Harmony (Worm / Avatar : TLA / Altpower)

Water 1.1
This is a Worm/Avatar: The Last Airbender crossover.
This has been sitting in my google docs for maybe a year, and I'm thinking about trying to write it again. Full disclosure: I almost never post in these threads, so I know nothing of formatting or any of that stuff, so any help would be appreciated. Also for beta readers. Also for motivation to keep writing this. Anyway.



Harmony


Water 1.1​


Visions flooded past me faster than I could process them. Bits and pieces flashed in front of me, fragments of a world I’d never seen and could hardly imagine. Entire societies rose and fell, an indiscernible amount of unity, with war bleeding into the edges of a simple people. A series of figures, all powerful, almost divine and regal, floated to the forefront of my mind. A woman in green wearing blurry, white make up. An old man in a red cloak. A smiling bald man in a red and pale yellow outfit with a tattoo on his head. Finally, a dark skinned woman with dark hair wearing a traditional outfit in blue. They stared with varying amounts of severity before several different iterations of them appeared behind them. Same outfits, different people. Similar people, different outfits. So many of them, tens or hundreds of thousands stood within the fog that I could see. They reached towards me.


I woke up in a hospital bed.


It wasn’t the usual sort of waking up, either. No bleary hesitation from my eyes, no need for light adjustment in the dimly lit ICU, no cold sweat from the usual bullying nightmare or reliving the news of my mother’s death. Just a calm opening of the eyelids. While I would usually find this unusual, I instead tried to remember what had happened. What had happened? I was at school, then... oh. I closed my eyes while revisiting the locker in my memory. I’d been pushed in there by Sophia. Bloody tampons. Vomit everywhere. And then... nothing. Now I was in this room.

I sat up slightly, attempting to recall the dream I’d had. No, not a dream. It had felt significantly clearer than any dream I’d had in my entire life. Now, though, I couldn’t remember any part of it, no matter how much I racked my brain. While that was a slight irritation, it didn’t bother me nearly as much as I felt like it usually would. If I thought about it, a lot of things weren’t worrying me terribly, although I felt that they probably should. The embarrassment of the whole locker situation, of being sent to the hospital, of having to explain to my dad why I was here, how much the hospital was going to charge. I got the sense that normally, I’d be freaking out from these incredibly immediate stressors, but I felt an unnatural calm. My mind’s thoughts flowed easily from one thought to another, as though they were drifting across a calm river. I blinked. That had been a strange metaphor.

Beeps from the ECG reminded me where I was. There was an IV plugged into my arm. the liquid in the pouch fed into me, making me feel strange. I couldn’t describe it, but even without looking at it, I could tell that it was there. It felt connected to me, somehow, as if it were waiting for me to look at it, to touch it. I raised a hand hesitantly just before a nurse walked into the room. She looked young and pretty, with wavy brunette hair. Probably just out of med school. Somehow, I had the presence of mind to put my hand down.

“Oh, thank goodness you’re awake.” she breathed. She really did look relieved, to be fair. Was there some risk of me not waking up? “I’ll wake up your father, he’s been at your side this entire time.”

I opened my mouth only to find out it was dry. Parched. “How long have I been here?” I rasped, making a concerted effort to not cough.

Her face fell. “It’s... been a couple days, honey. I’ll... I'll get your dad, okay?” she replied, a little too sweetly. Probably wanted to be out of the room as soon as possible. To be honest, so did I.

“Okay. Could you also get me a cup of water?” I requested, as gently as I could manage. I didn’t want to be rude, but I needed it for more than one reason.

“Of course.” And as swiftly as she entered, she left. Before she could return, I raised my hand again in the direction of the water in the IV. Nothing happened. I furrowed my brow, tried to concentrate. Still nothing. As I waved my hand from side to side, the water in the pouch swayed slightly, although it was hard to tell whether or not that was because the arm I wasn’t using was directly connected to the pouch. I turned my palm face up and tried to raise the water with my hand. Didn’t budge. I chewed the inside of my cheek before raising my hand again, this time with my fingers down and my wrist loose. A glob of water began to rise and separate itself from the rest of the water in the pouch, although it didn’t exit the pouch. I raised my eyebrows. This was new.

I looked to the open door. Somehow, I could sense that someone was bringing me water in a small cup. I looked away from the pouch of water and tried to point at it. I looked again, finger still pointing, and saw that I was pointing directly at the pouch. Like touching my nose. I glanced at the door, feeling the water come closer as voices began to become clearer from the doorway. I couldn’t sense it from very far away, apparently. Maybe a few yards. But it was something. One test down, at least.

I put away thoughts of experiments I’d have to run in order to compose myself for my father. He entered in a rush, the nurse trailing behind him like a kicked puppy, and froze as he saw me, took me in.

“Taylor.” he said quietly, looking as if he were about to cry. Whether it was in happiness or dismay, I wasn’t sure.

I cleared my throat. “Hey, dad.” I attempted a smile, but I could feel how weak it was. How weak I felt. He crossed the room in few strides and hugged me. Close, but not too tightly, as if he were afraid of breaking something. I hugged him back as hard as I could, which probably didn't amount to much. “Sorry for not…” I blinked. What was I sorry for?

For not talking to him, maybe. For drifting away like I had. For hiding all of this from him. For not being the person he wanted me to be, the person my mom would've wanted me to be. I guessed all of that would have to be said in those three words.

When he did pull away, he had tears in his eyes. They were bloodshot, his eyelids a mixture of red and darkness. The lack of sleep could not be more apparent. “Don’t apologize.” He stated, firmly. “I should have…” He paused for a moment, as if he were trying to find the right words. “I should have paid more attention to you. What you were going through.” he said, finally. “Are you all right?”

Other than an extreme amount of guilt? I looked towards the nurse, who was inching slowly towards the door. Sadly, she wouldn’t escape so easily. “I just need a bit of water.” I said, loud enough for her to hear. She hurried forward now, to give me a dixie cup of water. I drank it greedily, feeling it go down my throat and hit my stomach, which was unsurprisingly empty. “Thank you.” I told the nurse as genuinely as I could. She nodded before taking that as her cue to retrieve the cup and flee from the room. She must not enjoy scenes such as these, or maybe she'd seen the bad side of my father’s infamous temper.

My father glanced at her with slight irritation before training his attention on me once more. The latter, then. “Do you know who did this to you?”

I looked down at myself, at the uncomfortable hospital bed. I couldn’t tell him. Not only would it infuriate him, to know it was Emma Barnes, my former best friend and her clique that had done this to me, it would break him to know I’d let it get this far without telling him. I shook my head. “I know, but I don’t think I can tell you.” He opened his mouth to protest, but I cut him off. “I know you want to help. But the teachers and faculty are going to want proof, and for whatever reason, the bullies have more pull than I do. They might get in a little trouble, but it’d only make it worse for me in the end.”

It wasn’t fair to him, and I knew it. But it was the truth, and that was better than lying. I was tired of lying to him. He was the one person I had in my life that was anywhere near close to me, after Emma and... my mom. I didn’t want to push him away, but if my power was anything like I thought it was, I’d have to lie to him again. I couldn’t see any way of becoming a cape that wouldn’t require me to be dishonest to him, and I didn’t think he’d like the idea of me putting myself in more danger when I hadn’t proven myself capable of defending myself. And to be fair, I wasn’t capable of it. Not yet.

His face screwed up in frustration. He took a deep breath. He did this a few more times, before speaking again. “Okay. I’m going to respect your decision on this. What do you need?”

Words could not express how much I appreciated my dad in this moment. “I... think I need time to myself. To think things over.” I said, slowly. It was true, actually. While gaining powers had completely reprioritized my life, I also had a lot of testing to do. A lot of training. Controlling water was good, but it seemed finicky in a fashion that suggested I would need an enormous amount of time to get it down. I was going to be a hero for sure, but what kind of hero? How strong could I be? I needed to answer these questions for myself, and I didn’t need him badgering me while I was trying to figure it out. “Is that okay? I know it doesn’t seem like a good idea to leave me alone after what happened, but-”

He raised a hand. “I’ll leave you to your own devices. You can be excused from school for about a week or so…” He sighed deeply. “Whatever you need. So long as you talk to me later, okay?” He stared at me intently, determined to pry an affirmative from me.

I swallowed and nodded. It was relieving to know that “later” wouldn’t necessarily mean “soon”, and depending on how things go, it might also mean “never”. I had several things to worry about before meandering through the treacherous waters of having a heart to heart with my dad.

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The very next day, I hurried onto a computer in the library. I’d spent the previous night in the basement, trying to properly control and bend water. To my disappointment, I hadn’t gotten very far, but I had a sneaking suspicion as to why. I surreptitiously took a computer in the far corner of the room so no one would have a clear line of sight to what I was doing under the table. I’d brought a small bowl and a few bottles of water to practice on as I did some research. I had come at the perfect time, too, just after the lunch rush but before people were getting out of school and work. No one I knew would find me doing weird water tricks here, anyway.

I anxiously bounced in my seat as I started looking into martial arts. I was finding that the movement of my arms and motions of my hands, even the shifting of weight within my body affected where and how the water flowed. As I tried to awkwardly match up different hand motions under the table with what I saw of screenshots and videos depicting different martial arts, I was reminded of that Earth Aleph movie with the guy who had spider powers. Most things didn’t work at all, and the things that did work were ineffectual. That is, until I got to tai chi. Suddenly, everything clicked. Following the forms with my arms only under the table, I got the water out of the bowl, in between my hands, to the left or right, and back in the bowl without splashing it everywhere (again). Moreover, I suddenly felt a lot less unbalanced, like I’d met some requirement needed to calm my body down.

I allowed myself a huge grin. There was always a special sense of satisfaction when you found exactly what you’re looking for. I looked at the pictures, then reamed over several websites explaining basic forms and techniques. I checked how much money I had on me: about twenty two dollars. At ten cents a page, that’d give me more than enough information to take home with me. I printed any written explanations and pictures that seemed useful without being repetitive for me to take home. While this would keep me busy for a while, I knit my forehead in concern. Looking at all the papers in my hand physically, I noted the weight of the stack. I realized it was a lot to memorize. Furthermore, it probably wasn’t as good as taking tai chi classes. Taking public classes would have it’s own detriments, though. When training on my own, I could train with water and for an almost arbitrarily long amount of time, my body willing. The class would help me with the forms, but it couldn’t help me with controlling the water itself.

I looked up the location and cost of martial arts schools in the city as an afterthought. For the next week, I planned to be here at the library or in the basement. Doing research on capes or practicing with my power. Sleeping and eating would be an inconvenience, an afterthought. I had a lot of work to do before I could be mentally prepared to go to school, and even more before I was actually prepared to go out in costume. I figured if I told my dad that tai chi classes would help me with my mental/emotional state and martial arts would help me feel safe, he would almost have no choice but to let me go. I felt bad taking advantage of his guilt that way, as well as the meager amount of money we might get out of a settlement, but it was definitely for a good cause, and those things weren’t necessarily untrue.

I packed up my things, water and all, and began to jog home. It took forever to get anywhere this way, but saying I was out of shape was probably generous. With the range of my power being a little smaller than I would’ve liked, it meant I was going to have to trust my body to keep up with what I wanted it to do. I didn’t feel that way about it now, but like with everything else, I could get there. With hard work and time, I would get there.


A/N: There won't be any other benders in this story.

Also, I always appreciate questions, all kinds of corrections, and general commentary. But, if it isn't about the last two or three chapters I've posted, please send me a message instead of making a comment. I will address it, I mostly just don't want to be talking about arc 1 or 2 things in the thread while I'm posting arc 4. Thank you.
 
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Water 1.2

Water 1.2​


Like so many mornings before it, I opened my eyes.

The visions themselves were getting clearer, but not any easier to remember. I remembered the woman in green, with the white make up, but after a certain point in time I began to see her consistently. She was always trying to tell me something, something I either couldn’t remember or couldn’t hear her say. Either way, I hoped it would clear itself up in time.

I took a look around my room as I hopped out of bed. It looked a bit more utilitarian than it had a couple months ago. Cleaner. Needing the floorspace to practice bending my water before I went to sleep had convinced me to run a tight ship as far as putting clothes away when I was done with them. There were also a few duffel bags on the ground, each containing different outfits for martial arts schools I was enrolled in throughout the city. Several plants surrounded the room, all of them in large, clear glasses of water. I smirked slightly. What had seemed like a genuine interest in plants and need to have life around me to my father was actually a decent excuse to have a reasonable amount of water in my bedroom at all times.

I bent the water from the pots to soak up my t-shirt and manipulated it on top of myself, putting it on, then bent the water back into their respective pots. A useless little trick, but the casual practice would build up until bending became second nature. In reality, two months later, it had already become as easy as breathing. It was way easier to learn how to finely manipulate water on a small scale and moves large swaths of it than I imagined it would be at the beginning. Not only that, but my body seemed to have a certain affinity for memorizing martial arts, at least compared to my classmates at the dojos I went to.

I threw on the rest of my jogging outfit in a less showboaty fashion and headed outside. It was early, the frost on the grass still clinging despite it being the first day of March. Lucky for me, since the frost was a good way to practice while jogging. So long as I was subtle about it, I could move my arms slightly as they swayed back and forth at my side to shift the frost from one side of the grass to the other, from cold to warm and wet, back to cold again. Finding out that I could change the temperature had been an unfortunate but welcome accident involving me freezing my own hand early on in my practice sessions. Oddly, it was less centered on my physical movements and more on my mental intentions. The hydrokinesis seemed to be a mixture of both, more or less, and I could only tell which was which through time and practice, two things I'd had in abundance.

I spent most of my jog lost in thought. Mostly, I was thinking of new ways I could practice using my power while I was in school. Needing to use gestures to make slight movements made for a difficult time while trying to practice secretly. I grimaced despite myself. It had been simultaneously easier and harder to go to school since my trigger. In one way, it was easier because I'd noticed fairly early on that it had slightly changed the way I reacted to confrontation, making it painless to deal with the terrible trio. Moreover, my general focus was up, but whether that was attributed to my meditation and martial arts training was a toss up between a naturally changed mental state and the power itself. In a few other ways, it was harder. Me being increasingly resistant to caring about the treacherous triad just made it so they got more irritated at me and ratcheted up the abuse as a result. In addition to that, as I got better at my power, it was getting harder and harder to not just stop going to school altogether. I didn’t have the protection or support of a Ward, and I was loathe to try to make my escape by running headlong into more bureaucracy and teen drama. If I wanted to do as well as I planned, something had to change.

I returned to my house, not feeling as tired as I would have just a week ago. That was another thing I'd noticed. The first couple of times running and doing sets at the dojos had been brutal, and I’d laid down to take a bath to relax my muscles. During the bath, my muscles would feel better almost instantaneously, and if I submerged my head, I would feel a lot calmer. Centered, clear. I started to take a bath at the end of every day despite showering every morning, just so I could skip a few steps in muscle and endurance building. It would explain the quick progress I made in physical development, but not necessarily why my muscle memory now seemed to be top notch.

My dad was up when I got back, making breakfast. I smiled as I passed by the kitchen: eggs and bacon. “Hey, dad!” I said, with as much cheer as I could muster. It was only partway forced.

He grinned back at me, flipping the eggs in the frying pan one-handed with a practiced flourish. I was reminded of myself as a kid back when I'd been incredibly impressed with him doing it. “Hey yourself, kiddo. You have a nice run?” he asked.

I leaned against the doorframe smugly. “I dunno, I might have to run a little farther, or at least a little longer. I barely seem to be breaking a sweat.” That didn’t have anything to do with the fact that I could bend sweat off myself.

He raised an eyebrow with uncertainty. “Well, if you’re sure. Hurry up and shower, or you won’t have time for breakfast before school.”

I shrugged and made my way upstairs. It didn’t matter terribly that I got to go farther during my runs. Me circling the block was just another way he felt safe about me trying to do things that he knew I wanted to do. That probably wouldn’t fly with cape life, though. I thought about how to reconcile that issue for perhaps the hundredth time while I showered, bending the water to clean me more efficiently. Like the ninety-nine times before it, I didn’t reach a resolution by the time I was dressed and downstairs. I didn’t see any situation where I’d be able to both live with him and be a cape, or at least, have all of the freedoms I wanted to be allotted as a cape. Call me an immature teenager, too eager to get out from under his wing, sure. But I had good reason.

My dad was leaving as I sat down to eat. I was ravenous, actually. I suspected healing my own muscles used energy from my body somehow, and I had to eat all the time to make it up. Not to mention, muscle mass.

“Gotta go, little owl. Be careful at school.” My dad smiled, mussing my hair as he passed by. I groaned in response, about to ask why he'd chosen to do that right before school, but he was already out the door. I mock pouted before returning to my breakfast, assuming he had somewhere else to be.

My dad had been extremely hesitant to let me go back to Winslow, and was more against it the more I revealed about what I was going through. The school itself had had the decency to pay for the hospital bills and then some, but transferring wasn't a viable option. Arcadia was, in a few words, a higher quality school, and that meant the wait list was absurdly long. Winslow either didn't have the strings, or didn't want to pull the strings, to put me higher up on that list. My dad didn't have the resources for a tutor and didn't have time to homeschool me, so if he wanted me to get an education he'd have to suck it up. Since the whole superpowers thing, I didn't really care either way. The threesome could shove it.

After finishing that pleasant meal, I made my way to the bus stop. On the way to school, I pondered on one of the last things I needed to go out for my caped adventures: my costume. I'd had a hard time thinking of something that was affordable, helpful for my power, and protective. I'd ended up spending the rest of my available funds, only a couple hundred dollars since it had been forever since I last babysat, on getting the best costume possible.

What I'd ended up deciding on had three layers: the first layer was a black, skintight, latex, waterproof body suit that covered my body and went all the way over my head, with holes for my eyes, nose, and mouth. It was hard to breathe in when it wasn’t on properly, but was easy enough to put up or down. This layer functioned as an insulator against the water I'd be carrying in my clothing, and had cost quite a bit of money.

The second layer was a special type of white cotton, Zorb, that absorbed and retained water better than virtually anything else. I had practiced with holding water within the fabric itself, fabric that I'd had to cut and sew up in secret. A bit of a wistful task, since it was my mom who'd taught me how to sew. It would be more than a little embarrassing to run around in all white cotton completely covering my body and face, though, so I had a third layer over it.

The third layer was a pair of loose blue jeans with a jean jacket/hoodie combination I had to get special ordered. Almost the most expensive part of the costume, it had pockets in the front of the jacket and in the pants, was loose enough to hide a layer of ice under but sparse enough to put water through in case I needed it, came with a white belt that I could tuck things under and around the loops, and most importantly, looked badass.

The final and most expensive part of my costume, the one I was waiting for today, was a pair of white swimming goggles that had blue tinted lenses with my prescription. It'd taken a while to fill it out, hence the reason I hadn't gone out yet, but it was supposed to be in today.

The final combination would show only a lot of blue from the jeans, and a bit of white on my hands, belt, and face. My shoes were blue, too, and had a cotton sole for sliding quickly on ice. That had taken a lot of practice, and had resulted in a lot of painful falls on my basement floor. With ice in the Zorb I'd be protected, and with extra water in the jeans I'd be prepared. The shoes would let me move quickly, too. It was a good thing I didn't have a life, otherwise I could never afford it all, or spend the time to put it together.

I was proud of what I'd come up with overall, and it would only look better with the goggles. I was still smiling to myself when I got off the bus, walked into school, and planned out my day. That got ruined pretty quickly when I spotted the trio chatting casually in front of my next class.

Now, I knew for a fact that none of them had classes even close to where I had my next one. In order for them to get in their hits today, they’d have to keep it short, or risk being late for class. Sophia might try something physical, force me to go to the school nurse and be late for my first class, but the risk of doing so was high for little reward. This was likely to be a short one. So, I walked beside the door frame, where Madison turned and pretended to have just noticed me, crossed my arms, and waited.

Emma spoke first. “Sleep well last night, glue girl?” she inquired, almost innocently. She was, of course, referring to yesterday, where one of them, most likely Madison who was in the class with me, had stuck wet glue on my seat that I hadn’t noticed. I hadn’t noticed it because I was depending on my power to alert me of most liquids, but glue had such a consistency that it wasn’t close enough to water for me to sense it. Careless, but seeing one of their little pranks succeed probably stopped them from cranking up the intensity. Of course, lying low would be a lot easier if I wasn’t always so tempted to talk back to them.

“Like a baby.” I replied, honestly. Mondays were tai chi class, and I always felt centered and at peace after those sessions. I noticed that my internal emotional balance, or maybe spiritual balance if such a thing existed, was key to keeping my powers improving. Tai chi did wonders for my calm, which made going through the tenacious trinity’s banter that much easier. Of course, as it got easier, they got meaner, so I had to balance how much it looked like they were affecting me as well. A balance, like all things.

She narrowed her eyes before blinking and recovering. “Really? No crying yourself to sleep for a week?” This said in an almost offhand manner, as if it were an unimportant minutia of a detail.

Of course, it wasn’t. She knew about my mother, how much I'd cared about her, how devastated I'd was when she died. A hole I’d never been able to fill, still there. I opened my mouth to speak, but nothing came out. An unwilling tear rolled down my cheek, and it was at this point I realized she had truly accomplished her goal.

Sophia smirked next to her, and Madison giggled audibly in that adorable but insanely annoying way. “Make sure to change your bed pillows every night, Taylor.” This, out of Madison. “They’ll accumulate tear stains otherwise.”

Sophia almost scoffed before shoving past me, muttering quietly, but assuring it was loud enough for me to hear. “Fucking crybaby.” And as she turned away, so did the rest of them. I walked into my class, the encounter over.

Mrs. Knotts noticed me walking in, about a minute before class started. “Taylor? Are you alright?” she asked me, with a touch of genuine concern veiled under the teacherly professionalism. I could almost smile. Of course she had seen the tear marks. I wondered if she could've also seen the conversation from her desk.

“You know how sometimes, you get really tired and yawn, and you just start crying?” I asked her, my voice being not quite stable yet. Whatever, I didn’t have to sell the lie, just market it. “It’s really early in the morning and I didn’t sleep enough, is all. I’m fine.”

She creased her eyebrows together before motioning over to my seat, which was surprisingly empty. I realized that they must’ve planned that whole conversation if they hadn’t followed up with anything else. They wanted me to wallow, wallow in losing Emma, in losing my mother, in losing that confrontation. They would probably leave me alone for the rest of the day, other than smirking at me and running tear lines down their faces in exaggerated fashion. I exhaled as I thought of the rest of the day ahead of me. What a waste of time.
 
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Water 1.3

Water 1.3​


I let out a breath of genuine relief as I walked through the doors of the Mixed Martial Arts dojo. No one else had bothered me at school, but that didn’t stop the rest of the experience. I hadn't able to get my head into some water from a bathroom sink until lunch period, and afterwards I'd felt marginally better. The “cleansing”, as I liked to call it, didn’t literally affect emotions, only made them clearer, less muddled. I still felt pretty bad, but knowing the how and the why made it easier to cheer myself up again. Especially since I’d get to spar today. Blowed off steam better than anything else.

I got into doing stretches after dressing into my gi, pondering all the while about how my training was progressing. Despite my slender form, I'd managed to get physically strong and flexible by breaking down my muscles each day with exercise and building them up again with my water healing. I couldn’t tell if the cleansing only affected my muscles and clarity, or if it also healed wounds. I wasn’t willing to give myself a significant enough injury to find out.

The MMA school was the only dojo I could find that was close enough to learning real fighting that my father would still approve of. He only barely approved of it because it was deep in ABB territory. The bus stop was just at the corner of the strip mall the dojo was located at, next to a bunch of other restaurants and businesses. I figured that outside of it being really late at night, there’d be enough people out and about that nothing awful would happen to me. Besides, after a certain point, I saw it as an opportunity to defend myself more than any real danger.

The location also meant that a significant number of asian immigrants lived in the area, which made the dojo very popular. As a result, I was the only white person in the class. Another one of those mixed bag situations, a benefit and a detriment. A detriment in that I always got special attention. The sensei had pushed me harder and faster, expected more and more. He'd been probably trying to get me to quit. That'd stopped after the first month, though, since the benefit was that I could learn even faster than I would have otherwise.

I practiced tai chi with older people in a more casual class, and a chinese school of hung ga that had barely any students. I incorporated my tai chi fluidly into my martial arts, as well as any mix ups I learned from the MMA and strength based techniques I learned from the old chinese discipline. I began to wonder whether being really good at martial arts could be rated as a low thinker power as we begin practicing sets. It didn't take away a lot of my focus, since I knew these like the back of my hand. I was in the best shape in my life, and it felt incredible.

Sparring didn’t come soon enough. I nearly shivered in anticipation. Other than sensei himself, there was only one person I knew who could challenge me in a fight. I looked across the room at her, and she was already looking at me with an almost exasperated look on her face. She knew how much I wanted this.

Jessica Zhao was a 17 year old chinese girl who went to Immaculata high school. She was the sensei’s daughter, and as such, has been learning martial arts from him and her late grandfather since she was old enough to stand upright. Smart, talented, she entered in regional and even national tournaments for several recognized disciplines. The thing I liked, and disliked, about her most, though, was that she never took anything seriously. I could see her smiling a little as we put on the required padding. I’ve begged sensei to let us try it without, but he always insisted on keeping on most of the pieces, much to my disappointment.

We stood across from each other in our respective stances, staring each other down. She smirked at me. “You gonna try your hardest from the get go, this time?” she asked above the noise of everyone else already fighting it out with their partners.

I shook my head fractionally before advancing on her. She read my advance and brought up her front leg in a quick side kick aimed at my head. I swayed back, letting it brush past my cheek and went to her exposed back to aim a back fist, but she’s already ducking under it, sweeping my legs out from under me with the same leg she tried to kick with. I took the hit, but rolled away from her after tumbling from the ground. No matter how easy I started out, she was always going as hard as she can.

She shrugged at me. “I dunno why you do this to yourself.” she grunted slightly as she tried to connect a blindingly fast roundhouse that I managed to block, and I attempted to grab her leg. She twisted, her back foot coming off the ground as her other leg went over the one in my hand to kick at my head, and I ducked in a panic. She landed on both her feet and immediately followed up with a one two jab, and I only blocked the first before getting a chance to retreat.

Well, screw this. I closed my eyes for a second, trying to reorient myself. Jessica let me, knowing that I needed a moment, even if she didn't know why. As I opened my eyes, I could sense water everywhere in the room, even a little outside the dojo itself. The sweat on my body, the sweat on hers. The sweat on everyone’s body but the Sensei’s, who was calmly watching us. The moisture in the air, the sprinklers on the ceiling, the plumbing in the building itself, the water in water bottles, full and not full. I saw and felt it all at once, and it took me a second to get used to. It wasn't something I usually tuned out, but I wanted to be able to take someone down without water around. I didn’t want to get complacent.

Now, though, I could see Jessica’s body formed by the sweat droplets everywhere. Embarrassingly, the thought entered my mind that her body structure was like a more developed, muscular version of Sophia’s. I desperately tried to banish the thought and nodded at her. She came at me with the same roundhouse kick from the opposite foot, but now I could feel the move start before my eyes did and had time to react. I was ducking under the kick before she was even done completing it, trying to close the distance to her chest. I felt her turn her roundhouse kick into an axe kick above me, and I blocked with my arm before pushing up on the leg, trying to get her off balance. She brought her other leg up to kick my chin in a backflip, and I barely got my head out of the way of her oncoming foot. I threw a side kick at her before she’s got both feet on the ground, and she twisted, but still took a slight shot to the side.

She stared at me for a moment. I smiled. That look never got old. It was a mixture of bewilderment, suspicion, excitement, and adrenaline. I would bet that she always did so well at things that she often found herself bored with no one to pit herself against consistently. It was a shame I was a loner. Not only a loner, but one who probably took the idea of cape life way too seriously. I haven’t had a friend since Emma, and I still wasn’t sure how over it I was. I had more than one reason to keep my distance.

I took the offensive, coming in with two quick jabs with my left hand. My speed surprised even me, but Jessica seemed less surprised as she weaved through both of them and brought her leg up in a snap kick. I blocked with my knee, crossing it up slightly to put my leg under hers and pushed hers up. She spun instead of going up, and in one motion put that leg on the ground while bringing the other one across for a spinning back kick. I knew what she was doing just as she started, so I leaned back while doing a dangerous push kick that wasn’t powerful since I didn’t have a great center of gravity. It hit her in the side at the same moment her kick would’ve connected with my face, were it not an inch away.

She continued undeterred, and I practiced reacting to what she was doing while watching everyone else in the room. I threw in some blocks instead of dodges, some retreats instead of counters, just trying to get a feel for where I was at in terms of ability, speed, and resilience. That last one was difficult with all of the padding, but I did my best.

At the end we were both exhausted, but I was extremely content. She looked somewhere between amused and annoyed, and she finally asked the question. “So, why don’t you try to enter into any competitions or anything? If you’re kicking my ass, you’re probably good enough to at least do well in the region.”

I shrugged while taking off my padding, ignoring the compliment. I still haven’t thought of a good answer to that question. “I don’t really have the time? I have school and I do other things and-”

She scoffed at the last thing I said, throwing off her gloves. “Bullshit. No offense, but I was watching you when you came in here. Greener than grass. Two months later, you can trounce almost everyone in the room? You must practice like crazy.” She muttered something under her breath. It sounded like “probably more than I do”, but I couldn’t be sure.

I decided on a variant of the truth. “It’s not my passion. Just a stepping stone.”

She raised an eyebrow, understandably enough. “I’m not sure I could say this is it for me, either. But hey, it passes the time, right?” she grinned at me, and I rolled my eyes. This, right here, was the reason I wasn’t sure we could be friends. A bunch of people put in more work at this than she did, school too, including myself, and she just took accolades like they were being handed to her. Never seemed to make a serious effort at anything, only as much as expected.

I untied the belt of my gi as our session ended, and she sauntered off to socialize with some of the regulars. I recognized a lot of them, more as people I knew Jessica was friends with than people I knew myself.

As people were starting to pack up and leave, some asian men dressed in red and green walked through the door. The dojo instantly became tense. One of the guys, distinguished easily as the leader as he was the tallest and the most buff, went to the back room of the dojo, presumably to talk to sensei. I recognized these guys, not them specifically, but their gang colors. ABB. I knew that this particular dojo was in the heart of their territory, but I didn’t think I’d encounter them inside the dojo itself. The leader of the gang members started to leave with a smug look on his face, and I followed Jessica to the back room.

Some sweat lined the brow of the mixed martial arts teacher, and Jessica was staring at him expectantly. He was in his late-thirties to mid-forties, asian in a way I couldn’t distinguish and with long hair. He was supposedly a former champion of an MMA tournament, but I hadn’t followed up on the information. He could teach well, and that’s what mattered to me. “Something wrong?” I asked, after hesitating for longer than a minute.

He looked at me and sighed. “Nothing you have to worry about.” he said, most likely trying to hide the bitterness in his voice and failing. “The ABB brings its thugs around here every few months to recruit people for their gang.” He spat the last word like it was an expletive. “You’re one of the only non-asian students here, you know.”

“I noticed.” It hadn’t bothered me. So long as I kept up and proved that I could learn, it didn't make a difference. And I learned faster than anyone else. Jessica, though... she had a look of fear on her face. Since she was over 16, just old enough that people couldn’t say the ABB were using child soldiers, she’d probably be nominated.

“I’d take care of them myself, but as everyone knows, they have capes on their side. The thugs come around for a reminder, and usually more of them come around to collect the people I pick out the next day. The talented ones.” he smiled wryly, his eyes flickering to his daughter. “You’re white, so you don’t have to worry about it. Otherwise, you’d be nominated in a heartbeat.”

I narrowed my eyes at the backhanded compliment. “What happens if you don’t pick?”

He gave an even deeper sigh and his eyes pointed to a picture above the door frame of the entrance. An old asian man with him and a slightly younger version of Jessica, although it was hard to tell. It seemed recent. “My father used to own this dojo. At first, he refused. Lung himself came down to execute him. That’s when the dojo got passed down to me. It was about a year ago, now.”

Now it was my turn to sigh. I wasn’t ready for this. I gave it another month before I was prepared to take on the gangs of the city. As it stood, there were a lot of capes I hadn’t done enough research on. More importantly, I wasn’t sure I was mentally prepared.

But it didn’t matter. I could see another look in Jessica’s eyes. One of fear, fury, resignation, sadness. When she looked at me, it was in anger, but it was also in pleading. She needed help. They both did.

When I jogged home that day, I resolved to do extensive research on the ABB and their capes. I already had, of course, but I could use a refresher. Develop a battle strategy depending on what the mooks came in with. I could handle a few henchman, right?
 
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Water 1.4​


The next day came both too slowly and too quickly. I skipped school entirely, opting to do a ton of research and speculation on various ABB trivia. The information on the wiki and PHO wasn’t liable to be completely accurate, if not entirely off the mark, but the ABB was a well-established gang that'd had more than a few skirmishes and big fights. It all stayed relatively consistent, and left itself open to useful extrapolation.

I skipped my Wednesday tai chi class to stakeout my MMA school from an alley. I was already in full costume, my civilian clothing hidden in the duffel bag I took to tai chi that I left behind a dumpster in the alleyway I was stalking the dojo from. My costume already had a lot of water in it, which was weird to carry and bend within my duffel bag on the way over here on the bus. And yes, I looked incredibly cool with my tinted goggles. I knew, I'd checked.

Plan A was to spray the thugs with barely enough water to notice that I was using water at all, and then beat them in hand to hand. If I was lucky, I wouldn’t have to show that my power was water manipulation at all. This was, of course, assuming I’d only be up against a gaggle of guys. This assumption got proven wrong in what was close to the worst possible way when only one man walked into the dojo with a sense of ease.

I swore under my breath. The man was wearing a black bodysuit with belts and bandoliers of knives on it. He looked packed with grenades, and was wearing a mask of a smiling, red demon.

Oni Lee.

I froze momentarily, my entire body tense. Screaming at me to run in the other direction.

I took a deep breath.

In.

And out.

I didn’t calm down. I submerged my head in the water under my costume for a moment, and that still didn’t calm me down. It did, however, give me clarity of thought. It didn’t matter that this would be my first real fight, and it didn’t matter that this psychotic asshole was extremely skilled with a semi-incredible power. I had prepared for this one. I could take him. I told myself this several times as I ran towards the entrance of the dojo.

As I approached, I could see the students lining up, Jessica included. Oni Lee was likely the judge, jury, and executioner of the picks. I wondered if he would test them in some way before leading them back to a supposed stronghold, but hastily remembered I didn't have time to care.

I opened the door quickly, it opening with a telltale bell ring that made everyone in the room turn in my direction, and bent a little water out of my sleeve at him. He dodged, unsurprisingly, but I was able to curve it so it hit him largely on the shoulder. I left the water there and straightened, looking him over with my eyes while I took stock of everything with water on it. There was sweat everywhere again, but this time, I could use it. I did a few subtle hand gestures behind my back to bend the water from Oni Lee’s shoulder through the outside of his clothes to cover his body slightly, in a way I hoped he wouldn’t notice, while he spoke. “So the obituary has a name to put in the papers…” He started taking a knife out from his belt. “...Who are you?” he said, while revealing a knife that seemed too long to be a dagger. Good to know, in a way, that my costume immediately made me stand out as a cape, and a hero to boot. Light colors probably helped on that front.

I’d thought ahead this much, at least. “Maelstrom.”

He nodded. Oddly respectful, for a mass murderer. That reminded me. I turned my head fractionally to the other people in the room, frozen in the midst of this developing confrontation. I tried to make my voice a little deeper. “Everyone out. Now.”

They didn’t need to be told twice. It took a few moments, but everyone fled the room. They didn’t take their bags or anything. I bent the sweat off of each person as they ran by, and felt something that shouldn’t have scared me. I saw Jessica through my water pass me by as quickly as everyone else along with her father, but she turned around to give one last look at me once she was out the door. Lee surprised me again by letting them go. Apparently, he wanted me all to himself. “You know who I am, I presume?” he spoke quietly, but not in a way that said he was timid or afraid. I strained to hear him, and the softness of his tone made me treat the words as though they were life or death.

I nodded stiffly. “Unfortunately.” I grunted. Not because I wanted to sound tough, but because I was having trouble breathing.

He bowed his head. “Then you know what happens next.” he said in the same tone, preparing his painfully long knife.

As soon as the last person left the premises, he charged at me. It was a feint, of course, since I could already feel the water on his body appear behind me. If someone didn’t know he could teleport, they would be focused on the Oni Lee in front of them and receive a swift knife to the neck from Oni Lee behind them. Luckily, I’d deduced something about his power beforehand. Either he had to consciously teleport everything on his person individually, which would get old fast, or he simply teleported everything that was a very small radius around him. It was the latter, so any water I stuck on his person would go with him, which meant I'd knew where he would be at all times.

I used the water on my right arm to freeze the arm of the charging Oni Lee, and used my left to intercept the long knife attempting to stab my neck. I froze the water in my costume on my left forearm and felt the knife impact it, felt the ice crack a little before I solidified it again. A split second later, I felt a loose spattering of water in the shape of Lee’s body appear to my left. I caught the arm of the Lee behind me and threw him over my shoulder at the Lee in front of me. They sprawled, then burst into ash. I looked at the Lee to my left, presumably the real one, and he looked back at me, as if he were reassessing.

He charged at me again, this time teleporting three times around my immediate person before teleporting away. The one in front reached me first, slashing down at me, just as one to my back right tried to stab me in the side. I had the presence of mind to harden most of my water, enough that it would protect me from a normal dagger but not enough that it would restrict my movements, and blocked the slash with my left arm while dancing out of the way of the stab. I twisted quickly behind the first clone, kicking him into the second in time to duck under a swipe by a third clone. I felt another clone appear, and the clone that used to be the original in my mind threw a knife at my head that I barely dodged. I took a solid stab to the chest for my trouble, largely blocked by extremely dense ice but still likely bruising me, and backflipped away, trying to create space from the small group of Lees in front of me. They reached into the same place the clone did in order to throw his knife.

This wasn't working. I clapped my hands together, and all the water in the room, the water in bottles, the sweat I'd accumulated from the students, turned into steam. I saved the water in my costume as a huge noise was made from the exploding plastic, and knives came at me from all directions. I blocked or dodged each one in turn, and started freezing clone’s heads with the steam they were attempting to get away from. They all turned into ash, leaving an Oni Lee at the opposite end of the room where the steam was much less thick.

This mattered little, because the last clone had thrown a grenade into the steam.

Bingo. I liquified the majority of the steam to hit the grenade into the ceiling, then froze an ice wall between myself and it. Something I’d noticed when I'd chosen this place to study martial arts was that it had those old school sprinklers as a fire alarm system. The kind where, if you exposed it to heat, they would start gushing water to put out the supposed fire. Old and antiquated? Yes. Incredibly useful for me? Absolutely.

The trauma of the grenade’s explosion shook me violently despite the modest ice wall, but it had the desired effect. Water started pouring out of the ceiling everywhere in the dojo. I could see everything. This made it trivial to freeze and kick back the next three grenades at their clones before they exploded, then freeze in place the real Oni Lee before he could teleport again. I didn’t want to take any chances, so I froze him completely up to his neck. He struggled a lot, just his head, before glaring at me. I couldn’t see him doing it, but I could feel his steely gaze.

I smirked under my mask, the bodysuit keeping me relatively dry. I was sure he didn’t feel nearly as comfortable, frozen from the bottom and soaked on top. “Give up?” I asked, not without a healthy amount of smugness.

He exhaled, and his breath showed despite the water from the sprinklers. “Go fuck yourself.” And he teleported.

He was behind me, his movements slowed by the ice, but still able to release the pin on his grenade. He turned his head to his left, outside the dojo, and in a burst of intuition I followed his supposed line of sight and shot an ice spike in that direction. I then jumped to push both my feet in the direction of the Lee behind me, pressing water against him into the wall behind me. The grenade he held exploded, and at the same time, the ice spike I'd sent outside connected with his head. The real Oni Lee dropped. Unconscious, I hoped.

I got up, taking stock of my injuries. I had a few bruises I could feel, but streaming water into the gaps of my bodysuit made that feel better, at least. I felt slightly concussed from the first grenade, but it got better as I focused on it, letting the water on my soaked costume massage my face and forehead. I’ll never be too grateful for a healing power.

I looked around the dojo. Ruined. Water had stopped coming out of the ceiling, but everything was wet, glass from broken windows was everywhere, not to mention the myriad of things that were scorched or had been destroyed from the grenades. I grimaced, gathering up the water as best as I could to take outside with me. I took away the vast majority of the water in objects, bags and clothes, but that wouldn’t fix everything. I went outside, stepping over broken glass and shredded plastic bottles, to where Oni Lee was lying.

Water sloshing around on the cement behind me, I checked his pulse. Slow, but healthy. Good. I froze the eyeholes of his mask shut, dark enough that he wouldn’t be able to see through them. That was how I’d pulled off my last trick. He needed to see where he was going to teleport there, most teleporters did, and he hadn’t been able to turn his head fast enough due to the ice. His peripheral vision was probably shot from the water falling from the ceiling, and that had worked out to my advantage just like I'd wanted it to. I got lucky, but as is often said, luck favored the prepared. I encased his body in ice for good measure. Hypothermia wouldn’t set in for a little while, at least.

There was a bit of a crowd gathering at this point. Only a few people from the dojo had stayed to see the fight. One of them had their phone out, another was Sensei, staring in awe. I realized the person with their phone out was Jessica. I smiled under my blue jean costume and waved. This was probably the best part of the job. Bad guy was caught, no one was hurt, I'd protected those I cared about with some property damage... Mission accomplished!

It was only after I'd started waving that I noticed a motorcycle rolling up to the frozen Oni Lee and I. The man riding it was wearing dark blue body armor with silver lining on it, a halberd on his back and a visor over his face. Armsmaster. Just when I thought my day couldn’t get any better.

He stepped off his motorcycle and bent down over Oni Lee, presumably to check his pulse. I obliged by melting most of the ice covering his head, save for his eyeholes. Seeming satisfied, Armsmaster straightened again, and looked directly at me. “You brought him down?”

I grinned, doing my best to ignore the fact that I'd once owned underwear with his name on it. “Yep.”

“On your own?”

“Yep.”

He stared at me for several more seconds, disbelievingly. “How?”

I folded my arms in an almost mocking manner. “A good cape never reveals his secrets. I suspect there’ll be a video online soon, though. In a word? Preparation.”

He looked at Oni Lee again, and back at me. “You shouldn’t get ahead of yourself. This man, he’s dangerous. You know his leader?” I nodded, slowly. “Even more dangerous. Wouldn't go down to water and ice.”

“I know.” I said, irritated. “If I saw him, I’d probably just retreat.”

“But you saw Oni Lee and thought, ‘Oh, this is fine, I can take him’?” he bit out.

I blushed under my mask and looked away, staring at the ground. That may or may not have been exactly what I'd thought.

He cleared his throat, and I looked back at him. “Look. You took down a skilled villain, and that’s great. Fantastic.” I beamed a little at the use of the word ‘fantastic’. “But you shouldn’t expect to be this successful every time you go out. Independents, especially kids, don’t tend to last long. Either they make a mistake, or piss off the wrong person like you might’ve, and end up retiring, or worse.”

I resisted the urge to scoff. I might be a new cape, but I was aware of how fortunate I’d been during that fight. I'd known my opponent, my surroundings, my abilities, and I'd had a good handle on his. I'd controlled the battlefield itself, could've reacted to everything he did. For most capes, the moment they were on the back foot and couldn’t retreat, they were a goner unless they had help. I knew what had been coming, had kept my momentum. That wouldn't always be possible. “So you think I should join the Wards?”

A curt nod. “It’s safer. You’ll get training for your power, a support system, practice in the cape world without a high amount of risk. You could grow into it instead of being plunged into the deep end. You’ll have a team.”

I shook my head. “I get enough of rules and other teenagers at school. I’m not interested. I’ll take what you’re saying to heart, though. Maybe I could use a team of my own.”

“Like New Wave?” He said, unable to keep the annoyance out of his voice.

“Nah, I don’t think they recruit very much outside the family. Plus, I’ve got my own family. Non-capes who wouldn’t be able to defend themselves.” I kept it vague on purpose. I didn’t want the Protectorate narrowing me down any more than I wanted villains to. I was hoping the layout and feel of my costume would peg me to most as a guy, actually. It wasn't like I had any breasts to hide, and Maelstrom was pretty ambiguous as far as gender went. I'd thought about taking Poseidon, just to throw them off completely, but that had seemed far too pretentious. Who could take someone like that seriously?

“People who don’t go it alone or join one of those two teams tend to become mercs or villains.” He said darkly.

I couldn’t tell how much he was saying just to scare me. He was probably right, though. I needed a better long term plan. “I’ll tell you when I decide what I’m doing. I’m not going to become a villain, though.” I almost kicked Oni Lee in front of him when I glanced down, but thought better of it. “I can do better.”

He nodded. “You can do better.” He looked at the crowd around us. They were keeping a respectable distance but openly staring at us. “You’ll be taking credit. What do you want us to call you?”

I smiled. “Maelstrom.”
 
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Bronzic_Bean

Cannot stop smirking. Send HALP.
I'm not going to pretend I know better than the author, but I'll be pissed if she somehow joined the Undies.

Even moreso if this Taylor is the Avatar.
 
The title of this story is at best deceptive and at worst bad. Unless you plan to add My Little Pony to the crossover.

When mixing two fandoms, never use a title that immediately brings to mind a third unrelated fandom.

In this case, Harmony is a really bad title because of the obsession the My Little Pony fandom has with the word. It's almost as bad as calling your story "The Godfather ".
 

PhoenixFTW

Insert Witty One-Liner Here
The title of this story is at best deceptive and at worst bad. Unless you plan to add My Little Pony to the crossover.

When mixing two fandoms, never use a title that immediately brings to mind a third unrelated fandom.

In this case, Harmony is a really bad title because of the obsession the My Little Pony fandom has with the word. It's almost as bad as calling your story "The Godfather ".
Not everyone's mind immediately jumps to MLP, especially when ATLA is in the title two words later.
 

Dr. Mercurious

(Verified Parrot Slave)
The title of this story is at best deceptive and at worst bad. Unless you plan to add My Little Pony to the crossover.
Martial arts was using that term long before Dem Ponies were. Besides, he posted the cross.

You need to establish chapter links, but otherwise this is looking good so far. Hopefully, this does better the last Avatar the Last Airbender cross did. (SPOILER ALERT: It dies only after a few chapter and when he posted the notes he was going to have Taylor die in the fight against Leviathan. Proving that he didn't understand one of his cross-over elements AT ALL.)
 
Not everyone's mind immediately jumps to MLP, especially when ATLA is in the title two words later.
Yeah, well, the thing about that is I only realized it had anything to do with Avatar the Last Airbender after I checked both the intro and the comments for clarification. Even if I am wrong for jumping to conclusions about the title I can't be wrong for being confused about the crossover, since it's the author's job to use terms the audience is capable of understanding.

Basically I am trying to say that the way the author chose to introduce the premise to us confused the hell out of me due to the uncommon acronym mixed with the pony terminology. The story summary needs to be cleaned up a bit at the very least, but a Avatar-specific title would help a metric crapload.
 

PhoenixFTW

Insert Witty One-Liner Here
Yeah, well, the thing about that is I only realized it had anything to do with Avatar the Last Airbender after I checked both the intro and the comments for clarification. Even if I am wrong for jumping to conclusions about the title I can't be wrong for being confused about the crossover, since it's the author's job to use terms the audience is capable of understanding.

Basically I am trying to say that the way the author chose to introduce the premise to us confused the hell out of me due to the uncommon acronym mixed with the pony terminology. The story summary needs to be cleaned up a bit at the very least, but a Avatar-specific title would help a metric crapload.
As Dr. Mercurius said, harmony's a big thing in marital arts philosophy, as well as ATLA. It's not pony-only terminology. How exactly did you get confused, anyway? Taylor has a vision about lots of different people in traditional clothes and wakes up able to control water. While not saying it outright (Viev did that in the title), it's pretty clearly Avatar.
 
As Dr. Mercurius said, harmony's a big thing in marital arts philosophy, as well as ATLA. It's not pony-only terminology. How exactly did you get confused, anyway? Taylor has a vision about lots of different people in traditional clothes and wakes up able to control water. While not saying it outright (Viev did that in the title), it's pretty clearly Avatar.
Because I don't start stories until I know the premise, when it comes to fanfics.

I had to check the comments to figure out the crossover before I would even consider starting chapter 1, which I wouldn't have had to do if the author just said it was an Avatar alt-power instead of using an acronym.
 
Because I don't start stories until I know the premise, when it comes to fanfics.

I had to check the comments to figure out the crossover before I would even consider starting chapter 1, which I wouldn't have had to do if the author just said it was an Avatar alt-power instead of using an acronym.
That sounds like a personal problem, is there anyone else here who didn't immediately figure out that this was an Avatar The Last Airbender crossover?
 
That sounds like a personal problem, is there anyone else here who didn't immediately figure out that this was an Avatar The Last Airbender crossover?
If they didn't, would they even get to the comments section? Or would they ignore a story they'd love outright, never clicking the thread, because they never heard of ATLA?

People who respond to the comments section of a fic and people who ignore a fic because they don't know what it's about is not a group that intersects much.
 

Inverted Fallecy

Beware the Dialogue that Spews Forth!~
And watched! I'm looking forward to how Taylor learns the other elements. It seems like Earthbending would be up next after she masters Waterbending. Though, I wonder if she'll realize that she can possibly heal; even achieving Bloodbending - for as controversial as it is, it would be a quick way to stop Lung, and most other people for that matter.

Man, Taylor has room to grow! If she ever becomes a fully realized Avatar in all the elements, it would be like looking at the hand of god in action!
  • Waterbending: control of water (liquid/gas/solid), healing (physical/mental injuries), Bloodbending (definitly master rating/ forcing unconciousness), calming down negative spirituality within people and spirits (is the spirit world exists here).
  • Earthbending: control of earth (sand/stone/dirt), Seismic Sense(identifying living things and their location/detecting lies), Metalbending (all metals short of refined substances like platinum.) * I think you can also utilize Sandbending to cause friction and combust or explode - not completely sure as I'd need to do some research.
  • Firebending: control of heat/combustion(?) (fire/lightning). I also think you could possibly create lasers depending on the amount of control the user exerts.
  • Airbending: control of air (wind/air currents), can create vacuums anywhere, with spiritual detachment flight is possible. *Is it also possible to redirect or muffle soundwaves by using air currents to create some kind of drag or something?
  • Energybending: Now this category has some possibly startling implications if Taylor can learn to use and master it. The possibility of taking someone's power by closing or blocking the Third-eye Chakra would frighten any parahuman, though that's only unless the laws of ATLA also apply here and are mixed with Worm.
  • And then there's GOD MODE *cough* *cough* -uh, I mean the Avatar State as well as having complete control of it.
The Avatar World is so rich with lore and possibilities! Even the people who can't bend can fight pretty well, like the Kiyoshi Warriors or the Chi Blockers.

Viev just a question, will Taylor possible get an animal spirit guide, like with how Roku had his dragon, Aang with Appa, and Korra with Naga? Just curious is all. Anyway, this is a good start, you made my day!
 
If they didn't, would they even get to the comments section? Or would they ignore a story they'd love outright, never clicking the thread, because they never heard of ATLA?

People who respond to the comments section of a fic and people who ignore a fic because they don't know what it's about is not a group that intersects much.

Well if it matters, I immediately thought of Avatar when I saw "harmony".

I'm not a Bronie, but I'm aware of the fandom, and I didn't even think of that till you mentioned it.


Point is, I don't think that word is particularly attached to the fandom. And even if it was, overlap is fine, just like "Bender" for Avatar or Futurama.
 

The Stormbringer

Worm Fanfic & Crack Connoisseur
Out of curiosity, is she wearing her hair differently? Because anyone could see her face with her hair down and say, "Hey, that's Taylor with goggles!" otherwise. Putting it up in a bun or a ponytail would help obfuscate that.
 
Consider using threadmarks. For now it's fine since all the chapters are one after another. But after this, we readers won't want to go through all the thread to find the next chapter.

That aside, this loos like an interesting story. Will she develop a physique like Korra's? A strong non-stick like Taylor would be nice for a change.
 

Bronzic_Bean

Cannot stop smirking. Send HALP.
Truth is, I don't actually mind Tayvatar joining the Undersiders, but they usually end up getting Lisa stringing her along like some genius mastermind.

...or Coil.

The Undersider is a trap, story-wise.
It's like people tend to write something empowering Coil or Tattletale when they write them...
Rare is the time when I get to read a good Under-Taylor fic, not including ones where she 'joins' but still does her own thing because too OP or somesuch thing.
 
Tentatively followed, because this looks pretty damn interesting.

Considering the past life flashback it would seem this isn't Shard based, so.. Spirit stuff is a thing? Could she train others in Bending? She needs a badger for an animal companion, clearly.

Along with Blood Bending if she can Energy Bend to block Shard connections she will be pretty feared. Would be kind of an interesting end to any Lung encounter, which will happen here it seems since she has almost quite literally poked the Dragon. But to do that she would probably need to go Avatar state temporarily or something. TBH, I'd expect a more likely end involving Fire Bending.

I too hope she doesn't join the Undersiders, potential here for some lesser-utilised characters or even some normies, like that Jessica girl. My only regret is that we won't get Toph in this story, much sadness. Unless an OC is a blind badass with a mountain of sass and one liners.

Also, Threadmarks please.
 
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