Ivory spires that put to shame the mountain they're grafted to. Thousands of lives perched on a...
Cybernetic Aura Distortion Syndrome.
Haha. I considered making it the bright green of a hyperlink on this site, but I changed my mind.I do not like the underlined blue nonhyperlink. Other than that, looks good.
How about changing it to
Nah. It's not censored in-universe or anything.How about changing it toLink Disabled REF: ERROR - Content Unavalable.Dr. Daybreak’s journal
Didn't mean to imply Censorship or any thing. Content Unavailable means the content is unavailable. Whether this is by Corporate cover up, hacking or sloppy Admining the reason is unexplained. Happens all the time in the "Shadowrun" world. usually as shorthand meaning the "Meta-Author" (that's you btw) hasn't created the Doc yet.
Which is a BEEP shame, Because The term Magic should be independent of the power-source, as it's use is more of a discipline, or talent, to be trained, than a Dogmatic Witchunting tag.Now, because I'm not likely to get to this for a while longer, here's one of Twilight's findings.
In her readings, she notes that evil stuff like Sombra's power and Discord's power is not referred to as "Magic." That term is reserved for pony magic, because Friendship is Magic and all. The Elements of Harmony themselves, the most powerful magic that there is supposedly, are inherently about happy ponies living in happy pony-canon. This might be a clue as to why pony magic decides that it "doesn't like" certain things.
Remember that the setting's Earthdawn equivalent is FiM where Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle are prancing around. This fic is trying very hard to avoid the trap of just being Shadowrun with ponies in it because I like ponies.Which is a BEEP shame, Because The term Magic should be independent of the power-source, as it's use is more of a discipline, or talent, to be trained, than a Dogmatic Witchunting tag.
Sounds like Magic is going to have to grow up and learn to play nicely with Technology, or it's going to get bent over Science's knee and spanked.
As I said on FiMfic, I quite like this premise and look forward to more.
From what I can tell from what's been posted so far is not necessarily that magic and technology don't get along, it's that magic doesn't cooperate well with the dystopic attitudes of the Shadowrun ponies. It takes a certain personality to want to enhance yourself with technology, and that attitude does not match well with FiM.Sounds like Magic is going to have to grow up and learn to play nicely with Technology, or it's going to get bent over Science's knee and spanked.
As I said on FiMfic, I quite like this premise and look forward to more.
A lot of Victoria's actions here are just how the technology works. Voice commands and motion sensors and such--though I do want to imply that she feels like she's "in tune with" the tech, yes.ISTM that it is happening. AFAICT Victoria's talent is a kind of magical 'computer telepathy'. Jacking into the net with just her mind and magic.
I contradicted this a little bit with the implication that artificial ventricles and nerve replacements are just as problematic. See, whether it's enhancement or life-saving, these things replace part of you. This sounds a little bleak--magic is unhappy with you even if all you wanted was use of your hind legs again--but, as Daybreak theorizes, even medical technology like this owes a lot to the advancements made by weapons research.From what I can tell from what's been posted so far is not necessarily that magic and technology don't get along, it's that magic doesn't cooperate well with the dystopic attitudes of the Shadowrun ponies. It takes a certain personality to want to enhance yourself with technology, and that attitude does not match well with FiM.
Mothers and daughters, fathers and sons
Turn and look me in the eye
Just come with me and I’ll show you the sun
You and me, we’ll touch the sky!
Don’t be afraid
To join the dance
Everyone’s invited now
If music’s in your heart then so am I
Step on up, I’ll show you how...
(chorus)
Just close your eyes and you’ll see
How sweet the music can be
Just pick your hooves up, come along and dance with me
Our bodies moving this way
All through the night and the day
Don’t be afraid now, darlin’, come and dance with me!
Ooh I'll teach you all to see
Honey come and dance with me
Come on up and dance with me! (dance with me)
Ooh I'll teach you all to see
Honey come and dance with me
Right here baby come and dance with me!
[spoken]
Just you and I, we'll light the night
Just you and I, we'll light the night
Just you and I, we'll light the night
Just you (Just you--Just you--)
Gather your sisters, lovers and friends
Tell them they can make it through
We'll sing the world a song that never ends
Raise your voices, clear and true
Just let the magic
inside your heart
Take you to a better place
Now raise your head and watch a new age start
Come alive in love's embrace!
[repeat chorus]
[spoken]
Don't worry if you're new to this
I'll show you how with just one kiss
You're Earth, Sky, Horned, foreign descent
From Tartarus
Or heaven-sent
If city life has got you down
In shadowed slum or sunny town
Just close your eyes, I'll set you free
Honey--come and dance with me!
(chorus)
Whether you're earthbound or winged
Just raise your voices and sing
Don't be afraid to come along and dance with me
There's music deep in our souls
whether we're ancients or foals
No matter who you are, come and dance with me!
Ooh I'll teach you all to see
Honey come and dance with me
Come on up and dance with me! (dance with me)
Ooh I'll teach you all to see
Honey come and dance with me
Right here baby come and dance with me!
Or you might do it this way:See, whether it's enhancement or life-saving, these things replace part of you. This sounds a little bleak--magic is unhappy with you even if all you wanted was use of your hind legs again--but, as Daybreak theorizes, even medical technology like this owes a lot to the advancements made by weapons research.
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No, I'm not satisfied with the idea of happy pony magic being unhappy with lifesaving medical technology, but neither are the characters in the setting. I think it's also okay to have a little bit of bleakness like that--if I'm going to use this gritty sci-fi world, I should let things get a little grimy.