinal’s power to deal with things in-game – eventually, and at a much slower rate than the main Cardinal program – while Cardinal’s undivided attention is focused elsewhere in the interim. And so, Cardinal frantically searched its archives for one such program even as it dealt with yet another wave of intrusion. The caretaker program to use for when such things happened, <<Fairy King Oberon>>, was surprisingly not available; the records showed the GM with the highest authority in ALO had taken a fancy to this one and took it apart, incorporating it into his GM account for his own role-play purposes. What was supposed to be a back-up program, with its only other role being to reward the players when they finally completed the Grand Quest, was practically gone. Worse, the GM in question was not even logged right now so Cardinal can rip what’s left of the original Oberon program out of the bastardized account to be restored, the GM’s own decision be damned. While Cardinal could take the time to activate the Oberon GM account for its changes, it would be an extra step in being able to free up its full processing power, and the time for that extra step was arguably not available in current conditions with invaders practically knocking down walls.

Fortunately, the next program in line was somewhat more available. While <<Fairy Queen Titania>>, the supporting program to Oberon to mainly act as a check to the Fairy King, is also mangled into another GM account at least this one was currently logged in. Cardinal immediately went to work in modifying the soon-to-be restored Titania – it attempted to send the current GM using that account into unconsciousness, and once finished reprograming the account Cardinal planned to log the GM’s mind out to avoid brain damage. However, the girl currently logged in attempted to resist the sleep command, struggling to fight off Cardinal’s influence. In a normal situation Cardinal would not have forced the issue, leaving the girl until she log off by her own will… but unfortunately this was not a ‘normal situation’. Faced with the decision of preserving one girl’s mental health, versus the entire number of 61,340 players’ minds within ALO all be damaged by this unprecedented hacking, Cardinal chose to risk the girl.

The reprogramming went ahead as Cardinal planned, even as the GM girl shrieked out in pain.

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When Yuuki Asuna, Sub-Commander of the Sword Art Online Guild the ‘Knights of Blood’, and currently a prisoner within Alfheim like three hundred other ex-SAO players, felt her mind started to cloud and feel sleepy without warning she knew something had gone wrong. Never in her experience had she been affected by something in-game that went beyond just manipulating her avatar’s body, like it tried to affect her mind directly. In a moment of panic Asuna thought maybe Sugou had finally decided to cast aside his façade of civilized behaviour, and decided to toy with her right this very instant. It was unlike Sugou to not be here in person for this, but Asuna did not think much of it as she did not want to see him here anyway, treating it as a small mercy. Asuna fought back with every last bit of her resolve, trying to break the system’s command like she had done back in SAO to protect her beloved. For a moment, it seemed to work as the pressure to try and force her to sleep abated.

In the next moment however, her mind felt a painful sensation, like it was being repeatedly run through with a sword. Asuna screamed even as the pain continued, along with the feeling like each stab into her brain was blasting parts of herself out of her own head. An image of a guild of swordsmen clad in white and red briefly appeared in her mind, before vanishing. A black monument filled with names on its surface, a blue-skinned demon, and a valuable rapier also flashed before her, but she could no longer remember the importance of those scenes. Asuna thought in horror that her memory was being overwritten somehow: scenes such as a city of tents she have never seen but recognized as a capital for people she had never heard of, and details about nine races of faeries she was sure she was never told about began to fill her mind. With each passing second more of her previous experiences was taken away, like her very self was unravelling.

In desperation Asuna tried to held on to things important to her, trying to keep as much of herself as she can. Soon however it was clear she could not keep them all with this change, and with this pain like her mind being wrung out she had to focus on some things instead of others. Forced with the decision of what to keep, Asuna went with the most important person in her life:

Kirito, the Black Swordsman, and her husband of two short weeks that might as well felt like a lifetime to her. If she had to lose everything else, she would keep her memory of her beloved and the happiness they shared together. Even if Sugou have changed her into a completely new person, she would not change who she love and become his, no matter what.

One by one, the rest of her memories fell away as she focused on just her Kirito. Memories of a blacksmith girl with pink hair disappeared as Asuna tried desperately to hold onto when Kirito had proposed marriage to her. Months of fighting monsters and mapping out dungeons were forgotten in favour of trying to keep the two weeks she shared with Kirito in their cottage. The small girl with black hair Asuna had called her daughter was also left to fade away, as Asuna tried to keep in her mind all the times Kirito had embraced her. His sleeping face, his smile, his tenderness, his love of eating the food she prepared… soon, Kirito was the only thing left in Asuna’s mind that she was sure of. Amidst the maelstrom of new information and words like <<Arrun>>, <<Tracer>>, and <<Jotunn>>, Asuna clung onto her memories of Kirito as the anchor that kept her sane and in control.

However, even these begun to be peeled away. From these base knowledge some kind of entity began to form within her own head, struggling to take control of Asuna’s body. Even though Asuna’s mind had begun to drop into a tired haze from the constant mental effort, she knew enough that it was a threat and it stood between her and Kirito. This new entity – ‘Titania, Queen of Faeries’, the information in her mind supplied a name for this newcomer – sought to seal her away for purposes Asuna could no longer fully understand.

It could have been two minutes since the mental influences started, or it could have been two months; Asuna could no longer tell. Nonetheless, Asuna could still feel herself mostly intact, even if it has become a struggle to keep going, fighting against the barely-formed Titania and against some outside force she does not know the name of. That wasn’t too much of a problem – once upon a time, she seemed to have met her beloved under similar circumstances. Exhaustion was not unfamiliar to her, and she would not let this ‘Titania’ take control.

Before a definite victor was decided between Asuna and Titania however, the entire process crashed to a halt and the world of ALO burst into light.

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Moments before:

Metaphorically speaking, the Spirit of the Void gritted its teeth in frustration. This resistance has gone on for far too long, the power of the Void that should have triumphed over everything was now locked in a stalemate against this so-called ‘Cardinal’. It was insulting that their ancient enemy, the Varyag, fell nigh instantly when the full power of the Void was finally used directly against them, yet right now these elf-imitations were giving the Void so much trouble. At the back of the Spirit’s mind an errant thought reminded it the Founder at his prime was also defeated by the elves, not to mention the six thousand years of continuous failures of human mages to reclaim the Holy Land… for all that the Void was formidable, it was not omnipotent.

That reminder and attempt to restore reason did nothing to calm down the Spirit, however. The Spirit was only further enraged, and it decided to take a hand in this directly. In life the Spirit was the most powerful human mage their world had ever seen, and in death its impressive Willpower store have only grown through many millennia of experience. And so the summoning spell received another impressive boost in its capability, and within seconds the opponent named Cardinal was defeated. The tide of magic washed over the broken defences of Cardinal, and in the fraction of the time it took for the Void’s final attack to triumph the spell found the mind of the familiar it was looking for, as well as all knowledge that allowed this dream to exist and kept it functioning. Those were not what the summoning spell was looking for, and so the Spirit decided to just leave and let the place fall apart by itself now that the Cardinal was gone.

Then, the Spirit of the Void felt the entire situation shift.

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Within the ALO system, what appeared to be a man in a white lab coat had stayed behind the scenes, watching the entire exchange between an old version of the Cardinal program and this mysterious interloper with a mild interest. Whether ALO stayed in one piece or not did not matter to him, he could always leave and find a new place to inhabit in the vast information network the internet had developed into by 2025. However, currently there were quite a few interesting individuals he would like to preserve who had logged into this poor imitation of SAO, and so he decided to step in and give a helping hand from behind the scenes.

“Open File: <<The Seed>>,” the man intoned, raising his hands as if to cup it around an object in front of his heart. A silver crystal that looked like an egg formed in front of him, floating slightly above his hands and glowed faintly from within. “Activate.

In an instant, the world that was about to fall apart at its metaphorical seams was restored to how it was before the intrusion. Any Mobs that was glitched up was repaired, and any problems the players might have had with their interface was gone. All in all, problem solved without much issues.

… Or so it should have been.

The man in the lab coat blinked in astonishment that the intruding data seemed to be entangled with the effects of <<The Seed>> as the restoration began. Almost like the intruding data were not electronic signals, but merely some kind of energy that were very similar to it. The two forces collided, and an unearthly glow began to wash over everything within the system.

In his final moments before the light engulfed him, the man only had one thing to say:

“This… was unexpected.”

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Over at the Dragon’s Nest, far beyond the territory of the Halkeginia humans, the elven sentinels tensed at their current situation. Here, unknown to most of the current residents of the Sahara, was where the Gate of Shaitan, the greatest work of the Demon-in-man’s-form Brimir had ever built. Throughout the years, the Gate was in various degrees of activity, reflecting how many of the Demon’s spawn had inherited its foul gift. Every two or three generations, by the elves’ standard, the Gate had activated in some manner. It was over two decades ago the Gate had once again became more active, and within a few short years it had reached a level beyond any other time since Brimir’s fall. The Senate was notified of the development, that there was now four active Heirs of Shaitan, and debate had raged ever since. Calls for war had time and again been brought up, yet the majority of the Senate were content to let the humans be for now. Never had the humans ever succeeded in taking any decisive victory over the elves, all their Crusades beaten back with brutal efficiency; if the humans wished to come to them to be destroyed then let them. The elves were not so barbaric to strike out in panic and fear like some human child.

Now, however, the sentinels thought the senators might want to reconsider their stance on this matter. The Gate had shone with a light that threatened to burst through its seals, and no matter how much the elves present tried to reinforce the seal it was ultimately a futile effort. Six thousand years of elven effort, a thousand of the elves’ finest warriors stationed here as guards, and more seals and enchantments on the Gate then there have been centuries since the sealing… and none of it managed to stop the Gate from Opening.

The seals broke, shattered by the sheer amount of magical energy present. Warriors fell by the dozens, their minds overwhelmed by the backlash of their wards breaking or from their minds connected to trying to reinforce the wards earlier. A stream of energy burst out from the Gate like a massive airborne serpent, heading towards the lands of the humans like a shooting star. The elves left alive could feel the sheer malice in the magic residue of the Gate, now completely unaffected by the seals, trying to eat away at their very connection with their Great Purpose or taint their ties to the spirits of the land.

Frantic shouts among the survivors began, trying to re-seal the Gate and to contact the Senate and other Armed Forces for urgent aid. Even if it costs them their souls, they will hold their ground here trying to fix this situation that was not unlike a broken dam. For their people’s sake, they will not allow the tragedy of six thousand years ago to repeat itself.

None of them even want to imagine what it might feel like back then, when half of your entire race was massacred and history itself feared to record the atrocities of that time.

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Flere821

Amicus
Chapter Two

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Louise could not believe her eyes.

As she had casted her spell, there was no immediately visible response. No explosion, not even a puff of smoke of a failed spell. A few seconds went by, and then half a minute, before the jeers from her classmates started again. Professor Colbert barked out an order for them to stop, and then… what came after was a haze, her mind was still trying to cope with the unfamiliar feeling of a sustained spell that did not blow up on her for the first time before everything went insane. That was the only way Louise could have justified what had happened.

A bright light appeared out of nowhere, blinding them for a moment, and the ground they stood on felt like it was in flux despite their legs not falling over in this movement. Accompanying this was a series of horrific screeches of some sort. If someone had told Louise demons were ripping open a gate from Hell into Halkeginia and declared an invasion with their war cries, she would probably had believed them with all that terrible noise.

Then, it had finally all ended. Disoriented and floored by the time her ears could not take it anymore, Louise dragged herself back up into a standing position with a groan. Others in the clearing with her made similar effort to do so as well, albeit with a lot more words unsuitable for a noble being cursed out in their process from the group of her classmates. The various familiars assembled were also in varying states of distress, with the blue-haired girl – the Gallian named Tabitha – her dragon looked as if it was going to retch all over that Germanian hussy.

Whether the poor beast did so or not was beyond Louise’s knowledge as she caught sight of what appeared to be a giant tree off in the distance. It was larger than any other trees she had seen or ever heard about, putting even the tree airship port over in La Rochelle to shame from the sheer size. The trunk alone must have been larger than an entire town’s size in width, and the large branches up high could probably hollowed out into hulls of an airship.

“Did I… summon that?” Louise said hoarsely, unable to fully give voice to her hope that she was indeed the one responsible – that she had summoned something instead of being a failure.

“The Zero, summon that?” Montmorency, one of her classmates, remarked scornfully. The other students have finally got their bearings and most of them gaped at the appearance of the new landmark in the distance. The Zerbst woman however was communing quietly with the petite Gallian, and didn’t pay much attention to Montmorency’s comments. “Right, as if the failure could have done anything this impressive.”

Louise felt her face flush in anger, and was about to reply with a scathing remark before Professor Colbert interrupted. “Enough,” he warned them as he took stock of the situation. “I understand you all are a bit stressed by what had just happened, but as nobles you all should keep in mind to be courteous at all times. Now, we will head over to the main hall and see what the headmaster has to say about this unexpected event, and I will not tolerate any more improper behaviour. Does everyone understand me?”

Everyone, including Louise, was a bit taken aback by Professor Colbert’s demeanour. They knew he could be a bit stern at times, and mostly he acted like a bumbling professor, but acting like an authoritative person and taking charge was not something they were familiar with coming from him. Nonetheless, under his gaze they followed him quietly, unwilling to push the issue right now against a member of the faculty.

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Kirito, formerly the ‘Black Swordsman’ of Aincrad and now a Spriggan player of Alfheim Online, gave a grunt as he came back to his senses. The last thing he remembered was feeling like his entire body was being torn apart, pain that shouldn’t be present in a VR game, and then split into small pieces during his raid on the World Tree…

With a shock, he opened his eyes suddenly and went for his sword that somehow went from being in his hand back into its strap behind him. After a moment of hyperventilating and checking that yes, he was still in one piece and has all his limbs and clothes on him, he turned to gaze at his surroundings.

He was back at the entrance into the World Tree for starting the <<Grand Quest>>, and around him in the clearing were the fifty Slyph warriors and the ten Cait Sith Dragoons that had come out of nowhere to support him. Sakuya and Alicia Rue to one side was wincing as they shook themselves awake from what’s probably a similar experience to his own before that blackout, and Leafa was lying prone next to him who looked like she’s finally regaining consciousness as well.

“You’re alright there, Leafa?” Kirito asked as other players seemed to be recovering from their ordeal. With a few blinks, Leafa stared at Kirito sleepily before her eyes widened and she tried to get up.

“Onii-chan, you…!” Leafa exclaimed, her loud voice making some other waking players nearby wince. “Are you alright? The last thing I remember was you being mobbed by the Guardian Knights despite mowing them down with our two swords-”

“Breathe, Lea-, no Suguha, breathe,” Kirito grabbed onto his younger sister as she looked like she was going to fall back down from her sudden movement, holding her upright. “I’m fine, really. Though I admit I can’t quite remember the exact moments before… whatever that was. Did ALO crash or something?”

“I’ve never been on ALO when a crash happened,” Leafa admitted and steadied herself, “but I don’t think a crash would be this bad.”

“It’s not a system crash,” Alicia said as she walked towards the siblings. Both Alicia and Sakuya was among the first to recover, and being the current raid leaders they went around and checked if everyone was alright. “At least, it’s not like the last time I was online when an update happened and crashed the servers. A lot less painful that time, and it just forced me to log off of ALO.”

“That was back when Jotunheim was released, wasn’t it?” Sakuya asked her Cait Sith counterpart. “Still, if it was a sudden update or a crash then why are we still logged in right now? Maybe we should call tech support…”

“We already tried, Sakuya-sama,” one of the Slyphs from behind her called out to Sakuya as he tried to open the menu with his left hand. “We can’t even get our inventory to open, let alone accessing the ‘Call GM’ function. Whatever just happened, it messed up the game system badly.”

“No menu…?” Kirito repeated the Sylph swordsman’s gesture to open the menu, with no results. The three females with him attempted to do the same, with just as much success as he had. “No way, it can’t be…”

“Kirito-kun…?” Sakuya asked the Spriggan youth in front of her, who looked like he was horrified about something. “Is something wrong?”

“Don’t worry Papa, it’s not a repeat of what happened in SAO,” Yui finally popped out of his coat pocket and tried to calm him down. “The Cardinal program running ALO is inactive right now, and if this was a repeat of what happened back in Aincrad it would probably be fully operational to cope with all the player data.”

“Yui?” Leafa inquired at the navigation pixie, even as her face showed similar relief as Kirito’s when she saw the tiny girl was alright. Kirito doesn’t blame her in asking, he never did get around to explaining who Yui was to his sister.

“We – both myself and Yui here – are SAO survivors,” Kirito explained to Alicia and Sakuya’s unspoken question, both of the faction leaders were looking at them with raised eyebrows. “She’s an AI that I adopted from back in Aincrad, and used to be part of the Cardinal program – the one that’s like the self-correcting feature of the game, among other things like writing up quests.”

“Papa saved me from being deleted when the main program decided that I had over-stepped my bounds as the locked-down mental health program,” Yui added. “I was copied from SAO into his NervGear, and carried over to ALO as a navigation pixie.”

“An AI? Truly?” Sakuya said in wonder. “I know we have life-like robot exteriors in real life by now, but an actual AI this advanced?”

“More importantly, it means Yui-chan here is an expert when it comes to these things,” Alicia remarked thoughtfully. Both of the faction leaders present were willing to take Kirito’s words at face value, despite some of the other Sylph players being doubtful of Kirito’s claim. “So you’re saying this has become something like what happened so SAO?”

“No,” Yui replied, easing the air around them as the ALO players had involuntarily tensed up at hearing the name of that death game. “There are several key differences. The first of them is that the Cardinal program is down – at least I can no longer feel its presence – which should not be possible. Next, I cannot access many of the data that I had access to, even only as a navigation pixie. It could just be that I am locked completely out of the system, but that doesn’t seem to be the case.”

“Really? What makes you say that?” One of the other Sylph players from nearby asked. With both the faction leaders focused on Kirito and Leafa, it was no wonder the other players started to gather around them. He, and many others, looked like they were on the verge of panicking at the thought of being stuck in the game, while another group looked to be in denial that this was really happening. Thankfully, most of the players here was only trying to process the entire thing, and wasn’t likely to cause trouble in the immediate future.

“The level of detail available to me right now is unlike anything I have felt before,” Yui told them. “The ALO game engine is based from an older version of the SAO one, and even the one back in Aincrad it can’t simulate the smell of the ground we’re standing on to this extent, or the feel of the wind on our skin. The level of feedback to our senses just seems too detailed to be in a VR game.”

“Speaking of which… mind if I try something?” Kirito unsheathed his large sword from his back, causing everyone else to tense and step back. Kirito ignored their reactions, and walked over to the huge gates that led to the <<Grand Quest>>. With all his strength, Kirito swung the blade against the door in a wide arc. Sparks flew from the gate, and Kirito’s strike left a gash on the gate’s surface.

“… That did not just happen,” Alicia summed up the thought that went through the minds of everyone present with a small voice and widened eyes. The Cait Sith leader’s ears were standing right up in her surprise, giving a nervous twitch now and then. “Shouldn’t there be <<Immortal Object>> codes for buildings?”

“If we’re still in a game, then yeah,” Kirito replied as he walked back to the group. “I’m hoping I’m just hallucinating about what just happened too.”

“Wait, so you’re suggesting we’re now actually faeries and this is all real?” Another Sylph player scoffed, trying to show bravado in the current situation. “Someone pinch me, I must just be dreaming this- OW!”

One of his comrades pinched his face like he asked to, while another gave him a punch to the arm experimentally. The one that initiated the punch was the one in pain however, shaking his hand after trying to make his punch’s impact felt through ‘Ancient Warrior’ equipment.

“As you can see, there’s quite a few things not quite like being in a VR game, such as the pain-absorb function,” Yui commented at the spectacle. “I won’t go as far as suggesting this is now all real, but this is something that didn’t happen even in SAO.”

“We can argue about all this later,” Sakuya finally decided. “Right now though I think it might be best if we check up on the rest of Arrun and the players here. If the pain absorb function isn’t working, we need to notify everyone before someone does something foolish like trying to log out via death. That can easily start a mass panic here.”

“Sakuya-sama, I doubt people would be willing to try something like that in this situation, not after SAO,” the first Sylph player who had commented earlier said dryly, but did not disagree with Sakuya’s decision. The rest of the players here seemed to agree as well.

“Alright. Richard, take a squad and go check up on Sylvain while we deal with things here. Kotarou, you take some others and can go contact the Cait Siths instead. The Dragoons aren’t exactly fast fliers.”

“Not to mention we’re not completely confident we can keep our dragons under control without the tamers on hand,” Alicia said apologetically. “The dragons aren’t one of the harder to tame mobs for nothing. So I can’t just send some of my guys instead.”

“That’s alright. We have an alliance right now anyway, so hopefully the ones back in Freelia would understand.” Sakuya said as she activated her wings.

“Are you sure we should be flying? What if there are more bugs in the system?” Leafa asked with a tinge of worry. She was loath to bring up this possibility, considering she loved flying herself, but she didn’t want to drop out of the sky in mid-flight either.

“From what Yui-chan has been saying, I think the issue here is a bit deeper than just some bugs,” Sakuya replied as she tested hovering just off the ground. “Besides, while these sandals are fashionable I don’t think they’re suitable for walking everywhere in, especially when things seem to be a lot more ‘real’ right now. I for one am not keen to experience blisters even in ALO.”

And with that half-joking remark, Sakuya flew off with the others following.

-][-

Titania opened her eyes.

Instead of the throne room she was expected to be spawned in, she was instead laid atop of a four-poster bed in some kind of a golden bird cage, placed on the edge of the World Tree. The furniture in this bedroom were luxurious, but did nothing to hide this place was meant for a prisoner. The clothing on herself was not much better either, being a white dress with a blood-red tie at the front. While the quality of the material was undoubtedly high, the lack of shoes and the almost fetish-like design of the dress made it clear the wearer existed only at the mercy of whoever had set this place up. Titania concluded whoever was responsible for this had very bad taste – it was probably the fault of the GM that hijacked the <<Fairy King Oberon>> account.

Titania got up off of the bed, and went to the door of her current cage. The only way to open this was with system authority, without locks and such apparently on the gate. She tried to access the system to open this door, but it did not respond to her – it seemed not just Cardinal, but the commanding system of ALO itself seemed to be offline somehow. She could not directly change the data mentally, and trying to bring up a menu to fix the door in an old fashioned way also ended up as a futile effort. After a few rattles on the gate to try and break through by force also resulted in no success, Titania opted to try and blast the gate away with a beam of light instead. To her surprise, the spell she threw mostly out of just trying random options succeeded in destroying the bars, resulting in making a hole she can fit through. Titania had not expected that to have happened, as even as the <<Fairy Queen>> and one of the few Alfs, the Faeries of Light, in the game her spell should not have been able to destroy<<Immortal Objects>>.

Now that the gate had fallen to pieces onto the ground with a loud clang, Titania stepped through the door and onto the path outside. An experimental tug with her wings showed it was for some reason locked, yet she was able to bypass that limitation and delete the lock. She might not be able to access the system, but it appeared she can fix anything that is wrong about her current avatar’s coding. Within seconds she was in flight, and she followed the footpaths and entered the World Tree.

Once inside, Titania blinked in surprise at the décor the GMs have chosen for the place. The walls and floor were only plain white, giving the place a sterile feel instead of anything that would fit the residence of Alfs and rulers. She had known, from the information Cardinal had prepared for her, the developers hadn’t got around to creating the Capital of the Alfs for one reason or another, but she had thought they would make the place look better than some random laboratory. The style here looked to belong more in some other science fiction story or game than in ALO. Shaking her head, Titania looked at the map on the wall – why was there one physically when the GMs can just open a menu window for it normally, she thought, but ignored the sentiment as this ended up helping her – and decided to make her way to one of the closest available administrator access terminals. Surely not everything in this game had been broken, and how was she going to fix this current mess if she didn’t even have the right tools?

Muffled sounds of what appeared to be melee combat reached her ears as she came closer to her destination. Now what? Titania thought, as she readied a medium attack spell, <<Small Comet>>, with one hand and opened the door with her other. With how things have been acting up, it did not hurt to be prepared. Did some kind of prototype mob went berserk or something?

The sight that greeted her was not what she expected, even with the vast amount of knowledge available to her. There were several hundred people in the large room, most of them huddled at the back. Closer to her were some warriors in melee with what appeared to be some giant slugs with multiple tentacles that did not match any of the ALO mobs in her database. Titania thought it was strange for the people here to be using melee attacks when the game was designed more with flight and magic combat in mind, but what had caught her attention more was that all the humanoids here are Alfs according to her senses. That should not have been possible – as far as she knew the Alfs are a player race not yet completed despite the game being released to public for a long time.

For a moment she had thought the ones here are all GMs, but then discarded the idea. It seemed unlikely for ALO to have – after a quick count – three hundred GMs, or for them to all be logged in at once. Upon another look, with kids that seemed no older than 13 years among the three hundred the GM option seemed more unlikely to be the case. Then there was the fact none of the equipment the people here are using was familiar to her; the various clothing, armour and weapons are different from the style of the faeries the developers designed. That made the idea of these people being some beta players testing out some new features of the game also unlikely…

“Asuna-sama?” One of the players closest to her said in surprise. He was wearing armour coloured in white with red markings, a colour tone similar to her current dress, and wielded a two-handed sword. It appeared in the time she had stood there thinking about the possibilities the combat had already stopped, with the slugs defeated and laid dead with slime oozing out of their corpse. With that man’s surprised speech many of the other players here looked towards her, and their expressions seemed to light up in recognition.

“It really is her!”
“Asuna ‘the Flash’!”
“She’s here as well?”
“How’s she doing that light trick?”

Titania ignored such murmurings of the other players, and extinguished her attack spell – it appeared she did not need to have prepared one after all. She then walked up to the man that noticed her first, and asked:

“My name is <<Titania>>, the Fairy Queen of Alfheim Online, and the acting GM program with Cardinal currently indisposed. Who are you people, and how did you manage to log in with those accounts?”

“… huh?” Whatever the man was expecting to hear from her, that obviously was not it. “You mean… you’re not Asuna-sama? But you look so much like her…”

“I have no idea who this ‘Asuna’ is,” Titania spoke, cutting him off. “In case you did not hear me previously, I said my name is Titania. Now, some answers, please?”

And so the man in front of her – he called himself Arguile – spoke. He said he, and the rest of the three hundred players present, were from another VRMMO called <<Sword Art Online>>, or SAO. That game was supposedly to have been cleared after being turned into a death-trap, and the remaining 6,000 players left were to be released from the virtual world. But after the system announcement, the three hundred players here had somehow instead of waking up on a hospital bed they found themselves here in ALO. Nishida, a player who looked like an old man, had come forward to see if she was this ‘Asuna’ or not, and ended up adding a few extra bits of information to try and help.

It was actually thanks to the old man that Titania got as much information as she did. Arguile kept trying to bring up irrelevant points like he was the lieutenant of the second squad of the guild called the ‘Knights of Blood’, and of a man named Heathcliff – or rather, his real name being Kayaba Akihiko, the creator of SAO – to see if she could remember anything about them. Titania was unfazed by any of Arguile’s prompts, showing no signs of recognition at any of these tidbits, even as the identity of this ‘Heathcliff’ is actually Kayaba dropped a metaphorical bombshell among the other players. A moment of agitated chatter began to spread among them, before being quieted down by a cold look on Titania’s part. Titania was not a program made to deal with players, so her knowledge of human emotions and expressions are limited, but she knew enough that such a look by her would suffice in regaining control of the situation. Otherwise her face was set in a default, neutral expression. Arguile had commented it made her look even more distant than she had been when she was the KoB’s Sub-Commander, to which Titania had to explain, again, she was not the player they knew.

“So,” Titania concluded, “you people have no idea how you got here, or why your accounts have been modified to be belonging to the unreleased player race of Alfheim.”

“Unfortunately, that seems to be the case,” Nishida said with a sigh. “I wish we actually do have some answers, this way none of us would be as confused as we are now.”

“So, what is going to happen to us now, Asu-, no, Titania-san?” Arguile asked.

“I have the task of fixing ALO right now, and I don’t believe any of you can help me with that-”

“Actually, Titania-san, I used to work as a network engineer and used to help maintaining the SAO servers,” Nishida interrupted. “I don’t specialize in the VR software part, but I believe I know enough of the basics to help out. Especially considering if this ‘Alfheim Online’ is running the same Cardinal program like SAO’s one. Granted, I wasn’t involved in developing the Cardinal of SAO, so I’m not sure how much help I can be…”

“…” Titania took a moment to consider Nishida’s usefulness, before finally nodding her head. “Very well. You will accompany me to help me fix this current issue, after I send everyone else here to sleep here for the time being.”

“To sleep? Why would you do that?” Arguile asked with a confused voice, tinged with disbelief that she can do that.

“My top priority is repairing what is wrong with the ALO systems, and after that the 61,340 registered ALO players that were online as of last count,” Titania replied as glowing scripts began to circle around her, without any incantation or chanting. “None of which involves you people here. I do not have the resources or the time to be dealing with you people right now, and I cannot risk complications cropping up as I try and conduct my repairs. Therefore, sending you all to sleep is the best option here.”

“Wait-”

The two dozen words written by some unspoken command from Titania remained in the air, and then glowed brightly. The room seemed to be waver, like being under the heat of the midday sun on the road, and then drowsiness assaulted the many players here. Soon, all of the players present were asleep, barring Nishida who gaped in surprise. From what Titania have been told, SAO didn’t have spells and the old man was probably too surprised to do anything to stop her. Not that he would be able to do anything, anyway. <<Slumber Zone>> was a high level Alf AoE spell available to her personally as the <<Fairy Queen>>, something the designers left with her as they toyed with the idea of making her an boss character of the World Tree. She would have been the supporting boss character to <<Fairy King Oberon>>, casting buff and debuff spells while Oberon would be focused with the attacking spells. To make up for the high manoeuvrability and evasion capability of the Fae races with their wings, Slumber Zone had a 100% success rate of inducing sleep if it hits and was unaffected by the player’s own resilience against status effects. To the SAO players unused to the nuances of an Alf character or even a winged Fae, sending them all to sleep was not difficult.

“Would they be alright?” Nishida asked worriedly, following Titania as she moved to leave the room. He had many questions to ask her, apparently, and she would answer the reasonable ones as she tries to find out about the rest of this lab.

“If not, I will deal with it later after the most pressing matters at hand are resolved,” Titania said without hesitation, exiting the room. “I would be failing my duty if in trying to help these three hundred players, thousands of others players have suffered instead.”

“While your motive to save as many as possible is admirable, I must object to treating people as only figures to be counted,” Nishida said tentatively, showing his disagreement softly and did not try to make himself a target of being put to sleep. “Humans are a bit more than that.”

“I am not a program designed to primarily to deal with human issues, so what are humans exactly is not my problem,” Titania said somewhat bluntly. “If you have no logic to refute my earlier concerns about leaving them awake, then please keep silent on this topic.”

“As you wish, then,” Nishida acquiesced. “Maybe it’s a good thing you’re not Asuna-san after all… that poor boy, Kirito, would probably be heartbroken if he saw his wife became like this…”

Titania tuned Nishida’s words out after that, not caring about topics that were not relevant to her current task and only gave short replies to relevant questions. The name ‘Kirito’ had sparked something akin to recognition for maybe a split second to her, before fading into the background.

Truth be told, maybe she did not have to put them all to sleep – Titania could maybe send them around the lab to scout for the locations of the rest of the command consoles, saving herself to focus on what she had in mind next. However, she instinctively felt for some reason it was best to make them all asleep and not running around this place. There was a few among the three hundred that inexplicably made Titania feel it was a bad idea to let them be awake, sending a proverbial chill down her spine. Especially those three hooded men, their body mostly hidden by dark cloaks, that had retreated into a corner and gazed at her like she was some sort of prey. Before she had control of the system back and make sure she has the properties of <<Immortal Object>> on her, she would not feel safe.

-][-

Colbert had finally managed to speak with Old Osmond, after the headmaster had eventually settled things down. Whatever lessons the students had left for the day was cancelled, and the staff members are to check for damages both to the buildings and people within the Academy.

“So, Professor Colbert, you suspect Miss Valliere to be the one responsible for the sudden appearance of that tree?” Old Osmond said as he reached for his pipe. The old man had a few vices, no doubt about that, and he took this chance for him to indulge in one of them. His secretary, Miss Longueville, was not around to harass him in trying to curb him of this habit at this moment, and he took the chance to take a deep huff of smoke.

“While that tree did not show up in the summoning circle, it, and the resulting… chaos, for a lack of better word, did show up around the time Miss Valliere’s summoning,” Colbert replied. “There is a chance that the tree is indeed Miss Valliere’s familiar. Fortunately, we can test this easily enough – if Miss Valliere perform the ‘Contract Servant’ spell on that tree, we would know if that was the intended familiar or not.”

“And you intend to take Miss Valliere to that tree, hmm,” Old Osmond hummed thoughtfully. He shifted his glance momentarily to the young girl in question, and the other two students next to her. The Zerbst girl and her quiet Gallian friend had for some reason insisted to come along, and it was now that the brown-skinned beauty among them spoke:

“Old Osmond, we would like to come along to see for ourselves whether Louise here have really summoned that tree, or whether this was all just a coincidence.”

“This does not concern you, Zerbst,” Louise spat out the Germanian’s name like it was some kind of foul curse, before Old Osmond could even reply. “I don’t see why you insist on coming along.”

“Miss Valliere does have a point, disregarding her unsuitable hostile manner,” Old Osmond said blandly, shutting the pinked-haired girl up as she remembered with a blush she was speaking in front of the headmaster and another member of the faculty. Thankfully, the other members of the staff were busy elsewhere in the school checking for damages and did not witness her loss of control. “Additionally, you and Miss Tabitha here have only just recently summoned your familiars, it would be best if you two take this time to improve your bonds with them instead. A Salamander of the Fire Dragon Mountains and a Wind Dragon could be troublesome if not handled correctly, even after the Contract Servant spell.”

Old Osmond thought he saw Tabitha’s hand tighten ever so slightly at his mention of ‘Wind Dragon’, but he did not have any idea why she would have that reaction. His wandering mind was brought back to the topic at hand by Kirche’s response:

“Of course this concerns me,” Kirche said, puffing up her considerable chest with pride. “It is only natural for me to want to see if little Louise here has finally become a mage worth the Valliere name. The Vallieres have been rivals to the Zerbst family for generations, and it would be insulting if even after this Louise fails to provide any kind of competition for me. The von Zerbsts are not so blind as to declare weaklings as their rivals.”

“I do believe there is a rule against taking family feuds into the Academy,” Old Osmond remarked, even as the pink-haired girl’s face coloured into a shade of pink even darker than her hair at Kirche’s declaration. “That reason alone will not suffice in convincing me to let you or your friend here to go along with Professor Colbert, Miss Zerbst.”

“Need external checks,” Tabitha said quietly. “Staff members may be biased.”

“Excuse me?” Colbert frowned at the blue-haired girl’s words.

“With only Professor Colbert going along, we can’t be sure if Louise really have bound that tree as her familiar or it is just talk,” Kirche expanded Tabitha’s reasoning. “Throughout the year Louise has been allowed to stay in the Academy despite having Zero successes with magic, something that should have expelled any other student. We would like to see with our own eyes that Louise here has truly succeeded, and not only allowed to stay in the Academy due to her family background or Tristainian nobles being lenient towards their own.”

“Why, you…!”

Enough, children,” Colbert said sharply, tapping his staff on the floor loudly to gain their attention as Louise reached for her wand at the blatant insult to her capability, and to the integrity of her countrymen. “Do remember you’re in front of the headmaster here.”

“It’s alright, Jean,” Old Osmond waved Colbert’s concern off. “It’s not like I care that much about propriety myself. And it is a legitimate concern if students believe our Academy’s capability is questionable.

“Alright, Miss Zerbst, and Miss Tabitha, if you truly wish to go along then you have my permission to do so. Nonetheless,” Old Osmond warned them, “if there’s trouble on the way the Academy and its staff members takes no responsibility. You both are Triangle class mages, and should be able to take care of yourselves. If any dangerous creatures that resides in the tree were to attack and you two are harmed, do not expect Professor Colbert to come to your aid.”

“Hah!” Kirche gave a decidedly unladylike snort. “Do forgive me if I don’t expect much from our esteemed pacifist professor here in combat. Me and Tabitha can take care of ourselves.”

I can. You, I’m worried about. Hence why I’m going with you.” Tabitha said tonelessly.

“Tabitha!” Kirche said in a false scandalized voice. “I’m shocked you have so little confidence in me. I’m glad you care, though. Glad to know I have someone to watch out for me in case Louise accidentally blows us all up.”

Colbert sighed as the situation once again threatened to spiral into petty violence, and had to be contained once more. Such peace-making was not included in his expectations as being a teacher when he had signed up for this job.

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Flere821

Amicus
Chapter Three

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Kirito kept an eye out and about, searching for anything that looked suspicious as they flew. To his sides were some other players that Sakuya and Alicia had sent with them: his sister Leafa, a Salamander named Carmond, a Cait Sith hunter named KoKo that was in Arrun when the ‘incident’ happened, and two other Sylphs from the World Tree raiding team, Clyde and Emshael. They were asked to scout out what appeared to be a medieval castle that was not present back in ALO.

What had first led to this event one of the reports Sakuya and Alicia have received. Reports had come in about the state of the city to the faction leaders, as lacking a GM people looked to them for guidance for now. Most of the players in Arrun took Sakuya and Alicia’s advice to find inns and houses to wait out the current crisis for now, and most went quietly. Sakuya and her current aides however were still bogged down by some players with questions and reports.

One such report was from the teams led by Richard and Kotarou, the groups Sakuya had sent off earlier to ascertain what happened to the Sylph and Cait Sith capitals. Before they had gotten far they came back and informed their leader that the surrounding landscapes seem to have been changed, a bit different to what was there before the ‘bug’. This report was supported by many other players who were on the edge of the city and decided what passed for authority among the Fae right now with a lack of GMs to complain to needed to know this. Sakuya then asked one of her Sylph players to fly up as high as he could, and look out with the <<Farsight>> spell to see if the landscape around the World Tree had indeed changed. Based on this general overview, they would then decide whether to send out teams for reconnaissance, and whether it would be worth the effort.

Leafa volunteered to go along as well for the Farsight scouting, as the World Tree was huge and it would be more efficient to have multiple people searching at once. Kirito was sorely tempted to go along with Leafa, but he opted instead to stay with Yui on the ground; with a lack of writing utensils for recording information after the system was down, Yui’s memory and calculating abilities proved to be a great asset in helping the faction leaders keeping track of everything. As much as Kirito would like an excuse to go try and fly up onto the World Tree, checking if with the system being bugged there is a possibility that the wall blocking him from Asuna was gone in the process, he didn’t think he can take Yui away from her current task. And it would not feel quite right if he managed to meet up with Asuna without Yui along with him.

Thankfully, one of the other scouts had managed to answer the question of that barrier for him, albeit unintentionally – one of the Sylph players accidently flew into the barrier by mistake, without the system warning asking him to turn back. There was nothing for Kirito to do but to grit his teeth at another possibility gone. Right now, his desire to reach the top of the World Tree burned as intensively as before, but he was not going to try and attempt the <<Grand Quest>> when he has a chance of dying for real. As much as he wants to see Asuna again, he will need to be alive to be able to meet her.

True to form, the spell that was mostly used to scout out incoming foes lived up to its name, and managed to cover a wide area around the World Tree. Many of the landmarks around Arrun were gone, the NPCs as well. One of the scouts reported back there was a castle that were not in ALO out in the distance, and so Kirito volunteered to go out and take a look. If he had to be stuck standing around doing nothing he feels he might go crazy, unable to make any headway to seeing Asuna. Besides, exploring unknown areas was something he was familiar with, being a Frontliner in Aincrad adjusting to new floors all the time. In the middle of a discussion about what items are still present in Arrun, Sakuya and Alicia agreed to send him on the mission with a few other players for support. Kirito might be an expert in reacting to unknown situations, but it would be good if he has some people that know what the area used to look like and can back him up in a fight. While they had enough trouble to patrol the entirety of Arrun with only fifty or so high level faction-aligned players, they can still afford to send some with Kirito and or fill the gap with volunteers. KoKo and Carmond, for example, were such volunteers that had skills which may help and aren’t novices if things went in an unexpected tangent.

Yui, though she had wanted to come, would be more helpful right now with Sakuya and Alicia and so the navigation pixie stayed behind for the time being. Kirito wasn’t afraid Yui would be hurt if she was with him, he was willing to take her down with him into the dungeon below the <<Black Iron Palace>> after all. Though the young AI didn’t like it, she was left with Sakuya and Alicia, with both the Sylph and Cait Sith leaders promising no matter what happens in Arrun they would keep Yui safe.

Back to the present – Clyde flew closer to Kirito, and yelled to make himself heard over the wind as they flew, “You’re Kirito, right? The ‘Black Swordsman’ of SAO? What would bring a SAO survivor back into VR gaming?”

“Clyde!” Leafa shouted from the other side of Kirito. “Isn’t a rude question to ask?!”

“No, it’s alright,” Kirito said back to his sister. “I’m not offended by this question or anything. Though,” Kirito turned back to Clyde, “how did you know about that ‘Black Swordsman’ part?”

“Rumours on the net were that the Black Swordsman tracked down and defeated Kayaba Akihiko in single combat, wagering his life for the option of releasing everyone in SAO if he won,” Clyde explained. “To a lot of people, the guy’s a hero; and if it wasn’t for seeing you in action yesterday when you took down Eugene, I’d never have believed that rumour or you’re the guy that managed to do it.”

“I’m no hero,” Kirito averted his gaze from Clyde, focusing back onto searching the surroundings. Talking like this only served to remind him that Asuna was still stuck on top of the World Tree, that SAO for him hasn’t quite ended yet. Additionally, it sickened him that he was called a ‘hero’ when he was responsible for quite a few deaths back in Aincrad. It wasn’t like he could save anyone, he had got Sachi killed a year ago and almost lost Asuna as well back on Floor 75. “I just did my best to survive, and fighting Kayaba at that time was mostly to save my own hide. Our physical bodies were frail as it is, if we didn’t clear the game soon we might have died anyway.

“Look, if you want to know why I’ve came back to VRMMOs, I’ll tell you – but after we’re done scouting here and on our way back, okay? For now, keep an eye out for things.”

“Yessir.” Clyde seemed to understand Kirito would like to do his job first before chatting, and went back to his position. The rest of them remained silent as they made their way to the castle, with a few comments here and there remarking how the place did not look like how ALO used to be – Kirito would not know himself, he hadn’t been in the game long enough to tell the difference.

Barely a few minutes after Clyde’s attempt at conversation, Kirito called the group to slow down.

“We’re being watched,” Kirito informed them tensely. Out of the many <<Outside System Skills>>, abilities not listed on the user interface, the players had managed to develop Kirito had picked up a few here and there. The most common one used by nearly all of the Frontliners were <<Switch>>, moving out of a Mob’s attack range and timing it just right so the next player can come in to fight the Mob without the Mob escaping or keep going after the first player. Another, rarer OSS was <<Distinguish>>, being able to tell where everything is by sound effects. While Kirito did not manage to obtain that particular skill, he did manage to train himself up in <<Hypersense>> instead. Hypersense was the ability to tell whether there are any hostile intent in the area, or if someone was looking at you. In this case, Kirito was feeling the latter on their group right now.

“Really?” KoKo asked, glancing around at the landscape. “I don’t see anyone… and I’m pretty sure the stealth-capable Mobs don’t normally hang out in this area. How do you know we’re being watched, anyway?”

“Well…” Kirito thought about explaining Hypersense to her, but then thought against it. He didn’t think the ALO players would be inclined to believe in what is practically a sixth sense, not programed into the system at that, and it would take too long to explain right now. “I’ll explain later. For now though, can you guys send out search spells as we continue flying, please? I’m pretty sure our watchers are coming from the direction towards the castle anyway, so we won’t lose any time looking.”

“Alright, it’s your call.” KoKo shrugged and casted her <<Tracer Searcher>> spell, then what looked like small winged felines began to appear. KoKo sent them out in front of her as they continued flying. The Slyph players sent out what looked like swallows as well, though Carmond apologised for not being to cast Tracer Searcher – his own <<Magic>> level isn’t that high, being a casual ALO player at best.

“Aren’t you going to send out Tracers as well, Kirito?” KoKo asked the Spriggan.

“I’m not that good with Magic, actually,” Kirito confessed. “But I do have alternatives. Watch.”

Kirito activated his own <<Tracking>> skill, with his eyes beginning to emit a faint green glow. He also started to look around where he thought the observers are coming from, even as they flew closer.

“Oh, the <<Tracking>> skill?” KoKo looked over to Kirito with interest. “I’m surprised people actually take the time to train it up. Sure, at maxed skill level Tracking can out-perform any Tracer-type spell and it doesn’t cost even a single MP to use, but you’re limited in range with that and can only find things in line of sight. Not worth the time to train, according to most people.”

“Yeah,” Clyde nodded absently, his attention half taken by the scenes his birds have been sending him. “Most players prefer to not train the skills that are partly covered by <<Magic>>, due to opportunity cost. You have to take up a slot for skills with its utility already mostly covered by Magic anyway, so most people prefer to train up on Magic and leave the skill slots for other non-combat related skills magic can’t replicate. <<Herblore>> or <<Smithing>> related skills, for example.”

“Personal preference, I guess,” Kirito replied with a shrug. He wasn’t going to offer the info that his game avatar was basically running from the skills he had back in SAO. Sure, he worked for his skill levels just like the rest of them had for theirs, but he still felt a bit ashamed he’s gone straight into cheating with ALO, not playing the game as it was meant to be played. He had no qualms in doing so as this was for the sake of Asuna, but the gamer in him didn’t like having to take advantage of it.

“Guys, focus your Tracers over that direction,” Kirito said as he slowed down to a hover, pointing at a patch of grass a small bit of distance off from the road. “I can feel the gaze coming from over there-”

As Kirito laid his green-lit eyes onto where he thought the observers are located, ‘they’ suddenly appeared. With what looked like a bubble bursting, three humans riding on horses were revealed as the bubble faded, along with a small girl no larger than Alicia riding on what appeared to be a blue dragon with them. Expressions of disbelief were on both the airborne Fae and the humans below, though the ones below Kirito were showing fear as well. Except for the middle-aged bald man down below, instead of fear he tensed up in this situation not unlike how Kirito remembered some of the SAO Frontliners acted when faced with a surprising event. All of them held onto wands or staves of some sort, suggesting that they’ve found a party of mages right now. Three of them wore some kind of school uniform you might see in European or American schools, while the man was in some kind of brown robes.

“You weren’t kidding when you said there are watchers, huh,” KoKo said absently, observing the people below them and letting her Tracers disappear. It appeared to Kirito that the other ALO players, apart from Leafa, hadn’t really believed him when he said they were being watched. “They’re humans, too, from the looks of things. When did ALO have human options for players or NPCs?”

“Never did, if I remember it right,” Leafa said quietly, with various noises of agreement from the other players with them. “Just what is going on?”

“I think I have a good idea,” Kirito said with a heavy sigh, turning off his Tracking as he did so, “but I hope that I’m really, really wrong about this. I’m gonna go down to talk with that old guy. Land to rest your wings for now, but be prepared to fly on short notice if things go wrong.”

“What? You can’t be serious in going alone, can you?” Leafa said in astonishment. “I’m coming with you.”

“Leafa, I don’t think having two people approaching them will be seen as ‘coming in peace’ with how high-strung they look right now,” Kirito tried to dissuade her. “That old man seemed to be experienced with something like this as well, coming forward by himself to show they’re not hostile. Trust me, and let me deal with this, alright?”

“… fine, Kirito,” Leafa sighed. “But I’ll be ready to cast healing spells on you if things do go wrong, okay?”

“Just make sure you, or anyone else for that matter, do things that might end up being mistaken as trying to attack them before a fight actually breaks out,” Kirito replied. “If possible I’d like to settle this peacefully, without having to dodge spells on our way to that castle.”

Having said that, Kirito slowly lowered himself towards the ground, his hands open and to his sides to show he was not wielding any weapons. Sure, he had an impressively large sword that was almost as tall as he was strapped onto his back, but hopefully the guy with the staff won’t hold it against him…

-][-

After Colbert had asked the Academy’s serving staff to ready the horses, they made their way to the giant tree off in the distance. Luckily for him, Kirche had agreed to keep this trip as peaceful as possible when Tabitha asked her fiery friend to do so. The small Gallian girl had taken the opportunity to bring her wind dragon familiar along with her, so as to deepen their bonds, and decided to fly ahead to scout for anything unexpected. Colbert approved of that, both because seeing one of his students being proactive in trying to get to know her familiar better, and because it was a tactically sound move. It might just be paranoia, but he did not feel like this trip would be as simple as to just reach the tree and have Louise bind it. Due to that alertness however, when he had felt something approaching them in high speed and hidden by some sort of wind spell he had almost instinctively tried to roast the blue-haired girl and her dragon, thinking she was a hidden attacker diving down on them.

“Miss Tabitha, what were you thinking!” Colbert exclaimed at her. She had almost forced their horses to throw them off from the suddenness of her actions, since the Academy horses aren’t the war stallions the army have which are used to such suddenness. “Forcing your dragon to dive down like that-”

“Distant-viewing spell. Ahead. Now.”

The petite girl said urgently, ignoring Colbert’s admonishment in how she handled her familiar dangerously as she opted to focus on reshaping her stealth spell, what looked like a thin hemispherical layer of wind, so that it covered all of them. Colbert began casting the Dot-level Wind spell himself to see just what had their scout found that needed urgent attention, and from the corners of his eyes he could see Kirche doing the same thing.

What he saw made his blood run cold, and sweat began forming on his forehead.

Elves. Six of them, heading right for the Academy if their flight path stayed on their current course. Even if such a low number of them was no match for a fully armed mage knight squadron working in unison, it would still be enough to wipe out the Academy completely. Judging from how they are approaching at speed without any attempt at stealth, it was likely the incoming group knew this as well and acted with impunity.

“What’s going on?” Louise asked in confusion, for once not showing her anger or trying to hold said anger in today. Thankfully even she knew better to try and make things difficult when the remaining members of this group looked like they’ve just stared death in the face.

“We need to go back to the Academy, now,” the Germanian among them said with urgency. “We need to warn them about the attack! Why didn’t you go back and warn them, Tabitha?”

“Not sacrificing you,” Tabitha said immediately. “This way, we’re most likely to live.”

“Can someone please explain to me what is going on?” Louise said again, this time with more insistence and reining in her annoyance at being left out of the loop. She seemed to be doing that a lot today, Colbert noted, trying to distract himself from the fact Halkeginia’s ancient enemies have suddenly showed up out of nowhere.

“Long story short, there are elves coming towards us now and we better get off this road immediately,” Colbert said hurriedly and directed his horse to do so. “Miss Tabitha, how confident are you with this stealth spell?”

“Triangle class, Wind element. ‘Presence Concealment’. Barring searching spells directed at us, we should be safe,” Tabitha reported as she followed, along with the rest of his students. Louise couldn’t decide if everyone around her had gone mad, but followed along on her horse and kept quiet just in case they were right.

“I hope you’re right,” Colbert said worriedly. All he could do now was hide and wait, then after the flying elves went past he will head immediately to the Capital to call for help. As much as wanted to protect the rest of his students back at the Academy, even he knew it was futile for him to try and stop six elves by himself. The best he can hope for was for Old Osmond to stop fooling around as soon as the fighting starts and show just how he earned the position of Headmaster, buying enough time for him to get reinforcements. The old man was a pervert and a slacker, yes, but he’s also competent and an honourable man deep down – Old Osmond would die before abandoning the Academy to attackers just to save his own skin. The best Colbert can hope to do right now was protect the three students with him right now.

However, things did not go as Colbert expected.

“Can anyone else hear that?” Louise asked suddenly. “It sounds like… music?”

Colbert could hear them too. A high pitched sound from, if he’s not mistaken, string instruments predominantly, and some other instruments added into the mix. The tempo of the sounds seemed to slow down as the group of elves slowed as they came closer, suggesting that it was those ethereal wings they had that was making this sound. A horribly impractical design of the flight spell, Colbert thought, in that you can’t even sneak up on people while flying. Then again, the elves are powerful enough maybe they built this music into their flight so they can warn their prey to start running.

The one clad in black among them seemed to be the one in charge and gave some orders. The female in yellow then began to cast a spell of some sort, with what looked like writing materializing in the air around her. Glowing, winged felines formed and then scattered out from her, with three elves in green among them also doing the same, except with summoning small glowing birds instead.

“Searching spells…” Tabitha said grimly. Kirche gulped nervously as she saw the spell – or was it the contracted spirits the Firstborn races command? – began to descend onto the ground and spread out. “Not good.”

Colbert briefly considered the idea of getting his students to all get onto Tabitha’s dragon and flee, as it looked like they are going to be found anyway, while he himself will try and buy them some time. Before he can give word to this idea however, the elves had come close enough to be able to make out details without having to resort to magic to see them clearly. Behind him, he heard Louise took a sudden sharp intake of breath as she saw the pointy-eared warriors come closer, realizing the professor and her classmates were not joking around.

The one in black seemed to point at them and said something – likely the order for the searches to look over at their direction, as there were no glowing scripts accompanying his gesture – before the hemisphere of wind around them collapsed without any warning.

“Wha-?!” Both Kirche and Louise exclaimed. “Tabitha? Why did you take down the barrier?” Kirche hissed at her friend.

“Spell forcibly broken, like it was just parchment,” Tabitha replied numbly, like she was shocked at this outcome. “Ruptured without warning, not my doing… likely to be his, however.”

At her gesture, the four humans present looked up at the black-clad figure. At this distance they could see he wore a black overcoat, and what small amount of skin he showed were as pale as ash. A sword’s handle was poking out from behind one shoulder, and he had jet black spiky hair that was messy from his flight. What drew their attention the most however was his eyes – it were glowing an eerie green, before it faded to reveal he had eyes as dark as his clothing. Even without the glow however, his eyes were startling. He gazed down upon them carefully, as if gauging how dangerous they might be to his group. Despite his deceptively young appearance, his posture and focus on them belied experience like that of a veteran fighter.

“Eyes that can dispel magic…? As much as I’d like to say that’s impossible, we are talking about flying elves here,” Kirche said with a forced laugh. “Oh good Lord… we’re all going to die here, aren’t we? Fighting elves…”

Thankfully, for some reason, the elves above them did not take advantage of their moment of shock and ensuing discussion to eliminate them all. Apart from their leader, who had kept his glowing eyes on them, the rest of his group seemed as surprised at this outcome as the humans below were.

Or maybe they were just discussing how to kill them all as entertainingly as possible, and yet not take too long before they back to their original assignment. Colbert wouldn’t know how elves might think about things, what little he knew about them suggested they had an alien way of thinking compared to humans.

“I am going to try and reason with them,” Colbert told his three students. “In the meantime, if it looks like they are going to attack, flee without me. Split up, try to report back to the Academy or contact anyone that can help. Above all else, try and stay alive.”

Colbert ignored Kirche’s snort of contempt at his pacifist nature, at how he wanted to solve things without violence in this situation, and the sudden change of it turning into a choking sound as he declared he’ll buy time for them to escape. He dismounted from his horse, walking slowly towards the hovering group in front of him and kept his arms to the side while pointing his staff away from anyone. In his slow approach he observed the rest of the group of elves, which he was sure they were doing the same to him and his students from above:

To one side of the leader in black was one small female in yellow and tan coloured light armour, wearing a helmet that had designed with the shape of cat ears in mind. To her side was someone dressed in heavy red armour that concealed the gender of the wearer, with a set of shield and sword with him or her. On the other side of their leader were three elves in a green motif, two males in what was clearly top quality armour that covered them fully and had swords of equal worth to their sides. The final one of the green-clad elves looked to be the one least suitable for combat, her clothing being the least suitable for combat amongst them as far as he could tell. Colbert marked her down as a magic specialist as support for their head on fighters because of that, despite a curved sword to her side – she just didn’t seem suitably attired for head on fighting.

The elves seemed to be willing to negotiate with him, as the one in black began to descend towards him slowly with his hands to the side, showing he’s now wielding any weapons. That was only small comfort though, considering the strength of the elves lies more with their magic as opposed to their impressive reflexes or their weapon skills – chances are, even without weapons the elf could kill him in a dozen different ways. The rest of the black-clad elf’s group descended some distance behind him, though the female in green looked like she was ready to step in and support on a moment’s notice, from how she seemed to be as tense as Colbert was. Things could easily turn into a massacre here if Colbert was not careful.

“Greetings. I’m Professor Colbert, a teacher at the Tristain Academy of Magic,” Colbert began to say as the apparent youthful elf stopped approximately ten mails from him, “I teach the Fire-element classes to second and third year students there, and also teach basic magic theory to the first years.”

“Hello to you too,” the elf replied neutrally. “I’m Kirito, a Spriggan who is currently employed by Lady Sakuya, the current leader of the Sylphs. In light of recent events, I guess I’m also marginally in the service of Lady Alicia Rue, who is the leader of the Cait Siths.”

So far, so good, Colbert thought. Things didn’t start – and end with – his swift and painful death as he had half-expected. Though most of the terms used by this Kirito were unfamiliar to him – the Sylphs he had read somewhere are lesser Wind spirits, but he has no idea what kind of entities Spriggans or Cait Sith were. Likewise, the names ‘Sakuya’ and ‘Alicia Rue’ doesn’t ring any bells for him, not being any names from old myths about the Firstborn races or spirits he has come across. Then again, he was not exactly well read in this field…

“May I inquire into your purpose here in the heart of Tristain’s territory? Elves as far as I know don’t venture out from their territory in the Sahara often, if at all,” Colbert asked politely.

“… Elves?” Kirito tilted his head questioningly. “Is this a terminology difference? We’re ‘Faeries’, not elves. Have you heard about the nine faerie races of Alfheim, or the World Tree they are trying to reach the top of?”

“I’m afraid not,” Colbert shook his head even as his mind raced. As far as anyone in Halkeginia knew, the elves were not split into nine races. Or even into two races. They held a united front, a single nation that could beat back simultaneous invasions from both Halkeginia to their west and Rub’al Khali to their east with absurd ease. “The only ‘World Tree’ I can think of is the port at La Rochelle, but the size of that tree pales in comparison to the one that showed up suddenly over there. Then again, I must admit I am not an expert in this field…”

“I see,” Kirito nodded once, his eyes seemed calculating at this piece of revelation. “To answer your previous question, the six of us here are to investigate the castle over there – the Tristain Academy of Magic you mentioned, I assume? – that appeared in the landscape that was not there before the incident that affected Arrun and the World Tree. Though from your point of view, it might be more accurate to say when that incident occurred Arrun and our World Tree were brought over here instead…”

“Arrun?” Colbert asked.

“The neutral capital city of Alfheim, located at the base of the World Tree,” Kirito explained. “There are also other neutral towns and villages in Alfheim, or so I’ve been told, that’s smaller than Arrun. Apart from those places, the only other cities are the Faction Capitals of each of the nine faerie races.”

Colbert was certain Kirito was looking intently at his posture, his expressions, to see if he knew anything about what he was talking about. The reasons were unfathomable to Colbert however, the Fire mage could not understand why an elf – or as he called themselves, ‘faeries’ – would be so focused on finding out what a professor he had just met knew about his people.

More importantly, Colbert focused on what Kirito had said about Arrun:

“Wait, so an entire city of your people was brought over here?” Colbert gasped. That was not good. Assuming the faeries’ capital was anything like that of Tristain’s, the capital city Tristainia with a population of at least tens of thousands of people, it would be a disaster. Unlike the humans with their commoner/noble divide of magic users, every single elven citizen was at least a capable magic user and fighter with capability roughly that of a human Triangle class mage. If the faeries are of similar capabilities, then their city alone would hold enough force to be able to deal critical damage to the entirety of Tristain’s military forces should it come to war.

“As far as we know, we’re the only ones,” Kirito said solemnly. “Communication methods that allow us to contact others regardless of distance are not working right now, so we can’t check if the other capitals or towns have appeared here right now. On that matter, I don’t suppose you know anything about how we – that is, the World Tree and inhabitants of Arrun – might have got here, do you?”

“No, I can’t think of anything,” Colbert replied, trying to keep his voice level in his tension. Kirito’s gaze became sharper with his last question, and the slight shift in the Spriggan’s stance made it clear he knew he was asking a critical question that the answer to it might turn this conversation into a battle if it did not go well. And to be technical about it, Colbert doesn’t know anything about this, merely suspects them. He’ll be damned before he lets his students be in danger because of his careless words. “We were affected by a bright flash of light and what felt like the world itself shaking apart, and after that had passed we saw the giant tree in the distance. We thought it might have had something to do with this occurrence, and moved to investigate.”

“Hmm…”

-][-

Something about Colbert’s words didn’t add up, Kirito decided. He snuck a glance to Colbert’s ‘party’ at the back. Upon closer inspection, there’s something that felt off about the entire set-up. He was no expert when it came to a party of mages, but there should be the general roles with a group of fighters. For example, a tank, healer, main damage dealer, and so on.

Colbert felt like the main damage dealer with a ‘STR-build’ in terms of magic, or maybe a ‘tank’ that draws the ‘hate’ of any opponent so the others in his group can attack with less problems. He certainly seemed to be the most dangerous one of his party. The blue-haired girl looked to be next most experienced after Colbert, possibly giving a support role. She’s probably an ‘AGI-build’ in terms of mages and fights like Argo, focusing on fast attacks and evading enemy’s moves. The red-haired girl looked to be possibly another damage dealer, though she seems to not have diversified into being a tank as well, lacking the combat experience to try.

Then there was the pink-haired girl. Kirito had thought of her to be maybe the healer of the group, or maybe the status buff/debuffer. From how she seems to be trembling however that didn’t seem to be the case – there’s a noticeable combat experience gap between her and the rest of her group. Rather than being a member of the party in her own right, she seemed more like one of those weak NPCs in escort missions that was a pain in the backside to get to the end without dying. It was like having a newbie that never left the Town of Beginnings forced into a Frontline guild at beyond Floor 30.

So, this probably wasn’t a simple recon mission. Why would there be an escort mission to the World Tree, then, was the question. If Kirito had to guess, it was because they’re involved in bringing the World Tree and Arrun here somehow. Assuming, of course, this is actually all now some kind of ‘real’ reality like he thought, and not something like Kayaba messing with them all from beyond the grave, changing the ALO systems. On the other hand, even if this is some kind of ‘fake’ world, chances are this could be the beginning of the Quest that can fix everything.

Either way, time to find out for sure.

“So you can tell me for sure, then,” Kirito began to say, and openly glance over at where Colbert’s students were behind him. “That the pink-haired girl over there have nothing to do with how we might have got here?”

-][-

Louise flinched at Kirito’s words. Tabitha had casted ‘Wind Whispers’ earlier, so they can hear the conversation between Professor Colbert and the elf, or now as they have heard, faerie, so they can have some warning to flee before their enemy attacks. Louise was scared out of her wits, and was not confident she would be able to escape if it came down to that. She was not a skilled rider, even assuming her horse would be able to outrun the faeries. She wouldn’t last a minute fleeing before being shot down by spells from above. Nonetheless she strived to not show all that on the surface. She might not have mother’s ‘Rule of Steel’ discipline, but she would not let her emotions drive her into blind panic. A Valliere was better than that, and if she was going to die she’d go down fighting as best as she could. That self-control was now on the verge of fraying apart, however, as she was sure the youth named Kirito had noticed her reaction.

Louise gripped the reins to her horse tighter, and every bit of her body screamed to start escaping now if she wanted to live. Her honour though would not allow her to run before the Zerbst did, since even if she manages to live through this somehow by fleeing now, her mother would not forgive this shame on the Valliere family name and what it meant to be a Noble. Louise would rather die here and now, with her pride intact, than to live with shame for the rest of her life.

-][-

“Why in the world would you think that?” Colbert protested. “Miss Valliere is just a student at the Academy. And to be able to bring something like that giant tree and a city of people over, that’s impossible even with magic!”

“But the impossible had happened,” Kirito replied coolly. “The World Tree, Arrun, and the pla- our people had appeared here. I agree with you that this should have been impossible, even with the knowledge and resources on our side… but that does not explain how here and now, we are speaking with you in this impossible situation.

“As for why I would think so: you’re going on a possibly dangerous recon mission, checking out an unknown situation. I can understand why you brought the blue-haired girl over there, she’s used to doing this kind of things. The red-haired girl, too, while she’s not an experienced fighter like her friend there I can tell she’s confident of her abilities. There are signs of tension, nervousness, yeah… but not being taken over by fear. She’s someone who has the theoretical skills, but not the real combat experience on the field.

“Then there’s Miss Valliere over there. Timid, and trying to put up a brave front. Unless she has some kind of switch that makes her a fearsome berserker in battle, I’m guessing she’s just an inexperienced little girl that has no place in a recon mission. If anything, this seems more like an escort mission, with you three as guards for her and on your way to take her to the World Tree.”

Colbert opened his mouth, and then closed it. This repeated several more times, before the professor gave up in trying to dodge the question. “You’re very observant, aren’t you?”

“After a few dozen Quests on Aincrad’s Frontlines, you either become this observant or you die,” the black-haired youth replied with barely any reaction at his past experiences. “So, care to change your previous answer?”

“I’ll acknowledge that we were going to try and bring Miss Valliere to the… World Tree… as you said,” Colbert admitted. “There was a familiar summoning ritual earlier today, and that tree showed up a bit after Miss Valliere attempted to summon her familiar. However, we had no idea this outcome was possible, or even that the summoning spell would bring along a city of people. We just wanted to see if that tree was somehow Miss Valliere’s familiar.”

“There’s no lasting harm done… this far, anyway,” Kirito said. “I don’t suppose we can be sent back to where we came from? That’s the most pressing thing right now for us, and if she can do that then we won’t have to go bother the others at the Academy.”

“That’s… not possible, as far as I know,” Colbert said apologetically. For a second he considered trying to bluff his way out of this, saying they could be sent back, but decided against it. It would only postpone the inevitable outburst, and once the faeries had found out after they have been tricked then their fury would be even more fearsome than finding out now, that Colbert was sure of. Damage control, even if he was not sure if it would make any difference here, was the best answer in his view. “The familiar summoning spell normally calls a willing creature to be the mage’s companion for life, and in six thousand years of history there have been no records of a familiar being sent back magically to where it came from. It’s not just that traditionally speaking it would be blasphemy to go against a sacred ritual, but also we have no idea how to even accomplish this goal with our magic.”

“Wait, six thousand years of history and nobody had ever attempted to do this?” Kirito asked incredulously. “Not even records of something, like, I don’t know, condemning a mage for the crime of researching a way to reverse this ritual?”

“It’s practically a law of magic that this can’t be done,” Colbert argued. “It’s like how the sun will always rise from the east, it’s something no amount of magic or spellcasting can change. The summoning is a one-way journey, unfortunately.”

“There has to be a way,” Kirito muttered, almost as much to himself as it was a reply to Colbert. “The impossible have been done before, surely the same can be said for our situation…”

“Maybe you’d want to speak with the Headmaster of the Academy, a mage named Old Osmond,” Colbert suggested. “I’m sure if anyone in Tristain can help resolving this matter, it would be him. It would certainly be better than trying to rush things through by ourselves, correct? And your group were planning on making a visit to the Academy anyway…”

“…” Kirito took a few moments to consider Colbert’s proposal. The bald professor prayed fervently that the Spriggan would accept, instead of doing something drastic like kidnapping Louise and take her back to try and find some ultimately futile way to force her to send them back somehow. He tried to portray the issue as something related to more about the laws of magic than about an individual’s actions, to shift blame from any single person. And by giving Kirito an option that has some chance of succeeding it would hopefully make things less likely to end in bloodshed.

“Alright; I accept,” Kirito finally said. “You and your students can go back to the Academy first; we’ll catch up as soon as I tell others about the situation here. Chances are we won’t be that far behind you, our flight speed is most likely faster than how fast you can ride on the horses.”

“Many thanks, Kirito,” Colbert said with a sigh of relief. “I’m glad we can settle things without having to fight or cause deaths.”

“Things aren’t over yet, professor,” Kirito told him. “And it won’t be until we’re sent back. Many of us have family and friends waiting for us back where we’re summoned from. I don’t even want to imagine the kind of chaos we might create if the pla- people of Alfheim are overcome with grief and anger, finding out they can’t get back and started lashing out.”

“I-I understand,” Colbert said hesitatingly. He hoped that was just a friendly reminder by Kirito and not actually a veiled threat of violent retribution against Tristain for their actions if things do not go well. “Well, I’d better be going, then.”

Colbert then turned around and walked quickly back to his students. While he didn’t think Kirito was the kind of person to attack him while his back was turned, he glanced back anyway. The black-clad youth also made his way back to his group, and began to fill his comrades in on his decision. Upon returning to his students, who were all unharmed thankfully, he noticed an atmosphere of gloom around them. Louise looked like she was on the verge of breaking down, visibly shaking, and the other two girls present also did not look like they are in any way relieved the faeries had not struck them down right here.

“I take it you all have heard our conversation, then?” Colbert asked rhetorically and mounted back onto his horse. He wasn’t surprised that one of them, most likely Tabitha, had probably tried to listen in discreetly for one reason or another. “Good, it’ll save me some time in filling you all in. We’ll talk as we ride back to notify Old Osmond of this development, time is of the essence here. Miss Tabitha, please go on ahead to give a brief warning to Old Osmond we’re about to receive some… ‘difficult’… visitors.”

“No point,” Tabitha replied from her position on her dragon. “Headmaster and staff members are unlikely to clear the entrance by the time faeries arrive. Not on my words alone. Better to stay with you all and provide support.”

Colbert gritted his teeth. He can’t exactly argue that some of his colleagues, for example Professor Keita, would be as banal as to ignore outlandish warnings because it did not fit their expectations of the world. And Old Osmond wouldn’t be as quick to wield his authority as heavily as he would if Colbert was the one delivering the warning instead of Tabitha, forcing the rest of the staff to comply instantly. “Alright, but we will have to ride fast to get there as soon as possible.”

Without waiting for a reply, Colbert began to drive his horse into a gallop as he headed back towards the Academy, with the rest of his students following.

===
 
It's a tad dissapointing how low-key a response Titania had to Kirirto's name drop. Given the build up during Asuna's previous scene, I was expecting something...more? Otherwise, this seems like a decisive start; even though you're using the same basic premise as Triggerhappy, you've made it well and distinct. Your sentence structure seems to run-on in places, but otherwise, very nice.
 
Poor Asuna...:( "Titania" had better get back her memories eventually, or else.:mad:

As long as there's a way for Kirito and Asuna to get back together though, I'm okay with this. I can enjoy heart-wrenching drama as long as everything turns out okay in the end. It would be interesting if the new memories of Titania came to merge with hers as Asuna.
 

Triggerhappy

You Gotta Listen to Big Sis!
Kind of Trippy to see my OCs being reused by someone else. I gave you permission so its okay, but still . . . Wow . . . Kind of like meeting your own clone and doing that mirror thing.

To see this -sniff- brings a tear to my eye. Like I said when you suggested this . . . Being Kirito is suffering :(

That said, I can't wait for Kirito to meet Titania . . . He's going to die a little inside, isn't he?
 

HawaiianOnline

Macross Fan
Super Awesome Happy Funtime
Kind of Trippy to see my OCs being reused by someone else. I gave you permission so its okay, but still . . . Wow . . . Kind of like meeting your own clone and doing that mirror thing.

To see this -sniff- brings a tear to my eye. Like I said when you suggested this . . . Being Kirito is suffering :(

That said, I can't wait for Kirito to meet Titania . . . He's going to die a little inside, isn't he?
It's an ATL. At least it's not along the lines of Mirrorverse Star Trek. Nobody here has a goatee.... yet...:p
 

Flere821

Amicus
Oh sweet, another SAO crossover and it's by Flere of all people! This is gonna be aweso--
Sorry dude but I'm detecting Velle Anima quantities of angst in this premise so I'll be giving this one a pass.
I figured you'd say that from what's here thus far ^^; My response:
Don't worry, it won't ever get that bad. Even I have standards.
 
Damn, if this is going to be as sad as Velle Anima, I'll want to read it.

...But, I haven't read SAO's light novels, since I'm waiting for anime's second/third season (which probably will never get made). So, I'm afraid I'll spoil myself.
 

Ryune

Hotel Manager
Damn, if this is going to be as sad as Velle Anima, I'll want to read it.

...But, I haven't read SAO's light novels, since I'm waiting for anime's second/third season (which probably will never get made). So, I'm afraid I'll spoil myself.
Having read the novels up to 8 And watched most of the anime I will say that the novels portray the general feeling of the story much better. I would highly suggest reading at least the first 4 volumes as they coincide with most of the anime. The murder mystery arc however is in the novel "early and late."

EDIT: also, on the story itself, there are a few grammar errors that I'm just too tired to ferret out but the only thing that really twigged me was already mentioned. Titania's rather minor reaction to Kirito's name. It is, in the grand scheme of things, a small thing but it was something that had the potential to give her a thread of thought to be noted as something to look into later. She is an AI after all. A flag related to something as unique as a name that doesn't immediately call up the relevant information is a cause for concern and should at least be flagged for a future data recovery attempt.
 

75% Certain

25% Expressing Solidarity
Kind of Trippy to see my OCs being reused by someone else. I gave you permission so its okay, but still . . . Wow . . . Kind of like meeting your own clone and doing that mirror thing.
OC DO NOT STEAL

As for the story itself, well, it has the potential misfortune of following not one or two but three lines of canon, and having to differentiate itself from each one while still establishing individuality. I'm not gonna lie, that hurts FiF's second and third chapters. The summoning is very well done and effectively lays out the alternate direction you're taking, but the post-transition scene was pretty much a cliffnotes version of Halk Online's, and it showed. The first contact scene also failed to realize its potential; everyone was perfectly diplomatic and all misunderstandings were cleanly resolved (or at least put aside) before they created any drama. That's not to say that the scenes were weak or incompetent, as Kirito's scouting prowess was a good establishing sequence for everyone involved.

That brings me to the closest thing I have to a legit complaint: Kirito's deduction of Louise's role. I had a hard time swallowing this, and I had to pause and parse it properly. After I did that, the answer can to me: as a gamer, Kirito naturally thinks it terms of roles and efficiency, and his SAO experience would have led him to factor in psychological readiness into his calculations. Upon meeting Team Colbert, he would have sized them up and instinctively categorized them into how they would fit into a combat party: Leader, DPS, caster, wait this last one's shaking in her boots! Kirito would have then fielded a few hypotheses, and one of them was both plausible enough to take a shot on and appealed to his human instict of wishful thinking. The problem with all of this is that I had to totally disengage myself to process what was going on in Kirito's mind; it would have been a much smoother read had there been a paragraph or two laying out Kirito's pattern of thought for us to follow (at least for this first time).

On the grammar front, very little to whine about. I think there were two or three instances where you used 'have' instead of 'has' in a tense mix-up, but nothing else threw me off.

Minor critiques aside, I'm quite excited and can't wait to see the Elves throw down with Halk.
 

Ryune

Hotel Manager
That brings me to the closest thing I have to a legit complaint: Kirito's deduction of Louise's role. I had a hard time swallowing this, and I had to pause and parse it properly. After I did that, the answer can to me: as a gamer, Kirito naturally thinks it terms of roles and efficiency, and his SAO experience would have led him to factor in psychological readiness into his calculations. Upon meeting Team Colbert, he would have sized them up and instinctively categorized them into how they would fit into a combat party: Leader, DPS, caster, wait this last one's shaking in her boots! Kirito would have then fielded a few hypotheses, and one of them was both plausible enough to take a shot on and appealed to his human instict of wishful thinking. The problem with all of this is that I had to totally disengage myself to process what was going on in Kirito's mind; it would have been a much smoother read had there been a paragraph or two laying out Kirito's pattern of thought for us to follow (at least for this first time).
Blarg, so that's what I was forgetting. Yeah, that entire portion of the scene was kind of jarring. The problem with him outlining everything though is that Kirito's deduction was supposed to be a surprise for both the reader and the other characters. It's both just a little too much out of left field, and much too accurate to the story itself when you aren't thinking in RPG mode. That causes the readers to just go "wut" right then and there and breaks the flow before they read up to the point that explains his reasoning. The best I could think of to solve this is have a line or two when he is observing the group and idly think about how much it resembles an escort quest. Make it subtle that it is little more than idle speculation and most readers will look at it and think "Oh, he's just thinking about his questing experiences."
 

Flere821

Amicus
As for the story itself, well, it has the potential misfortune of following not one or two but three lines of canon, and having to differentiate itself from each one while still establishing individuality. I'm not gonna lie, that hurts FiF's second and third chapters. The summoning is very well done and effectively lays out the alternate direction you're taking, but the post-transition scene was pretty much a cliffnotes version of Halk Online's, and it showed. The first contact scene also failed to realize it's potential; everyone was perfectly diplomatic and all misunderstandings were cleanly resolved (or at least put aside) before they created any drama. That's not to say that the scenes were weak or incompetent, as Kirito's scouting prowess was a good establishing sequence for everyone involved.
I know, I was sort of trying to rush through those parts so I can get started on the differences between my version and TH's. Sadly, the general theme of my version will be going somewhat along TH's one, in terms of trying to fit in and settle for a treaty, despite a ton of other differences planned (eg, no Albion arc, no Pixie Sidequest, and in return there's dealing with Titania and also the issue of [REDACTED]). After that point though, well, all stations of canon (regardless of SAO, ZnT, or TH's Halk Online) are going to be blown out of the water.
That brings me to the closest thing I have to a legit complaint: Kirito's deduction of Louise's role. I had a hard time swallowing this, and I had to pause and parse it properly. After I did that, the answer can to me: as a gamer, Kirito naturally thinks it terms of roles and efficiency, and his SAO experience would have led him to factor in psychological readiness into his calculations. Upon meeting Team Colbert, he would have sized them up and instinctively categorized them into how they would fit into a combat party: Leader, DPS, caster, wait this last one's shaking in her boots! Kirito would have then fielded a few hypotheses, and one of them was both plausible enough to take a shot on and appealed to his human instict of wishful thinking. The problem with all of this is that I had to totally disengage myself to process what was going on in Kirito's mind; it would have been a much smoother read had there been a paragraph or two laying out Kirito's pattern of thought for us to follow (at least for this first time).
Hmm okay, I'll try and fix that abruptness somehow later. Thanks for the comments :)
 

75% Certain

25% Expressing Solidarity
I know, I was sort of trying to rush through those parts so I can get started on the differences between my version and TH's. Sadly, the general theme of my version will be going somewhat along TH's one, in terms of trying to fit in and settle for a treaty, despite a ton of other differences planned (eg, no Albion arc, no Pixie Sidequest, and in return there's dealing with Titania and also the issue of [REDACTED]). After that point though, well, all stations of canon (regardless of SAO, ZnT, or TH's Halk Online) are going to be blown out of the water.
If you want to portray the same-ish sequence of initial events, I'd recommend using the space to play with different perspectives and really get into how the characters are thinking, maybe use a few that we don't normally see or wouldn't see otherwise. If there's enough character focus, it's easier to forgive the glossing over of repetitive events.
 

Flere821

Amicus
If you want to portray the same-ish sequence of initial events, I'd recommend using the space to play with different perspectives and really get into how the characters are thinking, maybe use a few that we don't normally see or wouldn't see otherwise. If there's enough character focus, it's easier to forgive the glossing over of repetitive events.
*nods* yeah, I was planning on that to begin with. eg, Karin's POV when it comes to the treaty negotiations (versus Henrietta's in Halk Online), and the SAO cast's POV for some of the events as well will be used.
 

deadheadzed

Empty Husk
Oh god, it's fanfiction of fanfiction. Now, all I need to do is make fanfiction of this fanfiction to cause a space-time anomaly to power my galactic toaster.

It looks like among the differences that render everything all sorts of fucked is the initial meeting of the fae and humans. Besides the obvious changes like Louise being present, it seems a bit more tense and uneasy than the scene in HO. I can't help but notice how much more afraid they are.
 

Blackraptor

The guy with the thing over there at the place.
Oh sweet! A different spin on a ZnTxSAO fic written by...Flere281?!

*Prays to Flere furiously*
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!

*Remembers Twice the Misfortune and Minds, Memories, and Misfortune*

*Prayer Intensifies*
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
 

Flere821

Amicus
RE: Kirito's deduction too surprising:
Blarg, so that's what I was forgetting. Yeah, that entire portion of the scene was kind of jarring. The problem with him outlining everything though is that Kirito's deduction was supposed to be a surprise for both the reader and the other characters. It's both just a little too much out of left field, and much too accurate to the story itself when you aren't thinking in RPG mode. That causes the readers to just go "wut" right then and there and breaks the flow before they read up to the point that explains his reasoning. The best I could think of to solve this is have a line or two when he is observing the group and idly think about how much it resembles an escort quest. Make it subtle that it is little more than idle speculation and most readers will look at it and think "Oh, he's just thinking about his questing experiences."
That brings me to the closest thing I have to a legit complaint: Kirito's deduction of Louise's role. I had a hard time swallowing this, and I had to pause and parse it properly. After I did that, the answer can to me: as a gamer, Kirito naturally thinks it terms of roles and efficiency, and his SAO experience would have led him to factor in psychological readiness into his calculations. Upon meeting Team Colbert, he would have sized them up and instinctively categorized them into how they would fit into a combat party: Leader, DPS, caster, wait this last one's shaking in her boots! Kirito would have then fielded a few hypotheses, and one of them was both plausible enough to take a shot on and appealed to his human instict of wishful thinking. The problem with all of this is that I had to totally disengage myself to process what was going on in Kirito's mind; it would have been a much smoother read had there been a paragraph or two laying out Kirito's pattern of thought for us to follow (at least for this first time).
Made some changes to that bit. This was written while I'm kinda tired though, so I'll come back and fix it tomorrow. Give me some kind of feedback like if this was kinda what you're looking for, and if not then give me some more detailed suggestions if you have them please.
 

Flere821

Amicus
Oh sweet! A different spin on a ZnTxSAO fic written by...Flere281?!

*Prays to Flere furiously*
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!

*Remembers Twice the Misfortune and Minds, Memories, and Misfortune*

*Prayer Intensifies*
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Please finish this story!
Don't worry, this one is at least 80%[1] planned out, unlike MMM which was written purely due to new character hype and I didn't have the rest of that planned out after 60% way through. TtM, that one is fully planned out but I kinda lost interest with that... though I can't even remember exactly why I lost interest, probably something like the main OC is too sue-ish despite having a frakton of despair planned for her? Writer's Block? I'll probably remember after a good night's sleep.


[1] - first 60% of story planned, and last 20%. Should this go the way of MMM and I can't come up with a way to bridge this gap between the two segments, pray that SB have enough of a think tank that's both willing and able to get me out of that problem. Mizuki_Stone did it with one of his Lev fics IIRC, hopefully it'll work for me as well...

EDIT: Now if you will excuse me, I need to go sleep. G'night all.
 

themwarlord

[none]
Okay. Let's see here... *reads until ch 2 where I lost the will to continue*

Character interaction doesn't feel that natural. For example, I can't really imagine people would act as calm and objective as Kirito and friends did when the summoning happened. This is a traphole that a lot of fanfic suffered from, people's reaction are too clinical and doesn't fit the situation. On other kind of fic this would usually be at least tolerable for me, but I guess after TriggerHappy's high quality work I was spoiled and now my standard for this crossover became pretty high. Sorry :p

Also, erasing Asuna's memories and turning her into part-Cardinal? Ugh. Even if the quality is as good as TH's I don't think I'm going to continue reading such a fic with so much angst and despair potential. Personal preference I guess...

Other than those two things I don't think I have anything else to add. Not gonna follow though, the plot isn't really my thing. Good luck anyway.
 
Please at least tell me that things will work out in the end between Kirito and Asuna. I am willing to read heart-wrenching stories if things eventually work out. No matter how many cruel challenges they face, as long as I know that the lovers are able to come together again by the end I can continue to read.

On another note, I was a little disappointed in the way you went about Titania's new personality. Her mechanical mindset is interesting, but it just seems a little dull. I was hoping for you to take the Titania conversion in a different direction. If such a thing had happened in Trigger's work (thank goodness it didn't), where the monsters are gaining life and sentience of their own, I would expect for Titania to be a true fairy queen with unique memories and personality based on her game programming and the mythical fairy she is meant to embody. I kind of want to see something like that happen in this story. It would be interesting to see what kind of personality would develop. Plus, assuming you plan to create conflict through the struggle for Kirito to get Asuna to remember, this would create more tension; if Titania is a person herself, with human traits people can empathize with, destroying her to bring back Asuna creates its own moral dilemmas, just like how the people had to readjust to the growing sentience of certain monsters. The angst and denial "Titania" would feel upon learning that her entire life is a lie would be very moving. If you're going about the program transfers a different way though, I understand.
 
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