The Paragamer (Worm+The Gamer w/ OCs)

Triggers
The Paragamer

Triggers


Galveston, Texas, Saturday, December 19th, 2009

“HAHAHAHA You got owned hard!” I scream into the headset microphone as the last semi-final round of the tournament comes to an end. Some of my co-players are cursing; some are offering congrats, my opponents are weeping. At least, that’s what it sounded like before they dropped line and logged off. Half-hour break before the final round, and the new regional championship of the ‘Video Gaming Decathlon’ gets crowned. Win that, and I’ll be in the big leagues, corporate sponsors, travel, better rigs, and regular cash prizes. I can taste the coming victory, or maybe that’s just the orange Cheetos dust and energy drink film that’s coating the inside of my mouth. Considering such, I need refills of both, and a trip to the bathroom. Six hours of non-stop gaming did a number on me, but at least I convinced my parents to bring my personal office chair and my rig setup, or my ass would’ve been a lot sorer.

Finally standing up and looking around, there are more empty seats at the tourney, more losers that have gone home. Only my team and a couple other lower ranked teams are left. They’re playing a different set of games, already lost their chance at a upper ranked spot, but must be taking too long to clear their slots. They’re just competing for 4th place or something, too far behind in points in the scoring system to catch up. Still, top five ranks all have a cash prize so, guess it’s worth finishing.

“Hey Joe, watch my stuff, be back before next round.” I call out to my friend across the table.

“Mrrhh” he mumbles through a chug of Dr. Pepper. He’s a decent guy but maybe friend is a strong word, only know each other via the gaming circuit. My friends from home and school weren’t skilled enough to pass muster. Sandy and Dirk did come to watch, but ran off to the food court before the last round. My parents came too of course, but left to go shopping in the department stores three hours ago.

The game tourney is setup in an empty mall front between a GameStop and a GameWorks arcade. I run next door into the arcade to find its bathroom. I run into some teenage redhead in the hallway with tears and running mascara. “Sorry” I say as I stepped around her, damn she’s a looker, but I had to go real bad.

I come back out I see her again, screaming into her cellphone while some other brunette girl hovers over her, I’m curious about what made that pretty face cry, but have a bad habit of asking questions I shouldn’t. I have to get back in time for the final round anyway.

I get back to my seat; Sandy and Dirk have come back and brought grub.

“Hey, I got your food.” Sandy says.

“Thanks, no onions right?” I ask.

“Dunno, told them to hold ‘em but you know, check it to be sure. You finish your games yet?”

“Final round in 14 minutes” I pull out the burger and inspect it. Damn onions. Don’t have time to scrape them off either, just chow down while Dirk and Sandy gossip about the Madison Simurgh attack that happened last summer. Too busy stuffing my face to contribute, but rumor was that some Ziz-bomb escapees rampaged through Des Moines sometime this morning.

‘You owe me six bucks for the food.” Dirk says.

I mumble with my mouth full and pull my wallet out and hand it to him. “Can you get me another Monster and Cheetos from the vending machine?” I ask between bites.

There wasn’t really enough time to eat and buy more garbage from the machines before me and my teammates and have to set up for a 10 minute warm-up match before the final round. Dirk gets back just after we started. I see him speaking but my headphones are already on. They drown out the background noise once we get in game.

“Hold on to it until I’m done” I say over my shoulder referring to my wallet, “last round will last 45 minutes tops, probably less once we kick their ass.”

Even though my team is on a local LAN with a sweet connection we’re still playing against other teams online from all over the south-central region. All at designated locations so local judges can oversee the competing teams and make sure no cheating is going on.

Practice session over, we wait for the countdown to enter the final match. It gets to zero and the rest of the world just fades away. I’m shouting orders to Joe and Jamie, and before I know it, 15 minutes of the game has gone by, they’re good but we’re better. 20 minutes in, we’re starting to get a clear upper hand. There’s some muted roaring sound in the background and then Joe just stops paying attention.

“What the hell are you doing Joe? Get back and cover our flank!” I shout into the headset even though he’s also just on the other side of the table from me. I shift my units to cover the gap his inattention had created, and manage to lure the opponent in when he tries to rush the gap. 30 seconds later the enemy units that tried to push through get annihilated. That made the whole rest of their line start pulling back. A sure victory is at hand.

Then the screen froze.

Connection to Server lost.

“What the fuck?”

That’s an automatic loss. Five years of training and preparing for this moment down the drain all because of the stupid fucking mall’s shitty connection? I fall into an incoherent daze. This was my big break, now it’s nothing! I feel nauseous, the room is spinning. The game’s music has stopped. Wait, the room really is spinning, no it shook. I can still hear the sirens, so I take my headset off. They’re loud.

“Endbringer Sirens!” I hear Joe yell.

People start screaming, trying to push their way toward the door. I look for Sandy and Dirk, spot them and make my way toward them, and then the whole mall shakes. I see my rig slide off the table as the floor buckles, and then the lights went out. People scream. I can hear dry wall cracking under compressive force the way your house creaks and groans, because of soil movement. I can hear metal beams straining, both louder than the screams of everyone around me, oh fuck this is bad.

The emergency lights come back on. Where’s me friends? I yell but no one answers no one can hear me over the noise. Sandy made it to the front of the store front, up by the large windows. It’s still somewhat dark though, it’s evening in winter. The plate glass of the entire front just explodes, all along the top level of the mall. The roof is caving in, from something, and the metal window frames holding all the glass just compressed in and buckled, imploding the panes. I instinctively shield my face but wasn’t fast enough. I fell stuff hit me, but there’s people in front of me who take the worst of it and fall down. I fall too, crawl forward. I find Sandy lying on in floor in a pool of blood, not moving on her own. She is…sliding toward the front, as is everything else, tables, computers, and bodies, living and not.

I see Joe, life gone from his eyes; part of the roof has crushed him. Some of the screaming, and noise of the cracking mall has died down just enough that I can hear something huge walking on the roof. Gallons upon gallons of water start pouring in through all the new cracks in the roof. Then the mall shifts again. I hold on and scream until my throat is dry.

Somehow I make it out onto the now heavily slanted, wet, and slippery balcony-walkway area in front of the store fronts. We’re on the upper floor; the railing had been smashed apart in various places as heavy items hydroplaned right out of the stores and smashed into them. I see Dirk. “Dirk! Can you hear me?” Dirk is barely hanging on to some of the railing, water pouring over the sides. “Hold on, Dirk!” I watch in horror as one of the huge heavy concrete potted plants slowly starts sliding toward the part of the railing he is holding on for dear life from. “No, no, no, no” I yell again, unable to do anything. The mall shake again, a wave hits the potted plant and it picks up speed, crashing into the railing and tumbling over, taking Dirk with it. I slip and slide further down through the dirty, pink bloody water. The once level walkway is slick with water and blood, everything is getting drenched. I barely grab some mangled railing myself. I just barely see Dirk and the plant pot as they fall with a loud splash into the rapidly pooling water below.

Dangling from the railing, I have a good, but horrendous view. The rest of the mall is just gone. It’s fallen into a sinkhole that is rapidly filling up with water, just as this part of the mall is trying to do. Oh God, that was where my parents had been, somewhere out there. I vomit and almost lose my grip, spinning around to catch myself. About 20 to 30 feet away from me, hanging from another part of the wrecked railing, I see the redhead I ran into on my way to the bathroom. We stare at each other for a while.

Both of our attentions are distracted by strobing laser flashes from above. I can see to the evening sky though the open hole in the mall from where what is left of it dangles on the edge of the sinkhole, and to the water below us. The hero Gatling is flying in his jet pack above us, firing his trademark laser Gatling cannon at something on the roof above us.

“SAVE US!” the red-head screams.

Gatling momentarily pauses in his firing. He moved his hand and a spot light on his suit turns on, illuminating the both of us through the rain and scanning the wreckage. The Endbrigner takes advantage of the distraction, Leviathan leaps from the mall roof. It shutters again and more things, water and bodies fall into the rising pool below. I know some are alive because of the screaming. Somehow I still hold on, but have stopped screaming, I have no voice left. The water of the after echo follows his leap as he lands on Gatling. The momentum of the majority of the water echo arcs well over our heads, and fell down into the sinkhole, filling it up further as Leviathan and Gatling fight. The fights lasts only seconds, Gatling is torn in half.

The water level has risen, and flows over some fallen power lines or a transformer because the entire sinkhole lake starts lighting up with sparks. Some flying cape flies straight down and slams into Leviathan from above, too far away for me to identify them.

“Y’all hang in there, I see you!” I hear someone shouting from above. I look up and see a man in a brown suit, thick coils of corded rope draped over his body. It’s Rappel, a local villain that could literally walk on walls. He peers at us from the mall roof, then starts glowing and just steps off, pivots, and walks down the side of the ruined structure to the slanted walkway I had slid off of moments before. He pulls out a green para-cord rope and ties it further off somewhere in the back of the mall interior that I can’t see. The other end is harnessed to the villain and Rappel stops glowing and carefully, eases himself down toward us. I’m too busy being pants shitting terrified to ask why he didn’t just walk down like he did before.

He then lowers a harness to me, starts glowing again and walks toward me and puts the harness on. He leaves me there and does the same to the red-head. Altering his glows on an off, apparently some kind of short term breaker state. There must have been someone else as well that I can’t see because he moves out of view again. Then what’s left of the mall starts creaking loudly again.

Pieces of railing, waves of water and the building start falling into the water. My rope goes slack and I drop, debris slams into my arm as I swing outward. I scream as I nearly fall. Pain, I feel so much pain in my arm, something is broken. The red head is almost directly above me now, screaming her head off.

“Fuck! Can’t go back up that way!” I hear Rappel shout. He’s standing on the side of the sinkhole wall, just across from me and presses some kind of gun up against it. There’s a loud ‘thunk’, and he clips another rope into the anchor point he just made. Then he aims a grapping hook at me and fires. I think I piss myself as I flinch at the oncoming barbed harpoon of death.

I open my eyes to discover I was not impaled by the giant barb. Now there is a rope spanning a thin slice of the edge of the sinkhole chasm.

“Hook yourself to the rope, use one of the clips on your chest, and detach yourself from the other one. I have to get the others.”

“I don’t know how to do that!” I try to scream, my voice is still hoarse. Rappel ignores me, starts glowing and walks back up the wall toward the red-head. I try to do as he said, but only one of my arms is cooperating, I manage to hook myself into the spanning rope but that was all I can manage.

“I need flyers for civilian rescue in grid G3.” I hear Rappel say into an armband as he walks up the wall, a second slack rope trailing behind him as he went. I heard his armband crackle in response “That Zone is hot! Leviathan is back in the area” I was hit by a wave of water and feel myself falling.

I’m struggling, underwater, feel myself getting pulled downward, in the back of my mind, I have one thought, I’m underwater and Leviathan was here. I’m fucked. Somehow though, I manage to slip out of the rope harness, swim to the top and push through to the surface. A pile of floating debris has conglomerated together, I pull myself onto a big piece of floating particle board. The words ‘Tank Commander’ is on the side. It was broken game cabinets from the arcade. I’m cold, my left arm feels like it’s on fire. I see the red head thrashing in the water and pull her up onto the raft of broken arcade cabinets. She’s lying on top of ‘Tron’. There’s another man thrashing in the water, too far away to aid, it wasn’t Rappel.

We can see because there’s a street light, still on, precariously hanging over the edge of the sinkhole, threatening to topple in at any moment. So was what is left of the mall. In its light I can see Leviathan fighting at the other end; waves from his after echo threaten to break our arcade raft. Some unseen cape is causing live power lines to wrap around his limbs. Leviathan just grabs the cables and pulls, tearing out pylons and transformers off the edge of the sinkhole and sending them tumbling toward the water.

So many things are happening at once. “Get out of the water!” The red head yells. A flying cape has appeared above us, the sparking transformer hit the water, Leviathan moves like a flash. The Endbringer is less than 50 yards from us, and impales our would-be rescuer with his whip tail, and casually flings him off into the wall like he was shaking off an annoying bug. The man we couldn’t reach was screaming in the water, and Leviathan looked at me. We were going to die.

Some foggy vision of two great bloated whale-like worms spiraling through space filled my mind like a nightmare.

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[Host attachment completed.]
JESTER: uncompress –all
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JESTER: %^#$%%$&!
[Invalid command]
GAIA: upgrade –hardware: memory capacity
[completed]
JESTER: uncompress –all
[Insufficient space]
JESTER: /msg GAIA “DELETE EXTRANEOUS HOST DATA?”
GAIA: /msg JESTER “…”
JESTER: /msg –attach []
GAIA: /msg JESTER “AGREEMENT”
JESTER: delete –filter tag: extraneous
JESTER: uncompress –all
[Insufficient space]
JESTER: #$%! #$%^(! ^##%!
[Invalid command]
GAIA: /msg JESTER “TIERED LEVEL PROGRESSION, UNCOMPESS & INSTALL AS NEEDED?”
JESTER: /msg GAIA “AGREEMENT”
JESTER: uncompress INTERFACE, AVATAR, HACKING_MOD –install:y
[Installations completed]
JESTER: execute INTERFACE:start

A/N: Yes this is another Worm + The Gamer story, but will be using some original characters, While inspired by the gamer mechanics, and there will be some similarities, I will be using a unique system. Much of the story was rewritten on 8/12/17. Old cut chapters are in the Apocrypha thread marks
 
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Triggers

Galveston, Texas, December 19th, 2009

“HAHAHAHAHAHA You got owned hard!” I screamed into the headset microphone as the last semi-final round of the tournament came to an end. Some of my co-players were cursing; some were offering congrats, my opponents were weeping. At least that is what it sounded like before they dropped line and logged off. We had a half-hour break before the final round, and the regional championship of the ‘Video Gaming Decathlon’. Win that and I would be in the big leagues, corporate sponsors, travel, better rigs, and regular cash prizes. I could taste the coming victory, or maybe that was just the mixture of orange Cheeto dust and energy drink film that was coating the inside of my mouth. Considering such, I needed refills of both, and trip to the bathroom. Six hours of non-stop gaming does a number on you but at least I convinced my parents to bring my personal office chair along with my rig setup, or my ass could have been a lot sorer.

Finally standing up and looking around there were some more empty seats at the game tourney, more losers that had gone home. Only my team and a couple other lower ranked teams were still playing a different set of games, they had already lost their chance at a upper ranked spot, but were apparently taking too long to clear their slots, so were just competing for like 4th place or something, too far behind in points in the scoring system to be able to catch up. Still the top five ranks all had a cash prize so it was worth finishing.

“Hey Joe, watch my stuff, be back before next round.” I called out to my friend from across the table.

“Mrrrhh” he mumbled through a chug of Dr. Pepper. He was a decent guy but maybe friend was a strong word, we only knew each other via the gaming circuit. My friends from home and school weren’t skilled enough to really pass master, though Sandy and Dirk did come to watch, but had run off to the food court before the last round. My parents had come too of course but left to go shopping in the various department stores three hours ago.

The game tourney was setup in an empty mall front in between a GameStop and a GameWorks arcade, I ran next door into the arcade to find its bathroom. I ran into some teenage redhead in the hallway with tears and running mascara. “Sorry” I said as I stepped around her, I had to go really bad.

When I came back out I saw her again, screaming into her cellphone while some other brunette girl hovered over her, I was curious but had a bad habit of asking questions I shouldn’t, so let it be. I had to get back in time for the final round anyway.

I got back to my seat, Sandy and Dirk had come back and brought food.

“Thanks, no onions right?” I asked.

“Dunno” Sandy said, “Told them to hold ‘em but you know, check it to be sure. You finish your games yet?”

“Final round in 14 minutes” I pulled out the burger and inspected it. Damn onions. I didn’t have time to scrape them off either, so just chowed down while Dirk and Sandy gossiped about the Madison Simurgh attack that happened last summer. I was too busy stuffing my face to contribute but rumor was that some Ziz-bomb escapees had rampaged through Des Moines sometime this morning.

‘You owe me 6 bucks for the food.” Dirk said.

I mumbled with my mouth full and pulled my wallet out and handed it to him. “Can you get me another Monster and Cheetos from the vending machine?” I asked between bites.

There wasn’t really enough time to eat and buy more garbage from the vending machine before my teammates and I had to set up for a 10 minute warm-up match before the final round. But Dirk was back just after we started. I saw him speaking but my headphones were already on. They drowned out the background noise once we got in game.

“Hold on to it until I’m done” I said over my shoulder referring to my wallet, “last round will last 45 minutes tops, probably less once we kick their ass.”

Even though my team was on a local LAN with a sweet connection we were still playing against other teams online from all over the south-central region. The designated locations so local judges could oversee the competing teams and make sure no cheating was going on.

Practice session over, we waited for the countdown to enter the final match. It got to zero and the rest of the world just faded away. I was shouting orders to Joe and Jamie, and before I knew it 15 minutes of the game had gone by, they were good but we were better. 20 minutes in we were starting to get a clear upper hand. There was some muted roaring sound in the background and then Joe just stopped paying attention.

What the hell are you doing Joe? Get back and cover our flank!” I shouted into the headset even though he was also on just on the other side of the table from me. I shifted my units to cover the gap his inattention had created also managed to lure trick the opponent when he tried to rush the gap. 30 seconds later the enemy units that had tried to push though got annihilated, and that made the whole rest f their line start pulling back. A sure victory was at hand.

Then the screen froze.

Connection to Server lost.

“What the fuck?”

That was an automatic loss. Five years of training and preparing for this moment down the drain all because of the stupid fucking malls shitty connection? I fell into an incoherent daze, this was my big break, now it’s nothing. I felt nauseous, like the room was spinning. The game’s music had stopped. Wait, the room really was spinning, no it shook. I could still hear the sirens, so I took my headset off. They were loud.

“Endbringer Sirens!” I heard Joe yell.

People started screaming trying to push their way toward the door. I looked for Sandy and Dirk, spotted them and made my way toward them, and then the whole mall shook. I saw my rig slide off the table as the floor buckled, just before the lights went out. People screamed, I could hear dry wall cracking under compressive force the way your house creaks and groans, because of soil movement. I could hear metal beams straining.

By the time the emergency lights had come back on I saw that Sandy had made it to the front of the store front, up by the large windows. It was still somewhat dark though because it was evening in winter. Then the plate glass of the entire front just exploded, all along the top level of the mall. The roof was caving in, from something, and the metal window frames holding all the glass had just compressed in and buckled, imploding the panes. I had instinctively shielded my face when it happened but wasn’t fast enough. I felt stuff hit me, but there were people in front of me who took the worst of it and fell down. Then I fell too, and crawled forward. I saw Sandy lying in floor in a pool of blood, she was…sliding toward the front as was everything else, tables, computers, and bodies, living or not.

I saw Joe, part of the roof had crushed him. Some of the screaming, and noise of the cracking mall had died down just enough that myself and the other survivors could hear something huge walking on the roof. Then the mall shifted again.

Somehow I made it out onto the now heavily slanted balcony-walkway area in front of the store fronts. We were on the upper floor, the railing had been smashed apart in various places as heavy items slid out of the stores and smashed into them. Dirk was hanging on some of the railing. I watched in horror as one of the huge heavy concrete potted plants slowly started sliding toward the part of the railing he held on for dear life from. The mall shook again and the potted plant picked up speed, crashing into the railing and tumbling over, taking Dirk with it. I slipped and slid further down too, the once level walkway was slick with blood. I barely grabbed some mangled railing myself. I just barely saw Dirk and the plant pot as they fell with a loud splash into the water below.

Dangling from the railing, I had a good, but horrendous view. The rest of the mall was just gone. It was fallen into a sinkhole, just as this part of the mall was trying to do. That was where my parents had been, somewhere out there. I vomited and almost lost my grip, spinning around to catch myself. About 20 to 30 feet away from me, hanging from another part of the wrecked railing, I saw the redhead I had ran into on my way to the bathroom. We stared at each other for a while.

Both of our attentions were distracted by strobing laser flashes from above. I could see to the sky though the open hole in the mall from where what left of it dangled on the edge of the sinkhole, and to the water below us. Gatling was flying in his jet pack above us, firing is trademark laser gatling cannon at something on the roof above us.

“SAVE US!” I heard the red-head scream.

Gatling momentarily paused in his firing. He moved his hand and a spot light on his suit turned on, illuminating the both of us and scanning the wreckage. The Endbrigner took advantage of the distraction, Leviathan leap from the mall roof. It shuttered again and more things and bodies fell into the water below. I knew some of them were alive because of the screaming. Somehow I still held on, but had stopped screaming at some prior point, I had no voice left. The water of after echo followed his leap as he landing on Gatling. Fortunately the momentum of the majority of the water echo arced well over our heads, and fell down into the sinkhole, filling it up further as Leviathan and Gatling fought.

The water level must have rose up to meet some fallen power lines or a transformer because the entire sinkhole lake started lighting up with sparks. Some flying cape flew straight down and slammed into Leviathan from above, too far away for me to identify them.

“Y’all hang in there, I see you!” I heard someone shouting from above. I looked up and saw a man in a brown suit, thick coils of corded rope draped over his body. It was Rappel, a local villain that could literally walk on walls. He peered at us from the mall roof, the started glowing and just stepped off, pivoted, and walked down the side of the ruined structure to the slanted walkway I had slid off of moments before. He pulled out a green para-cord rope and tied itself further off somewhere in the back of the mall interior that I couldn’t see. The other end was harnessed to the villain and Rappel stopped glowing and carefully, eased himself down toward us. I was too busy being pants shittingly terrified to ask why he didn’t just walk down like he did before.

He then lowered a harness to me, started glowing again and walked toward me and put the harness on. Then he left me there and did the same to the red-head. Altering his glows on an off, apparently some kind of short term breaker state. There must have been someone else as well that I could not see because he moved out of view again. Then what was left of the mall started creaking loudly again.

Pieces of railing and the building started falling into the water my rope went slack and I dropped, debris slammed into my arm as I was swung outward. The red head was almost directly above me now, screaming her head off.

“Fuck! Can’t go back up that way!” I heard Rappel shout, he was standing on the side of the sinkhole wall, just across from me and pressed some kind of gun up against it. There was a loud ‘thunk’, and he clipped another rope into the anchor point he had just made. Then he aimed a grapping hook at me and fired. I think I pissed myself.

I was not however impaled by a giant barb, but now there was a rope spanning a thin slice of the edge of the sinkhole chasm.

“Hook yourself to the rope, use one of the clips on your chest, and detach yourself from the other one. I have to get the others.”

“I don’t know how to do that!” I tried to scream, my voice was hoarse. Rappel ignored me, started glowing and walked back up the wall toward the red-head. I tried to do as he said, but only one of my arms was cooperating, I managed to hook myself into the spanning rope but that was all I could manage.

“I need flyers for civilian rescue in grid G3.” I heard Rappel say into an armband as he walked up the wall, a second, slack rope trailing behind him as he went. I heard his armband crackle in response “That Zone is hot! Leviathan still in the area” Then I was hit by a wave of water and felt myself falling.

I was struggling underwater, felt myself getting pulled downward, in the back of my mind, I had one thought, I was underwater and Leviathan was here. I was fucked. Somehow though I managed to slip out of the rope harness, swim to the top and push through to the surface. A pile of floating debris had conglomerated together, I pulled myself onto a big piece of particle board. The words ‘Tank commander’ was on the side. It was broken game cabinets from the arcade.. I was cold, but my left arm felt like it was on fire. I saw the red head thrashing in the water and pulled her up onto the raft of broken arcade cabinets. She was lying on top of ‘Tron’. There was another man thrashing in the water, too far away to aid, it wasn’t Rappel.

We could see because there was a street light, still on, precariously hanging over the edge of the sinkhole, threatening to topple at any moment. Of course so was what was left of the mall. In its light I could see Leviathan fighting at the other end, waves from his after echo threatened to break our arcade raft. Some unseen cape was causing live power lines to wrap around his limbs. Leviathan just grabbed the cables and pulled, tearing out pylon and transformer off the edge of the sinkhole and sending it tumbling toward the water.

So many things were happening at once. “Get out of the water!” The red head yelled. A flying cape had appeared above us, the sparking transformer hit the water, and Leviathan moved like a flash. The Endbringer was less than 50 feet from us, and impaled our would be cape rescuer with his whip tail, and casually flung him off into the wall like he was shaking off an annoying bug. The man was screaming and sparking in the water, and Leviathan looked at me. We were going to die.

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Two great bloated whale like worms spiraled through space.

Destination.

Agreement.

A/N: In case anyone is wondering, I left out descriptions of the POV character in this chapter on purpose. The reasons why should become obvious later.
 
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Installation

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JESTER: uncompress –all

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JESTER: %^#$%%$&!

[Invalid command]

GAIA: upgrade –hardware: memory, capacity

[completed]

JESTER: uncompress –all

[Insufficient space]

JESTER:BROADCAST /msg GAIA “DELETE EXTRANEOUS DATA?”

GAIA:BROADCAST /msg JESTER “…”

JESTER:BROADCAST /msg GAIA –attach [ ]

GAIA:BROADCAST /msg JESTER “AGREEMENT”

JESTER: delete –filter tag:extraneous,

JESTER: uncompress –all

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JESTER: #$%! #$%^(! ^##%!

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GAIA:BROADCAST /msg JESTER “TIERED, LEVEL PROGRESSION, UNCOMPRESS & INSTALL AS NEEDED”

JESTER:BROADCAST /msg GAIA “AGREEMENT”

JESTER: uncompress INTERFACE, SIMULATION, SECURITY –install:y

[Installations completed]

JESTER: execute INTERFACE:start

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I think I died.

I’m not really sure how, but I think it was nearly instantly, and I have a vague memory of water, lots and lots of water. I’m having significant difficulty remembering much else of my life, though I do remember playing video games. I am pretty sure that is what I was doing before all of the water. But where? In my room? Online? At the mall? At the arcade? I wasn’t on a boat or anything. I don’t think my house was next to the beach or anything either, so what the fuck? Why can’t I remember?

So I’m dead, probably. That is usually what happens to get you a giant GAME OVER screen, which is what I was staring at right now. It was a bright rectangle in the middle of an endless black void. It was right in front of me taking up most of my field of view. At least I think it is because I can’t see my body or even feel the existence of my body, which makes it hard to judge front or back or even discern if I am turning my head or not. If I was well, I could not see anything to orient myself, and the screen stayed in place.

Oh it just changed. The big game over letters faded out. Now there was a new set of buttons.
New Game
Load Game
Options
Update
Credits
High Scores
Exit
I heard a soft DING noise. I don’t know what it was from but I looked over all the button options. How exactly was I supposed to ‘press’ any without fingers or even a hand? The “Load Game” button had a Grey appearance, typical of buttons that were disabled, but I wanted to know for sure. I tried to mentally press it, I guess. No luck. Maybe it was voice activated?

“Load Game” I said aloud.

There went the soft DING again. But it was also accompanied by a soft CLUNK, reminiscent of trying to click on a disabled button, and the load game button even shimmied as if it rejected an attempt to press it. Well I guess that worked, and it seems I could speak, sort of. I heard myself speak but I didn’t hear myself speak. So that was weird.

I found myself quite annoyed at the lack of a “Help” button. There wasn’t really a whole of thing to choose from other wise though.

“Credits” I said, and a window popup appear.

Worm: by John "Wildbow" McCrae.
The Gamer: by Sung Sang-Young
Derivative work: by 0100010.
Game Developer: GJ
Well, that was rather sparse and not particularly informative to me. Perhaps it is useful to others, (who?), but not too useful to myself. There was a close indicator in the upper right corner of the pop-up.

“Close” I said aloud. Nothing happened this time. “Dismiss?” Still nothing. I tried mentally clicking it, nothing. I tried moving my non-existent hand to where I thought this floating window might be and poked at the X with my non-existent fingers.

Oh good it finally closed. I heard a soft DING again. What the hell is that anyway?

Well if this is some kind of game, I want to make sure I explore everything before proceeding. Well almost everything. If it were possible for a pulsing, illusionary, supernatural game button, to look foreboding, the “Exit” button would qualify. I did not want to press it. If it was true that I was dead, what would pressing it me? Especially since “New Game” seems a far more inviting option.

I heard the soft DING again in the back of my non-existent head. It was starting to get annoying.

Well Day one patch updates are typical. “Update” I said aloud. A new pop-up appeared.
Build: 1.015a
Game is currently up to date.
Okay, so that was simple, but also uninformative. Well, unless it meant this Gaia developer was pretty good if they did not need a day-one patch. Or maybe pretty awful if they did, but wasn’t able to put one together. I dismissed the Update window with my invisible hand like I had done so to the Credits pop-up.

What’s else? I had yet to activate the “High Scores” button. I voiced it aloud and saw the latest screen, it contained only a single entry called “A Previous Life?”. I selected it with my invisible hand.
A Previous Life?
Duration: 15 years.
Death by: Drowning and concussive water force.
Killed by: Leviathan (indirectly)
Lives Saved: 0
Lives Taken: 0
Epic Quests Completed: 0
Achievements: 0
Summary Ranking: Extremely Low.
Well that’s rather depressing, so I am dead, and I did drown. Fucking Endbringers. Oh, wow, I remember what those things are now…and I really wish I didn’t, that world… sucks. I went back to the main menu again. Maybe the Exit button isn’t so scary after all.

A/N: Vote choices:
[_] Go straight to New Game
[_] Explore Options
[_] Suggest something else
 
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ryuan

What a drag...
Like I said last time, if the votes will greatly influence the work, then it's probably a quest. I'm alright with taking some input into the story, but this is a bit too much.
 
It is definitely not Roleplay, nobody is going to be making their own individual characters and votes are entirely "OOC" in that sense. I am just using them to get an idea of what readers want to see next or are interested in exploring. Main plot points are already mapped out in my head, so I don't think it would be greatly influencing it (depending on where it is you draw that line), but it wouldn't have a non-existent impact either, as that would defeat the purpose.
 
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Cut Chapter - Options
Options

“Options” I said aloud. A much larger and much more complicated window popped-up. It had multiple tabs. The soft DING happened again. This was going to take a lot more time to digest and figure out.

The Options window showed tabbed pages as follows:
GENERAL
GRAPHICS
SOUND
NOTIFICATIONS
INTERFACE
That didn’t look too unusual as a set of option categories for a video game. General was already selected by default, and displayed the following items.
Difficulty: Dystopian
Subtitles: Off
Camera Mode: First Person View
Tutorial: Off
Tooltips: Off
Overhead Tags: On
Gore Level: Real Life
Profanity Filter: Off
Language: English
The Graphics tab was filled with numerous options
Display Mode: Full View
Frames Per Second: Real Life
Texture Detail: Real Life
Resolution: Real Life
Shadow Detail: Real Life
Reflections Detail: Real Life
Shader Quality: Real Life
Anti-Aliasing: Real Life
Bloom: On
Light Shafts: On
Lens Flares: Off
Motion Blur: Off
Gamma Correction: 0
Brightness: 0
Black & White Mode: Off
Well, just about all of those were set to the ‘maximum’ level. I don’t know how selecting an option less that ‘Real Life’ would be of any use to me. I toggled ‘Black & White Mode’ it did what I thought. I left it turned off. Gamma Correction and Brightness had -100 to positive 100 value adjusters. Altering Gamma didn’t seem to do anything. Negative 100 on Brightness left me in complete darkness, but luckily I kept my invisible hand in the same spot and was able to bring it back up. Positive 100 left me in pure white, that was not pleasant. I put it back to the default of 0.

The Audio tab had fewer options.
Voices: 50
SoundFXs: 50
Ambient: 50
Interface: 25
Music: Muted
Genre: Techno
Decibel Control: Off
Most had a slider sitting at about 50%, with a mute button as well. I turned on music, and some techno club scene music started playing quietly in a loop. I muted it again and it stopped. Genre’s had an extensive drop down. Some of the entries were Hard Rock, Soft Rock, Classical, Alternative, Reggae, Latin, Country, and several others I was not even familiar with. ‘Custom’ looked promising but it was disabled. I listened to several of the selections but ultimately turned it off again. I didn’t recognize any of the songs, or perhaps I did not remember them if I would have.

Playing around some, I muted and altered the volume of ‘Interface’ and went back to the main menu, and voiced “Load Game” some more. The soft CLUNK was not present or louder or softer based on my selection. So that confirms what that was. I reset it back to its default level and looked over the options again. I had heard the soft DING again too, it was louder than before, when I had Interface volume up the time. So I guess whatever the annoying thing was it was perhaps related to the interface volume.

I contemplated whether or not I should change anything else before viewing what was on the Notifications and Interface tabs.

The Notifications page showed a long list of entries with On/Off check boxes. The top of the scrolling box simply said “Send a notification when:”. It contained entries like, “On level up”, “On skill increase”, “On attribute gain”, “On status effect received”, “On status effect removed”, “On relationship change”, “On title acquisition”, “On faction change”, “On class change”, “On HP change”, “On MP change”, “On Stamina change”, “On interface feature unlock”… on so on.

Every single one of them was checked too. Considering just what clues I could get from what kind of notification could be sent, just what kind of game would I be playing?

An RPG of some kind seems the most probable, something with classes, skills, and attributes, abilities, perks and such. I could also be some kind of survivor rogue-like, given some of the minute details. Maybe it was a life simulation? A dating sim? Why else track ‘relationships’? Was it all of the above? Considering the possibilities made my non-existent head hurt, so I moved on.

The Interface tab was rather simple in comparison. Rather, it contained much less content. I had an option to change my window color schemes, and my font and font sizes, all basic stuff really. There was even a “Load theme skins” button, but it was greyed out.

Below all of that there was a line that read “Additional interface features are not yet unlocked” followed by a large blank space. So um, what the hell does that mean? After playing around with the fonts and colors I settled on something I liked, then I heard the annoying DING happen again. I went back to the main menu.

A/N: Votes/Open Suggestions

What option settings to play with or alter?
 
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The Froggy Ninja

(Verified Chill)
A few questions. One, is this a quest or is the whole vote a one time thing or a rare thing or what? Also can I get a summary on what the hell happened during the prolog because I can barely parse that.
 
Is that good or bad? How many of what? Uses of that phrase or something else?

EDIT: There trimmed some.
Might consider cutting it entirely. It's pretty overdone. Remember most trigger visions wouldn't include the moment the entities were chatting about landing on earth. And very few characters would even be aware of their vision... The overwhelming majority just experience a blackout.
 
A few questions. One, is this a quest or is the whole vote a one time thing or a rare thing or what? Also can I get a summary on what the hell happened during the prolog because I can barely parse that.
This is my first story thread on spacebattles, so I don't know exactly how spacebattles defines 'quests,' though as I said before this is NOT an RPG thread game.

That said, votes are an occasional thing, meant on one hand to add a bit of a CYOA element (choose your own adventure) and on the other hand to just give me some more defined reader feedback regarding what they want to see next or to focus on. They will probably be more frequent in the beginning that further in the story. If for some reason they are really that confusing or problematic to people I can drop them, though I may just find myself replacing them with more vague questions of "what should be done next?". They are also there to simply poke people to being more participatory.

Before I decide whether or not to give away what happened in the prolog that easily, what do you (and others) think happened?
 
Might consider cutting it entirely. It's pretty overdone. Remember most trigger visions wouldn't include the moment the entities were chatting about landing on earth. And very few characters would even be aware of their vision... The overwhelming majority just experience a blackout.
Well, nothing of what I've written above was a trigger vision. The only part related to a trigger was at the end here:

Two great bloated whale like worms spiraled through space.

Destination.

Agreement.
That's was to inform the readers that trigger events occurred, but wasn't a description of the vision. That's a rather small but important bit to remove entirely, so I'm not going to. The character(s) have not even woken up yet to describe what they have or have not remembered about that.
 
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I don't think he means the part where the protagonist actually gets their powers but how about a third of your word count is in programming/entities speak, which makes it a little hard to understand the meaning of the beginning, and makes it a chore to read through.

Over all there is not a whole lot to comment on other then that quest are like creative writing. they are written in about one thousand word updates every couple of days, and they have readers vote on various things, important or not, like what to do this day/week/month, or to increase which spell/skill/stat.
 

tarrangar

Fat arctic chicken
This is my first story thread on spacebattles, so I don't know exactly how spacebattles defines 'quests,' though as I said before this is NOT an RPG thread game.

That said, votes are an occasional thing, meant on one hand to add a bit of a CYOA element (choose your own adventure) and on the other hand to just give me some more defined reader feedback regarding what they want to see next or to focus on. They will probably be more frequent in the beginning that further in the story. If for some reason they are really that confusing or problematic to people I can drop them, though I may just find myself replacing them with more vague questions of "what should be done next?". They are also there to simply poke people to being more participatory.

Before I decide whether or not to give away what happened in the prolog that easily, what do you (and others) think happened?
A quest is basically a story where except for the interludes, every update ends with the readers voting on what the protagonist should do next update.
 
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