Because the old thread is as good as dead...I don't even fuckin- Welp, I'ma back after a nice long hiatus, because I tried rewriting. And rewriting. And doing the chapter over. Only to figure out something. Something horrible. Something true: "This fucking sucks. No, seriously. This fanfiction is fucking terrible." To confirm this, I reread all the chapters. Needless to say, that was a bad idea. So now as I trek through the Valley of Defilement fucking whatever, I shall now open up some kind of thread or some shit. Because discussion. Also, people liked the story for reasons that I truly have failed to grasp. So here, I'll be putting things involving the rewrite of the full story that I am currently doing, such as world building. And hatred. And something. If you like terrible prose and writing-by-the-seat-of-your-pants, have a link. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6893660/1/Magica-Madoka-Veneficus-Puella Trope page. Because anybody can get a page up within seconds. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/MagicaMadokaVeneficusPuella The original two threads: http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/magica-madoka-veneficus-puella.192132/ http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mmvp-ze-second.202149/#post-6603025 And yes, the final chapters are being written, but there are many corrections that I need to get through before I post either of them. I'll be using this thread for a few reasons. One, because Spacebattles has a nice fun community and I really like it here. Two, criticism. Three, hilarity. Four, criticism. Five, redundancy. Not asking for a complete tear-down (though that was a nice kick in the pants), but some guidance helps. But then again, if I need a tear-down, don't be fucking afraid to give it. Now, I'll be talking about the rewrite eventually (tentatively called MMVP:R because THAT'S SO ORIGINAL GUIZE), as I already have a world built, plans around it, and actually have a list of characters to kill. Because that was something I was way, way too skittish about before.