To the Victor, the Spoils

Chapter I

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
What does a super-soldier do after the war’s been won?

Author’s Ramblings Notes (spoilered to prevent ennui): Yes, I have read Drakon, so there is a definite Drakaverse feel to this (or, as Quentin Tarantino would say, an ‘homage’). That was actually what led me to this story. The above question is one that comes up in several bits of work (or is noticeably ignored). In Warhammer, it’s a question that the primarchs and some of Space Marines ask themselves: what will we do when we’ve won? When there are no more battles to fight? In Halo, it’s ‘keep your slave army on the leash so they’ll be ready for the next conflict ONI decides to start’. In Drakon it’s apparently ‘fuck around’ (literally and figuratively).

There was a scene in Drakon (yes, spoilers ahead) that made me actually pity the titular character, Gwendolyn. She’s having a tete-a-tete with her human opponent and tells him that although she’s been genetically programmed to conquer and dominate, she doesn’t have to – she’s trying to conquer this particular Earth because she wants to. Which is in direct contradiction to everything we’ve seen of her so far; as soon as she discovered that she was in an parallel universe, she started to try and find a way to enslave that Earth, to bring it under the heel of the Domination. She never, not for one second, wonders about her course of action as she tries to convince her counterpart she has.

That scene got me thinking and this, a handful of years and several additional sources of inspiration later, is the result.

There’s a couple Andromeda Easter eggs here; Homo invictus is a deliberate reference to Homo sapiens invictus, the scientific name of the Nieztcheans. Likewise, I used Johannesburg because in one episode a character is trying to convince his fellow Earthlings to rise up against their Nieztchean enslavers, telling them that every other city in the world has absolutely no clue what’s happening is breathlessly waiting for them to take the first step and among the many names he pulls out of his ass uses to inspire his fellows, the last city he mentions is Johannesburg.

As ever, commentary and constructive criticism is appreciated. Hope you enjoy.

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He had always hated opera. Tonight was no exception.

Darren Hawke, one of the few remaining Homo sapiens left on Earth, gazed around at the tittering crowds and forced himself to keep a pleasantly neutral expression on his face as he offered sweetmeats to the milling guests. House Garuda had spared no expense in the catering; wines from vineyards that longer existed, handed off to chortling, self-congratulating butchers. The urge to swing his silver platter into someone’s face was becoming almost uncontrollable. If he had a gun...

...well, he’d be dead before he could even fire it. If he was lucky, he’d be able to draw it. So it was probably for the best. Besides, he hadn’t lived this long by giving in to his sense of righteous indignation no matter how viscerally satisfying that it might be.

Dressed in his fine server’s outfit with the icon of the Atlas Theater on his left breast, Darren swayed through the crowd, dodging the oblivious or uncaring partygoers and the other staff as they threaded their own way through press of bodies. Most of other servers were familiars, but like him a handful were sapiens. None of them were trustworthy; the former for obvious reasons and the latter for a slew of others. Chief among them earning a pat on the head for turning in a spy.

The doors had only just opened, but the lounge was filling quickly. Lord Halkein often had the performances start early to make sure those who tried be ‘fashionably late’ suffered the indignity of arriving to an empty hall, their fellow partygoers already having taken the best seats in the theater.

A murmur of excitement ran through the crowd and Darren looked up. Right on time, he thought, a knot twisting in his stomach. He’d known who tonight’s festivities were for but his heart still skipped a beat as he recognized its gliding stride into the mezzanine lounge even before the majordomo spoke up. All the invictus had the same smooth gait, but this one was different, as if distilled to its perfect, predatory essence.

“Introducing Lady Alexandra Irine Savoy, House Vipress.”

She was dressed in a simple, yet elegant green dress that gleamed like water under the room’s lights. It matched her eyes, her emerald gaze darting warily across every face as she smiled shakily at the other partygoers. Her golden hair was bound in a single long braid that hung almost to her waist, a silver clasp stylized like a snake’s head fastened to the end. Her hands twitched, as if she were uncomfortable and had to stop herself from playing with her outfit. There was a smattering of muted applause and Savoy tilted her head in acknowledgment, murmuring thanks under her breath before making a beeline for the bar.

Watching her navigate the crowd and avoid each glad-handing aristocrat was like watching an anaconda glide through water. Hawke forced himself not to stare. There was no ‘House Vipress’. At least, there hadn’t been until a few months ago, when they’d cracked Savoy’s cryo tube and let her out. Darren could still see a faint network of as-yet unhealed scars that ran across the invictus’s skin like cracks through marble stone. Even an invictus could only heal so fast from such damage.

Savoy was an enigma, an object of fascination to the other sapiens and familiars here, but he knew more about her than most. She was one of the deadliest creatures on the planet, one of the primogenitors’ gene-bred killers, a product of an earlier time. From the war, the only war that mattered. Her presence here was the surest proof there was that God existed and was a sick son of a bitch. Shot, stabbed, burned and crushed beneath tons of rubble, somehow she’d clung to life long enough to be interred in a cryo tube, her wounds so grave that reviving her would have killed her.

The murdering bitch had spent ninety years in stasis, turned into a fetish for the rest of the Hegemony to worship. Her injuries had been so severe, even with modern medical science, some people hadn’t believed she’d survive outside of stasis.

She had, of course. Her survival had been taken as a sign – further proof of the invictus’s right to rule – and the Great Houses had elevated the resurrected Savoy to nobility, granting her lands and a title. Garuda had fallen all over themselves to invite Lady Savoy to this encore performance of their famous opera, eager to make the acquaintance of such a noted hero.

Play your part, Darren reminded himself. Play your part. He hadn’t spent months living this false identity just to betray himself now. That was all he needed; to get distracted and make a slip-up. In this company, that would be fatal. His tray was empty of hors d’oeuvres and the small comm in his ear pinged; they needed more staff to serve wine. Slipping into the kitchen, Hawke traded his empty tray for one with several crystal glasses and an unopened bottle from the south of France. There would be no more of this vintage, not with its creators dead and the lands its grapes had grown on burnt to nothing. From what Darren had heard, Lady Halkein had been saving it for a special occasion, such as greeting the ‘Hero of Johannesburg’’

Hawke smiled politely as the partygoers accepted the glasses, making jokes about the providence of the wine and complimenting their Garuda hosts. Few even acknowledged his presence.

By sheer happenstance, he found himself close to the bar.

“You,” the directive was brusque and sharp. Hawke turned. Savoy was looking at him; she beckoned him to come over.

Holding back the gorge in his throat, he followed her command. “My lady?” he queried. There were already three empty glasses in front of her, and fourth half-drunk in her left hand, but she seemed unaffected by her alcohol intake. Her gaze was steady, a predator’s evaluation and despite his experience among the invictus, Darren felt a chill run down his spine. If you didn’t count the years she’d spent in cryo, she was younger than he was, but she was one of the ‘primagen’ breeds. All invictus were bred with certain improvements, but Savoy was different, even from the others here tonight. Her function hadn’t been to rule. She’d been bred to hunt, to kill – to destroy.

She reached out and snatched the unopened bottle off Darren’s tray with her free hand, setting it onto the countertop in front of her. She was still watching him. “You’ll do,” she said at last. “I have a private box. When the show starts, join me there. 309.”

He bowed. “My lady honours me.” Experience had dampened the flush of instinctive revulsion; un-marked sapiens and familiars were to be available to any invictus at any time. For anything.

She laughed. The sound was short, guttural and ugly. She drained the rest of her drink in a single gulp, setting the empty glass down on the bar. “Of course I do,” she said, standing and making her way through the crowd, the bottle of irreplaceable French wine still held tightly in her hand.

~

The other wait staff were in awe of Darren’s luck – to be picked by Lady Savoy, the Hero of Johannesburg! The familiars were wide-eyed, a few of them brushing their fingers along his coat to share in his fortune. The other sapiens chortled and muttered under their breath, giving Hawke more than one clap on the back or sarcastically wishing him luck for his ensuing liaison, disappointed that it hadn’t been them that had caught the Vipress’s eye.

This wouldn’t be the first time that Darren had had to... entertain an invictus. In any other circumstance, he would have been flattered by the attention... except for what Savoy was. Two weeks ago, Lord Halkein had beaten one of the sapiens girls to death because she had dared tell him ‘no’. There was no choice. When one of the masters asked, you obeyed. That was the world that Savoy and her creators had made. Ninety years of slavery, ninety years of Home sapiens dwindling in number. The invictus made jokes about him and his kind, talking about ‘evolution’ and ‘destiny’. He’d learned to live with it. To hide his true feelings and be their willing serf while he learned everything he could about them, passing anything of interest along to others.

The invictus believed they’d won the war. That was all right. Humanity – actual, pure humanity – was on the precipice of extinction, but they hadn’t been pushed over yet. They still fought and he was a part of that fight.

Their day was coming; Darren just hoped it would be soon.

~

309 was one of the nicer private boxes in the theater. Though Savoy apparently didn’t realize it, she had a lot of political capital and every House, great or small, was falling over themselves to try and impress her. Garuda had merely gotten there first.

Darren rang the chime, the door promptly opening. One of the theater’s familiars. Darren recognized her; Verona. She had strawberry-blonde hair, bright blue eyes and skin with just a touch of duskiness. She was one of the theater’s comfort girls; her jacket was open in a V that ran down to her waist, gathered by a silk belt and only the double-sided adhesive on the inside of her outfit kept her from spilling out of her top with every movement. She only briefly met his eyes before standing aside. “Mistress Savoy is waiting for you,” she said softly, gesturing into the suite. The invictus was inside, seated on one of the luxurious chairs facing the balcony.

Hawke nodded and stepped into the room, approaching the bitch. He kept his expression the appropriate mixture of tension, excitement, apprehension and anticipation – the way any man facing a liaison with an invictus might appear.

Savoy didn’t even look up. She was sprawled over her chair, resting her head against the splayed fingers of her right hand. “Sit,” she ordered. The bottle of wine she’d appropriated sat in a bucket of ice to her right, still unopened.

Darren did so. The entire front of the room was taken up by a wall of privacy glass, allowing the occupants to look out while preventing anyone else from seeing in. Aside from himself and Verona, Savoy was alone. He hadn’t expected that. Oh, he’d been sure what she wanted from him, but there were none of the other nobles here to fawn over the Vipress, trying to curry favour with the Hegemony’s greatest hero, nor a milling host of fawning serfs to tend to her whims.

The theater lights had dimmed and on the stage, a tall man with the sigil of Garuda on his jacket breast was talking, but Darren couldn’t hear a thing. That was all right – he’d heard enough of Geoffrey Halkein’s self-primping speeches to know that he was thanking his guests for their attendance, taking about high human culture, and simpering in the general direction of the night’s VIP.

“I hope you don’t mind,” Savoy said. “I turned the sound off. If I had to listen to another syllable from that pompous windbag, I’d have to kill him.”

Hawke blinked, caught off-guard by the young woman’s comment. He had no idea how to respond. Behind him, he could see that Verona was as surprised as he was. Should he laugh? Was he supposed to? Would Savoy take offence at a human finding the death of one of her people humorous? Fortunately, she saved him from having to answer.

Her hand swept out, a recently-depleted wine glass aimed in the general direction of the booth’s small bar. “This is empty.”

Verona hurried to fill it. Savoy took a drink, letting out a small sigh. “Do you know what they called this piece of shit? The Triumph of Will.” She shook her head. “You’d think one of the people involved in the production would have opened a history book at some point in their lives. Or maybe they did. Maybe the title is supposed to be some kind of commentary that works on a deep metatextual level.” The invictus snorted. “Or not. ‘There is no history that matters but us’,” she quoted from Jang-Li’s The Rise of High Human Culture. “Hmm,” she looked down. “My glass is empty again.”

The play began. Darren had never seen the whole thing – he was a server, after all. He had, however heard departing audience members gushing about how ‘inspirational’ it was, how masterfully scored and acted, how perfect every scene was, how it was such a fitting tribute to the end of the war and the hard-won peace. It was a vanity piece, there to commemorate the ninetieth anniversary of humanity’s – true, actual humanity – fall.

The story began with a scene of the Primogenitors, of their vision and foresight. Darren had seen enough others like it not to have to worry about reacting, but deep inside all he could feel was hate. Five billion dead because of the ‘Primogenitors’. Five billion dead and Homo sapiens a dwindling memory. If given the chance, he would kill each and every one of those men and women. Even if they were children. Even if he had to kill their parents, their grand-parents... he would do it. Them and everyone like them, who ever so much as looked at the human genome and said ‘what if’?

He looked over to his hostess. She was in the same position she’d been when he arrived, bored and utterly devoid of the superior, self-congratulatory smirk that so many of the other guests had as they listened to the tale of the Primogenitors’ vision. He... hadn’t expected that. He’d thought she’d be all puffed up. Personally invited by one of the larger noble houses, the guest of honour in a play that in no small part celebrated her own actions. Instead... she seemed to be doing her level best to defy the abilities of her enhanced liver. He’d spent his entire life around invictus and nothing Savoy was doing matched what he knew of them.

“More, please,” she asked Verona as she emptied her third glass.

~

The war began. There was a lot more pomp and circumstance to it here than there had been in the real world. Small, poverty-stricken nations came under the primogenitors’ sway first. The first steps were tepid and slow as they tested their product lines. Small brushfire wars ended with shocking finality. Richer nations began to take notice. In the play, these men and women were lauded for their foresight but they had been short-sighted, seeing only what the primogenitors’ creations could do for them, funneling money into their coffers and reaping the rewards. Mercenary bands devastated their competition. Black-ops squads swept through the most hostile of encounters with ease.

The ‘war gardens’ bloomed and, like a cancer, the primogenitors and their political allies began to worm their way through the structure of the nations that funded them, each step small and sure... but each one adding up to the inevitable. Bribery, blackmail, back-scratching... even murder and assassination. By the time anyone realized the full scope of their plan, it was too late. The war wasn’t just nation against nation, but nations fighting against themselves as primogenitor-loyal factions turned on their opposition. Africa fell. Asia. Vast swathes of Europe, South America and North America were in primogenitor hands, but they held on – barely. They held on and counter-attacked. The International Coalition to enforce the Treaty of Madrid was formed.

Darren listened to the music as the chorus sang, their tone swaying between exuberance and mourning as the tides of war flowed back and forth as years of conflict were distilled down into a single opera, the melodies growing softer and sadder as the Coalition forces pushed the Primogenitors to the brink of defeat. Several people in the audience were crying. Then, with a dramatic bugle cry, the tempo began to rise as the first of the invictus entered the stage. Suddenly, it was the Coalition that was losing, the actors portraying their soldiers cringing fearfully back from the tall, proud invictus who laid a score of them low with every slow, theatrical sweep of his hands. The allied nations were losing ground now, more invictus entering the scene and aiding their fellow, until they had overwhelming numbers on their side. I guess it’s better to remember crushing the enemy with strength of arms than using bio-terror attacks to kill his people, destroy his food and sicken his forces...

Nations crumbled one after the other, small holdouts here and there still resisting the inexorable advance of the invictus but each of them succumbing in turn. There was almost nothing left to fight over at this point, nothing to gain except survival. Neither the Coalition nor the Hegemony would – could – allow the other to exist.

Tragedy struck: marshalling the last of their forces, the Coalition armies slammed into Africa. They’d developed a bio-weapon of their own, one that selectively targeted invictus-breed humans and the primogenitors’ soldiers. Their industry in ruins, they needed the dispersal systems the Primogenitors had used to poison so many of their cities. The Hegemony had always been paranoid of that trick being used on them and had shuffled their weapons from site to site, but the Coalition forces discovered their location. Johannesburg.

Even today, the invictus still didn’t how how the Coalition forces did it, but before the primogenitors could react, all the world’s armies – what was left of them – descended upon Africa. It was the largest mobilization in humanity’s history and the most hard-won victory imaginable as sapiens and invictus clashed through the streets of Johannesburg. The streets ran red, but the super-men were finally overwhelmed by the sheer, brutal force of numbers, drowned in the bodies the world had thrown at them. Two hundred thousand dead over two weeks of the most savage fighting imaginable, but Africa had fallen. Their factories burned. Their cloning facilities burned. Their research sites burned. The Coalition left nothing – nothing – in its wake, nothing but what they needed as their armies drove the invictus across Africa, back to a bare handful of scattered cities. The Hegemony’s advances elsewhere ended abruptly as they struggled to respond to this catastrophe.

The war gardens of Johannesburg were in Coalition hands and their scientists worked feverishly to refine and prepare the bio-weapon.

The Hegemony’s first attack had been utterly unlike their strategy to date; panicked and rushed as they realized what the Coalition was doing. What they could do. Desperate to stop them, three thousand invictus attacked in a joint aerial and amphibious assault, but the defenders were dug-in and ready. It was a slaughter, the most one-sided victory the Coalition had had in the entire war. Entire swathes of the city were destroyed as Coalition forces brought down crushing artillery strikes to kill a single invictus, armoured columns grinding super-men and women beneath their treads, burning paratroopers and drop troops crashing to earth as Coalition reinforcements caught the invaders between their lines and the prepared defences.

The scattered survivors fled – for the first time in the entire war, an invictus force hadn’t just been defeated, it hadn’t just been routed... it had been broken. A mournful dirge came from the choir as actors in imitation armour fell to the stage, Coalition soldiers in leering kabuki masks stepping over them and ‘executing’ the wounded.

The scene changed and a single, injured invictus limped across an urban wasteland. Savoy’s glass froze halfway to her lips as she watched ‘herself’. Refusing to surrender, ‘she’ killed human after human, fighting her way into the captured fortress-laboratory, gunning down scientists and soldiers one after the other, an exuberant hymn to the glory of the Hegemony on her lips. Watching all this, Darren’s mouth thinned imperceptibly as the imminent death of his species was exulted to such a degree. He turned to look at Savoy and froze.

The young woman’s hand was shaking, the wine spilling over the edge of her goblet, her eyes wide and staring at the actors on stage, watching ‘her’ noble last stand as she wiped out the Coalition leadership, shutting down the base’s defences and communications, calling in the air strike that had destroyed the facility and led to the destruction of the Coalition’s last standing army. ‘She’ turned to face the human troops that burst onto the scene, the last verse of her song one of sacrifice, honour for the Hegemony and the destiny of the invictus race.

The wine goblet shattered against the privacy glass, a scream tearing from Savoy’s throat, something angry and raw. Darren flinched, digging himself into his seat. Even Verona hesitated before simpering forward to clean up the mess. Savoy was on her feet, her chest heaving, her features flushed red, setting off the vein-like network of scar tissue that ran across her skin. Her hands flexed, fingers hooked into claws. She seemed frozen that way for a long moment, until the shards of glass and spilled wine had been cleared away and the familiar had retreated. Then, with an even louder roar of fury, she picked up her chair and hurled it into the window. Privacy glass was rated to withstand dedicated armour-piercing weaponry; the chair gave way. The window didn’t. If anyone outside the box even noticed, all they heard was a muted thump.

Hawke stayed very still and very quiet. Savoy was trembling with rage. He’d never seen an invictus like this.

“That...” Savoy hissed through her teeth. “That never happened.”

Darren had no idea what to say next. He’d spent years among invictus as a servant and never, not once, had his wits failed him as surely as they had now. His mouth was suddenly dry and a quick glance at Verona confirmed that he wasn’t the only one at a loss; the familiar was shaking, her mouth agape. She had never seen one of her masters like this either.

Taking a risk with his life, Darren forced himself to speak. “I... thought you were the Hero of Johanneburg.”

Savoy’s head snapped around, as if realizing that he was still there. For an instant, Darren thought that she was going to kill him, but the savagery of her expression wasn’t directed at him. The young woman let out a long breath, running a hand through her hair as she calmed herself down. “‘The Hero of Johanneburg’,” she quipped. “Of course I am. I ended the war, didn’t I? I stopped our people from being destroyed.” Her lip curled back in a sneer. “I brought about this age of High Human Culture, didn’t I?” She jabbed a finger at the stage below, where ‘her’ body was being recovered from the wreckage of the laboratory. “Ninety years pass and this is how it’s remembered. This. This... this... spectacle.” Her shoulders slumped. “This is what I meant to them.”

He was pushing his luck, but Darren couldn’t leave the question unasked. “What... did happen, my lady?”

The invictus looked at him again with the same predatory evaluation he’d seen earlier in the evening. For an instant, Hawke thought he’d pushed too far, but Savoy turned away with a shrug.

“I fell,” she said after a moment. “I was in a drop pod and I was hit by anti-aircraft fire. Guidance systems were destroyed and it veered off course. I ejected... but I hit the ground hard. I landed in the slums outside the city. I went through several of those shanties. My arms and legs were broken, half buried in debris... I was bleeding to death” she barked a laugh. “One of the locals found me. A bushman who’d been driven into the slums because of what we were doing to his lands. I don’t even know how he’d ended up there, where he’d lived before... God knows how far he’d come. He’d seen me fall from the sky and thought I was a sapiens soldier, maybe one of the paratroopers the Coalition counter-attack dropped on our aerial teams.”

She slumped into an unoccupied chair. “He ran and told someone, who made the same mistake he did – that I was sapiens. We never went into the slums – these people had only seen us in full armour. For all they knew, we were slavering monsters under all that gear. They had no reason to think I was an invictus. So they did what any decent human being does when they find someone in pain.” Her gaze lifted and there was a haunted look in her eyes. “They tried to help.”

~

A dozen men sweated and strained to clear the rubble from the wounded soldier. It didn’t seem possible that she could still be alive; her face was a mask of blood, but every time they shifted the pile, she moaned softly. Overhead, the night sky burned and flashed as the Invaders threw themselves against the defences of the Coalition army, an orange glow filling the southern horizon as Johannesburg burned, the crash of weaponry louder than the worst thunderstorm. “Faster, faster!” Baruti urged the men as a blazing airplane – he’d couldn’t tell from which side – roared overhead, to slam into the ground far too close for comfort.

There. The rubble shifted, the men cursing and swearing as they struggled to hold it clear with shaking limbs. Baruti reached in, grabbing the woman’s outstretched hand. “I have you!” he shouted. The soldier screamed as he pulled on her broken arm, flailing with the other as she tried to claw herself out of the rubble. “Help me!” Baruti roared at the rest of his fellows as, together, they pulled the woman out into the burning night. She collapsed in his arms, so heavy that he was half- pinned beneath her.

“Is she dead?” Lesendi asked. “Is she dead?”

Baruti shook his head. He could hear the soft thumping of her heart, the shallow gasps of her breath. “She lives!” she shouted, gesturing to the rusted stretcher a pair of the men had produced from somewhere. “Quickly, we must get her to the hospital!”

~

Standing abruptly, Savoy went to the bar and poured herself another drink. “There was a field hospital nearby. A handful of real doctors, mostly nurses and volunteers with first aid training. They might have known better, but my saviours told them I was an Coalition paratrooper. There wasn’t enough of my armour to tell them otherwise and I was torn to pieces, not enough left of my features to really tell that I wasn’t sapiens. I was a soldier – that meant I moved to the head of the line. Bones set, bandages wrapped, antibiotics. They did all that for me instead of the wounded civilians that they were tending. They couldn’t do more, but they told Coalition Command that they had an injured soldier who needed immediate attention. An evac shuttle picked me up, carried me right into the heart of their base.” The invictus gestured to herself. Like all of her kind, she was tall. Not bulky, but there was definition to her muscles, a lethal sinuousness to her form. “I’m a big girl, but that’s not enough. I was bandaged up. They believed what the hospital told them. The bloodwork would show what I was, but they were too busy trying to save my life. They managed to stabilize me – they thought I’d die. A sapiens would have died. That should have been their first clue.” Savoy emptied the glass in a single gulp and poured herself another. There was a distinct unsteadiness to her posture now. She’d ‘only’ consumed enough alcohol to send a normal human to the hospital.

“It wasn’t. They had so much going on, so many other wounded that they were just grateful that their triage teams could move on to the next patient. So I lay there, drifting in and out of consciousness. My bones were knitting, my body repairing itself. A ‘wolf in the fold’. In the aftermath of our failed assault, the base commander was touring the infirmary. General... Richardson, I think. An American. He was a good man.” The young woman swirled the contents of her glass. “That’s what killed him.”

~

Over a thousand dead, more than twice that wounded. That was the butcher’s bill from the Hegemony’s failed attack. It was the best kill ratio that any army had ever achieved against invictus-grade troopers. In fact, it was nothing short of miraculous. His men were already calling it the greatest victory in the war. The same men he’d thrown into a meat grinder to take Johannesburg in the first place. Twenty-three thousand dead in the first day of that hell. There were buildings filled with nothing but sheet-covered corpses, the remains of brave men and women who’d hurled themselves at an army of super-humans. They’d won, through. They’d pushed the damn ‘primogenitors’ off their little hill and all the way back to Cairo, smashing and burning every last bit of Hegemon tech in their path. If the Hegemony took this continent back, it would be useless to them.

General Joshua Richardson stepped off the elevator, the smell of blood and death hitting him like a physical thing. The cries of the wounded filled the hallways of the medical ward, overflowing into nearby sections. Overworked doctors, nurses and corpsmen struggled to save lives. Men and women in red-soaked bandages lay slumped where they’d fallen, waiting treatment or recovering from it. Arms and legs ended in stumps, blinded eyes were covered over, stitches held intestines in.

This, thought Richardson. This is my ‘great victory’. I wonder if the newscasts will show this part? He passed through the crowds of injured, whispering praise and thanks here and there. It was so very little, but it was all he could do. He knelt beside a dead pilot, his head cradled in a woman’s lap. She was an artillery officer. One of her eyes was gone, a bandage over the empty, weeping socket. She looked up at his approach and lifted a trembling hand up in an unsteady salute. “We held, sir,” she whispered. “We held.”

The general returned the salute. “You did, soldier. You fought,” he raised his voice. “you all fought like the gods themselves. I couldn’t be prouder. Not one step back.”

He felt like choking on his own words. Part of him quailed at the cost his people had already paid, but part of him knew that it would nothing if the ‘Hegemony’ won this war. Their vision of humanity was not one he would suffer to exist and he would do everything in his power to prevent that... even if it meant killing tens of thousands more of his soldiers.

Just a few days more, he told himself. Just a few more days and then every invictus on the planet would be dead. That was all they needed. To buy that time.

He entered the intensive care wards, each bed taken by a gravely injured soldier. Most wouldn’t survive the night. Richardson carefully threaded his way through them, stepping aside for the gurneys that wheeled more dead out and more wounded in. The general stopped at each bed whose occupant was conscious, offering a few words to each soldier. A handshake here, a pat on the shoulder there. It felt so very empty to him, but if it offered even a moment’s comfort to these men and women, then he would do it. The general paused beside one such bed, a tall young woman there. Half her face was bandaged, obscuring her features. Her other eye twitched open. There was no name on her chart, but it indicated she was one of the reserve’s drop troops. He put a hand on her shoulder. “At ease, soldier.”

Her good eye focused on his epaulettes. “General...?”

“That’s right. General Richardson. You’re with the 112th, right? Under General Tashiko?”

“Right...” she said softly. “The 112th.” She looked around. “Is this...?”

“Kenfentse Biological Facility,” he said with a smile. “We’re inside. We held. You pushed ‘em back. Victor’s on the run now.”

She nodded. “On the run...”

~

“I slit his throat,” Savoy said. “I’d stolen a scalpel from one of the trays and before he even knew he was in danger, he was dead.” She shook her head. “No one knew what was happening, but I was up and moving before they did. I killed the rest of his party and took their weapons. I cut my way to the elevators and got into the main facility.” She laughed. “I was almost dead, but it didn’t matter. I was inside, an invictus on the loose. Tight corridors, short hallways – no place to bring up heavy weapons. I killed and I kept killing.” She looked directly at Darren as she spoke. “And then I ended the war.”

~

“This is Lieutentant Alexandra Irine Savoy calling Hegemony Command. Respond. My authorization code is Three-Nine-Seven-Echo-Nine-Four-Bravo-Sierra. Respond.” She could barely stand, her knees shaking as she braced herself against the blood-smeared console. The bodies of dead Coalition officers littered the control room, muffled shouts and angry pounding coming from the door behind her as reinforcements tried to batter their way inside. “Respond, please.” Please, please hear me!

“This is Command. State your situation.”

“I’ve taken control of the Kenfenste Biological Facility, but I cannot hold this position. I’ve shut down long-range communications and early-warning systems, but it’s only a matter of time before they re-route those functions. I can’t guarantee a window for any length of time. Requesting immediate missile strike on my coordinates.”

“Negative, Savoy. Facility is strategic value-”

“Forget the strategic value!” the young woman screamed. There was a hiss and glow from behind her. They were burning through the door. She only had a moment left to her. “You need to hit this place now. They’re further along than we thought. They’ve got the weapon here. I say again: they have the weapon here. If you don’t take it out, they’ll launch before you can counter-attack. Do you copy, Control? If you don’t hit this place now, they will deploy their weapon.”

A pause. “We copy, Savoy. Instructions have been passed. Can you get to safe ground?”

The door was almost down now. “I’ll try,” she said. “Just bring this place down.” She pulled the headset off and hobbled towards the entrance, clutching a pistol in each hand. The molten, battered door came smashing down and Coalition forces poured into the room. Alexandra raised the guns. “I want to live,” she whispered just before her world ended in the crash of weapons fire.

~

“I survived, obviously,” Savoy said, taking a sip from her glass. Her voice was slurred. Invictus physiology had its limits and several hours of nonstop drinking appeared to be Savoy’s. “The command bunker was so far underground that it was spared the worst of the damage. Follow-up teams found me in the wreckage.” She nodded towards the window. “It wasn’t this bullshit.” She laughed. “I became the Hero of Johannesburg because some dumb bastards saved my life. Because they didn’t know what I was. No heroic charge through the gates. No single battle against the base commander. He was a good man who cared about the soldiers in his army and he died because of it. The doctors who’d patched me up, the field hospital – even the bushman and the people in the slum. They all died because they saved my life.”

She gulped down the rest of her wine, setting it back down on the bar, slumping back into the chair. “And that’s what they’ve done to me.” she gestured vaguely towards the stage. “Turned me into a flag-waving zealot. ‘For the glory of the Hegemony and the supremacy of the race!’ Right.” She leaned towards Darren. “Do you know why I fought?”

He shook his head, not trusting himself to speak. This... what he was hearing... it was impossible. It was a trick. She was playing with him, some sick game. It had to be. It had to be. Invictus didn’t act like this!

“Because I wanted to live. That’s all. I wanted to live.” Alexandra sagged back into the chair. Sensing the invictus’s mood and completely lost as to what the woman wanted, Verona fell back on tried-and-true methods. The familiar came over, kneeling next to the invictus and resting her head on Savoy’s shoulder. Savoy stroked her fingers through the familiar’s hair, without even seeming to realize that she was doing it. Homo familiarus were more ‘compatible’ with invictus. Bred to respond positively and to be pleasing to Homo invictus, they hadn’t been introduced until about forty years ago, when Savoy was still in medical cryostasis.

“How well do you know your history?” Savoy asked Hawke.

He shook his head. “Only what I learned in school, my lady.”

“Hmm,” Savoy mused. “Have you heard of child soldiers? The more brutal African militias used them. They would be addicted to drugs, given guns and told to fight.” She closed her eyes. “My first memory is of a primogenitor pulling the mask off my face. We don’t usually recall things that far back, but I remember being cold and afraid and this... face leaning into my vision. I gagged as the feeding tube came up out of my throat. I tasted my own blood as the breathing lines came out of my nose. Raw skin bled and dripped down my throat. The first words I heard were ‘Female three-zero-zero-eight decanted successfully’.”

Savoy’s voice was rough, close to a growl. “I was a child – less than a child – and my destiny had already been written. I was taught, trained and toned. I was given a gun and told to fight.” Her fingernails raked along Verona’s scalp and the familiar winced. Alexandra took a slow breath, calming herself again and resumed her more gentle touches.

“And I fought. I fought because I had to. I wasn’t given a choice. I wasn’t a volunteer like the forerunner lines were. I was created from two gene-compatible donors, engineered from the ground up to fight the primogenitors’ war. I fought,” she repeated, “and I wanted to. To survive. It was my only choice. The Coalition had already passed legislation that genetic engineering was punishable by death. They’d already made the Jacobs Decree, that all genetically-modified humans were to be destroyed. That was why I fought. For my life, for my brothers and sisters. The primogenitors were... not these idols,” she gestured vaguely in the direction of the stage. “They were men and women. Most of them were dead by this point in the war and those that had survived had only become more extreme. I heard their speeches about how we would reshape the face of humanity, about our destiny and that we were chosen to inherit the earth. Others smiled and nodded to those words, but I still remembered the way I’d been brought into the world and the voice that welcomed me to it. There wasn’t any beauty in that. No sense of destiny and awe. Only a man noting that another weapon was ready.

“That was why I fought. I didn’t want to die. I didn’t want my people to die. We didn’t deserve genocide. No more than you did. No one should die just for the crime of existing. Not invictus or sapiens. No one. But if I had to make that choice again, between my race and yours... I’d choose mine. The Coalition promised to kill every one of us. I know why they did, but I couldn’t let that happen.” Savoy closed her eyes. “Does that answer your question?”

“Yes,” gulped Darren. “Yes, lady.”

“Good. Please don’t tell anyone else.” She didn’t even give him a threatening look, but Darren still knew that if he so much whispered this story to another person, Savoy would kill him.

“I won’t.”

“No,” she said, running her fingers down along Verona’s cheek. “No, I don’t imagine you will.” She sighed. “I’m drunk, I’m tired and I don’t want to watch the rest of this farce. You should go.” As Darren stood, Verona climbed up into the chair, easing herself into Savoy’s arms like a cat settling next to her owner, eager for more attention. Alexandra gestured to the bottle of wine. “Take that. No one here deserves to drink it.”

Darren did so, the cold of the chilled bottle a balm against his sweating palms. He was halfway to the door when Savoy spoke again. “Darren?”

Hawke froze. He’d never told her his name. “My lady?”

“Give my regards to the Coalition.”

Darren’s mouth opened, half expecting Savoy’s hand to be around his throat in the next instant, but she never moved from where she lay, still stroking her familiar’s hair. He clicked his mouth shut and hurried from the room.
 
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Huh. I really wonder where that goes afterwards. Does the Hero of Johannesburg have secret talks with the descendants of the Coalition, leading to the Coalition revising it's "No mutants!" policy and Savoy speaking out against the regime? Do the Sapiens die a lingering death of slowly, slowly dropping below the genetic viability threshold, and then, hundreds of years later an Invictus finds Savoy's private journal, full of bitter observations about the society that resulted from the war? If fighting starts again, does Savoy leap at the chance, as fighting is all she knows? Or does she die in a mere few years, broken by what her people have become, what society expects of her, and the sudden change from a fight for survival to being expected to laze about and fence with words?

Of course, it also works kept as a one-shot, leaving us to speculate.

Keep up the good work, Proximal!
 

Beyogi

Are you sure?
And that is why nobody should create superhumans. If they want to gentically modify humanity they should do it to all of humaniy and not a chosen race.

Great story so far, I wonder if you'll continue it.

Thank you for writing,
Beyogi
 
Chapter II

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
So this got stuck in my head and between working on awful, awful statistics and a couple chapters for another work, I managed to work up a new bit o'text for this universe.

~

II:

Darren managed to wait out the rest of the opera, hiding the bottle in his locker and remaining tight-lipped about his encounter with Savoy. He was usually circumspect in that regard, so it was nothing new, despite his co-workers’ best efforts to get details from him. Since Verona was still with the invictus, there’d been several jokes about his performance, endurance and/or stamina, but he had ignored them all. His mind was racing and he ran through the rest of his duties on automatic. He’d been elsewhere in the theater when Savoy left, which was probably for the best. Lucas, one of Verona’s male counterparts, told him that she’d been ‘delighted’ with the show. Lord Halkein had been so pleased, he’d given the theater staff a two-day weekend.

Hawke bundled his coat tighter as he approached his apartment building; it was in the serf quarters of Garamond – what had been Washington, DC. The Hegemony had re-named the city in honour of one of their damned primogenitors. It was late, almost 2 in the morning and a light drizzle had started to come down. Darren ignored the other people out on the street; hookers and their pimps, hustlers and drug dealers. A few blocks away he heard a brief whoop-whoop of a city security vehicle’s siren. Darren didn’t cringe like the rest; their fear was understandable. A hundred years ago, the criminal elements in many cities hadn’t had any fear of the police. Maybe that was because the police of that era weren’t gene-bred freaks of nature backed up by combat drones, or the simple, casual brutality they doled out.

While the invictus by and large ignored the squalor of their serfs, they weren’t above random, unprovoked sweeps through the streets, if only to keep the sapiens in their place. It was rare that anyone they gathered up came back. There was no such thing as an appeals process in the Hegemony – not if you were born with the wrong genes.

There was no elevator in Darren’s building and the stairs creaked with every step. He waited outside the door, taking the bottle of wine out of his coat and holding it as a makeshift club as he strained to hear if anyone was in his apartment. Visions of a Hegemony Security Service agent – or two, or ten – filled his imagination, but heard nothing from inside and after a moment, he opened the door and switched on the lights. Empty.

It was a small apartment – bedroom, bathroom and living room/kitchen, but it was clean and the building wasn’t that bad, not compared to some of the other homes in the serf quarters. It was quiet, unassuming and perfectly within the price range of what he was paid. In short, there was nothing about it or him that would stand out.

Darren removed his small cache of gear from the sensor-shielded compartment he’d installed and ran a very thorough sweep for bugs before he dared let himself relax, stowing the wine in the fridge and pouring himself a glass of what passed for scotch.

Something had slipped. Darren had been wracking his brain, trying to figure out what that might be. He had no idea. He’d been turning every possible implication over in his head for the entire evening and he only had three possibilities. The first was the simplest: that Savoy had made a joke. She didn’t know or suspect anything. The scrutiny she’d given him was because ninety years ago, most sapiens were enemies. That... explanation didn’t fit everything else, but it was possible. So if he did anything out of the ordinary, if he ran... he was as good as dead. Yes, Savoy had been drinking heavily – more than he’d seen from any invictus – but there was no way she’d forget their conversation. If he disappeared, that would be as good as announcing his true allegiance.

Second option: she didn’t know, she (or someone who had put her up to it) suspected him. In that case, running was also contraindicated. An innocent sapiens, confused about a strange conversation he’d had with an invictus, certainly wouldn’t run. Despite his precautions, they might be watching his apartment right now and anything out of the ordinary would betray him. In this situation, running would also doom him.

The third possibility was also the most unsettling. She did know, but for some reason hadn’t dragged him off to the nearest HSS agent. In that situation. Maybe she was hoping that if he ran, he’d lead HSS to the others in his resistance cell? Darren felt flush of offence at the thought he’d be so unprofessional. No, the best option would be to run, but not to his cell. Instead, he’d shake pursuit, then make contact and assume a new identity.

He tapped a finger on the worn arm of his recliner, trying to think of what to do. Three options – and in two out of three, staying was the best bet. To appear innocent and harmless until such time the invictus believed that’s what he was. That still left the question of Alexandra Irine Savoy. What was her game?

Darren was still musing over the answer as he fell asleep.

~

Bones shattered under the impact of her fist, the blow pulverising the target’s brain and reducing its skull to paste. Savoy spun, a high kick catching the next target in the head as well, sending it flying, its brain ruined as surely as the first. She drove her fist up into the torso of her next victim, landing half a dozen punches in less time than it took to blink, turning a complicated system of organs and blood vessels to mush. The target sagged to its knees, dying if not already dead. Before it could even finish its fall, she grabbed the head of the fourth and final target, driving its face into her knee with shattering force. Her bones were armoured; the target’s weren’t and its face collapsed in on itself. With a snap, she twisted its neck until its spine popped, letting the limp form drop from her hands.

“Time,” she called.

Jorge Cardoza, one of House Garuda’s familiars, stepped forward. “One point three seconds, Lady Vipress.”

“Hrrn,” Alexandra growled. “Still too slow.”

Cardoza raised an immaculately-groomed eyebrow. “That is better than the current record time. Sammael Halkein’s best time is one-point-seven seconds.”

The invictus didn’t comment on that. “It should be less than a second,” she said instead. “I’ve done point six seven seconds with five opponents.”

The familiar said nothing in response and Alexandra sighed. Garuda’s gymnasium was as fine a training ground as she could have imagined, with every piece of equipment she could have asked for and in his generosity, Geoffery Halkein had allowed her the use of it and virtually everything else on his estate’s grounds. Though she’d been granted a demense of her own, she’d wanted to see more of the Hegemony before she shuffled off to her own lands. Accepting some of the invitations the noble houses had thrown at her had seemed a decent way to do that.

So far, the technology she had seen was very impressive. Savoy looked down at her opponents; they were robots, programmed with every fighting style known, with polymorphic forms that could mimic the body structure of any opponent, from as fragile as a sapiens to as hard as battle armour. The technology... was one thing. Savoy raised her head, looking around the gym. A handful of Homo familiarus waited patiently for any need, request or whim she might have, perfectly still, moving only when a severed limb or spurt of gel from the machines she’d disassembled threatened to hit them. They disturbed her. Her own reaction to them disturbed her almost as much.

Sensing her attention, Cardoza stepped forward again. “Do you need something, Lady Vipress?”

Savoy’s lips quirked in a wry smile. “I have a question.”

“Of course, lady. I shall do my best to answer it for you.”

“What does God need with a starship?”

The familiar’s eyebrows creased as he frowned, briefly looking at his fellows, but none of them had any advice to offer. “My lady?”

“What does God need with a starship?”

“I...” the familiar floundered. “I don’t know, my lady. I don’t understand.”

Savoy turned away. “Forget it.” She liked old movies; she always had. In one of them, several characters had come face to face with an entity purporting to be God. It had begged of them to bring their ship closer, so that it could be used to ‘carry its wisdom’. One of the men had asked that question. What does God need with a starship? Why does something so powerful, so magnificent, so grand need something so mundane? If you are God, what use do you have for material things?

That question came to mind every time she looked at a Homo familiarus. Why do we need you? If we are unquestioned masters of this world, if we have seized our destiny and brought humanity into a new golden age... why did we need to create a new race to tell us this?

She had no answer for that. None, at least, that she wanted to consider in too much depth.

“How many drones are left?” she asked.

Cardoza gestured to the trails of lubricant and organ-simulating gel that marked where the damaged units had been carried away. “Your workout has been intense, my lady. We only have two functional training automatons. Rest assured, that these will be repaired by tomorrow morning.”

“Two will do,” Alexandra replied. She cracked her knuckles. “I want them set to invictus levels. Unarmed combat, no armour.”

The familiar hesitated an instant. “That setting is restricted, my lady.”

Savoy glared at him. “As the leader of a house, do I not have sufficient authority?”

“Of course,” Cardoza stammered apologetically. “It... this setting is not often used.” He gestured for one of the other familiars – a short Asian woman with the drone’s control set into a vambrace – to make the necessary adjustments.

Alexandra turned away. She had trained almost exclusively against other invictus. Occasionally against some of the forerunners – ordinary humans who had been biologically or genetically modified. The Hegemony hadn’t had these wonderful training systems, so any sapiens who fought an invictus was unlikely to come off well. Prisoners of war and traitors had been offered the choice to do so. If they declined, they stayed in their cells until their freedom was arranged or the war ended. If they said yes and survived, they went free. Despite this incentive, few had ever accepted the offer. Not without reason.

Savoy wondered if the prisoners she’d been offered this morning had had the same choice...

...and wasn’t that an ugly thing to think about your own people? She didn’t like having these thoughts. She was a soldier; she was used to taking orders. To fighting and bleeding. Not having to sit through conversations where she was fawned over, like she’d done something any other of her brothers and sisters wouldn’t have done. Where these noble houses used her attendance to stick a finger in the eye of their fellows as she was some trophy to trot out to prove which among them was so much more worthy of the ‘Hero of Johannesburg’s’ attention.

She was grateful when the first attack came, a roundhouse aimed at her head, so fast that no Homo sapiens on the planet would have seen it coming, let alone been able to block it. The invictus swatted the drone’s attack aside, slamming her own fist up into its guts before it could rabbit-punch her with its other hand as it had planned. It staggered back and she swept its legs out from under it, spinning around to confront her second attacker. It had charged in and she grappled with it, using its own momentum to hurl it across the gym. It crashed into the wall hard, its system simulating a dazed state.

The first machine was back on its feet and Savoy blocked its first attack, using her upper arm to absorb the second punch. She slammed her hand up into its jaw. Her skin cut open, but her armoured bones resisted further damage and she heard the crack as the drone’s metal structure shattered, fractures running through its jaw and several ‘teeth’ breaking in its mouth. Now it was on the defensive and Savoy waded in, a hurricane of blows sending it crashing to the floor, down for the fight.

She sensed the attack coming as the second machine charged again, hoping to take advantage of her distraction. She grabbed it and threw it over her shoulder, slamming it to ground so hard that the floor shook. Before it could right itself, she stamped her heel down on its throat. In an organic opponent, she would have crushed its windpipe, burst the blood vessels inside and shattered the vertebrae. The machine went limp.

Savoy reached up and wiped the thin layer of sweat from her brow. “Too slow,” she remarked.

“Too...slow?” Cardoza spoke, completely agog. “Was...” he paused, aware that he was speaking out of turn and closed his mouth instead.

“Yes,” Alexandra replied, ignoring whatever breach of etiquette the man thought he’d committed. “Too slow,” she strode away from the downed machines, towards the showers. “All of us.”

~

Darren found Verona the next morning; a rehearsal of The Rains of Madrid was taking place in the main hall. Clarkson was the director, so that meant the theater’s staff and comfort men and women went unharried and unharassed. Albert Clarkson was a control freak, even for an invictus. Every moment not spent honing ‘the craft’ was a moment wasted to him. If he thought he could keep his actors on literal leashes, he’d do it.

The familiar was on the upper levels, on her way to her usual comfort lounge when Hawke caught up with her. “Verona!” he called after her, but she ignored him. He hurried after her and grabbed her shoulder. The familiar spun, throwing off his grasp as she raised her arms in a defensive posture. She relaxed slightly when she recognized him.

“You’re not supposed to be here,” she hissed under her breath as she pushed Darren into a nearby alcove. Invictus might be allowed to take their pleasure from the comfort men and women, but sapiens had no such rights. The familiars were allowed to kill any sapiens who tried.

Hawke raised his hands. “I know, I know. I just wanted to talk to you.”

Verona’s eyes darted up and down the hall, but there was no one else around. She grabbed Darren by the arm and started dragging him towards the stairs. “You can’t be here,” she snapped, though she kept her voice down. “If Mr. Volker catches you... Peter only just got out of the hospital. Mr. Volker promised to do worse to the next one of you he catches sniffing around us up here.”

“I just wanted to talk,” Hawke repeated.

“About what?”

“Savoy.”

The familiar halted in her tracks and gave Darren a look that seemed to fluctuate between uncertainty over what he meant and disgusted certitude that he was looking for lascivious details. “You should go,” she told him.

“I was there, too!” he whispered harshly. “I’m not asking for you to betray your oath of service, Verona. I just wanted to get your opinion. You were with her longer than I was.”

“Yes, I was,” the familiar asserted, having come to a decision. She hauled Darren back towards the stairs. He didn’t struggle; that would only cause the scene he was trying to avoid. “And we do not talk about what happens between us and the masters. Unlike sapiens, we can be trusted.” Verona stopped at the top of the stairwell and pointed down towards the common areas. “I will throw you if you don’t go,” she told him honestly. “Don’t make me do that, Darren.”

“All right, I’m sorry,” Darren replied, finding to his surprise that he meant it. “I didn’t want to put in you a bad spot. I just... I’ve never been with an invictus like her. It was... confusing. I just wanted to talk. That was all. Okay?”

Verona’s expression softened slightly. “You should go,” she said again.

As Hawke headed back down the stairs, Verona paused, chewing the inside of her lip. “Darren...” she began.

The sapiens paused and looked back up her. “Don’t come up here again,” Verona warned him. Just before he turned away, the familiar spoke again. “...I like D’Onfrio’s.”

Hawke nodded slowly. “I know the place.”

“It’s nice,” Verona said. She turned to go. “I like to treat myself there to close out the week. You should go sometime.”

“I may,” Darren nodded. He tilted his head back downstairs. “I should get going.”

“Yes,” Verona agreed. “You should.”

~

Garamond stank.

That was Alexandra’s first impression of the city and nothing she’d seen had improved her opinion. Out of the corner of her eye, she watched a pair of sapiens make a trade, swapping money for packets of something. She could smell the acrid taint of narcotics clinging to the dealer and her fingers twitched. She could be across the street in less time than it would take a heart to beat, knifing her hand through his ribcage or crushing his throat in her grip.

You are the future, she remembered the primogenitor’s words. You will show the world what it means to be human. You will elevate us from the ham-fisted mere competence of nature to the pinnacle of evolution. You will be the exemplar, the ideal, perfection made flesh. This is why we created you, and why you fight. To protect this dream from those would see it trampled into the dirt.

The dealer looked up and blanched as he saw Savoy, quickly looking away from her gaze. She could hear the sudden panicked hammering in his chest, could smell the flush of sweat on his skin and the adrenalin in his veins, could see the shift in his posture as he tried to decide whether to run and risk her chasing him, or stay where he was and hope she ignored him.

She did the latter and continued on her way.

“Are you sure you wouldn’t rather return to the Heights?” Andrew Spence asked. Savoy ignored him. Her tour guide/minder/bodyguard had tried to steer her towards the more respectable sights of the city, but Savoy refused to be led by the nose. Every minute of every day since she’d been awoken she’d had everyone touting the wonders of the world she’d helped create. They’d shown her only what they wanted her to see. She wanted to know about the rest.

So far, she had yet to quell those unpleasant voices whispering in the back of her head.

Doors and windows slammed shut as she and Spence passed, men, women and children hurrying off the streets. A few of the braver souls merely slunk off to one side to let her pass. The bravest still dared whisper insults under their breath, either unaware or uncaring that the invictus could hear them. Spence bristled and only the fact that Alexandra herself ignored the comments kept him in check. She would have laughed. Her brothers and sisters had trod through cities they’d all but destroyed. The muttered curses of street trash were a pale shadow to the hateful screams and curses of men and women who’d seen their countries burn. None of her siblings had even so much as broken stride. The defeated were entitled to their rage. Only when it transgressed from words to actions was a response merited.

They will see you, the primogenitor had said, as a beacon. You will bring this light to them upon a branch of olive or upon the point of a spear, but they will bask in your radiance and be grateful for it.

Alexandra looked at her surroundings, at the cracked facades on the buildings, the holes in the roads, at the frightened, accusatory stares of the people. The last time she had seen faces like that, she had been in full armour, marching down the streets of Paris. Half the city had burned to the ground in one night. She felt just as much as an invader, as an occupier here.

She didn’t like that feeling.

“Yes,” she said at last, turning to face her guide. “Let’s return to the Heights. I’ve seen enough.”
 
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Beyogi

Are you sure?
So the superior humans went on and created themselves a loyal slave race. Or maybe not so loyal...

Interesting story so far, but I wonder where this is going. A homo sapiens rebellion, or something else?

Thank you for writing this interesting story,
Beyogi
 
I think the thought that's nagging Alexandra in the back of her mind is that she's realizing that the utopia she/her creators fought for in fact is just another dictatorship run by strongmen, the same way "ordinary" humans did experience it throughout the millenia. The invictus aren't better or more enlightened, their society isn't more egalitarian and progressive, they are not a beacon of advancement. They are merely brutes who were stronger and tougher and now indulge in decadence.
 

TheSandman

From NERV's Heart I Stab At Thee
Indeed.

What's the point of having physical and mental capabilities far beyond the norm if all you're going to do with them is the same old shit? Is that really worth killing billions for?

I mean, if nothing else, at least have enough pride that if you set yourself up as rulers you actually try to do a good job of it for everyone.

A shame that Crest/Banner of the Stars probably wasn't on Alexandra's viewing list, because the Abh would have provided a useful example of how to do things better.
 

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
Beyogi said:
So the superior humans went on and created themselves a loyal slave race. Or maybe not so loyal...

Interesting story so far, but I wonder where this is going. A homo sapiens rebellion, or something else?
Posbi said:
I think the thought that's nagging Alexandra in the back of her mind is that she's realizing that the utopia she/her creators fought for in fact is just another dictatorship run by strongmen, the same way "ordinary" humans did experience it throughout the millenia. The invictus aren't better or more enlightened, their society isn't more egalitarian and progressive, they are not a beacon of advancement. They are merely brutes who were stronger and tougher and now indulge in decadence.
The Sandman said:
What's the point of having physical and mental capabilities far beyond the norm if all you're going to do with them is the same old shit? Is that really worth killing billions for?

I mean, if nothing else, at least have enough pride that if you set yourself up as rulers you actually try to do a good job of it for everyone.
Very good observations. :)

There's a touch of Talos from the Night Lords trilogy in Alexandra's inspiration, that sense of bitterness towards the nation he forged and the comrades who fight alongside him. She created this world - she fought in the war that forged it and was instrumental in deciding the victor. Every speech, every word, every film, every radio broadcast that she heard from her leaders told her this one thing: once they won, the world would be better. They would make it better. Invictus and sapiens, side by the side. The former as the example to live up to and the latter as cousins that only needed to be shown how wrong they were, that would come to embrace the post-humanist ideals of the Hegemony. Humanity would be better. Civilization would be better. Knowledge and spirituality, technology and evolution. Everything would flourish in this new Renaissance, a new golden age.

She's seeing what those promises have led to. There is a golden age, but it's only for her kind. A race of servants has been made - pets, toys and worshippers. History is ignored, brushed off as inconsequential. The culture is incestuous - self-indulgent, vainglorious and self-aggrandizing. Her brothers and sisters died by the thousands - by the tens of thousands - to make this world, to fulfill the primogenitors' dream... and this is what it's turned into.

Into this mix we've got a soldier who remembers those ideals (and where are her comrades, I wonder...?). To Alexandra, it's been only a few weeks since she butchered her way into the Kenfentse Facility's control room and brought the Coalition's last, desperate hope crashing down, a few months since she was fighting to ensure the Hegemony's survival. She's seeing what her blood - and the blood and lives of every one of her brothers and sisters that died face-down in the mud and filth of some worthless speck of land - has paid for.

We'll see what she does with that.

I think Darren's up to something, too... :)
 
Chapter III

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
III:

She was dreaming.

London was burning. The 1121st had hard-dropped into the United Kingdom’s seat of power, taking 30% casualties just on the way down, but they’d secured their objectives. Citywide power was down. Downing Street was an inferno, the British Cabinet dead almost to the last. The House of Parliament had only just caught fire. Emergency services were confused and disrupted; no one would be coming to put it out. Heathrow airport was... nonoperational. Local military responses were confused. Communications had been cut. By the time order was restored, another two thousand Hegemony troops would be in London, all of them invictus. Great Britain was about to fall. The English didn’t have the manpower to shift so many Hegemony troops from London without massive civilian casualties and by the time their American and Scandinavian allies could sort out their own problems, the United Kingdom would bow to the Hegemony.

Alexandra wrenched her combat knife out of the body of a dead English soldier, wiping the blade off on the dead man’s tunic. There had been only six of them guarding this checkpoint and she’d ripped through them. Strange though; she didn’t know what there was to protect here. Her squad had dispersed for search-and-destroy sweeps and there were reports of contact with other Coalition teams. Resistance was intensifying. That was odd. She was getting reports of casualties, but no one had reported enemy contact. She licked her lips.

Her head came up as she heard the distinctive sound of a Hegemony chaingun, followed by the discharge of a weapon system she couldn’t identify. Then silence. That was Three’s position.

“Three, this is LT Savoy. Respond.”

Only static answered her. What was going on?

She began moving, vaulting a pile of cars as easy a champion sprinter clearing a hurdle. She was almost at Three’s location, but she couldn’t spot anything out of the ordinary... there! She could see a crumpled mess of armour and gore that had once been an invictus soldier. Three had been... he’d been blasted to pieces, charred fragments of armour and blackened fragments of bones scattered along the street. She knelt next to part of Three’s cuirass, touching the melted edges.

What had done this? What could have done this?

Something made her look up, some sixth sense. She was already moving as a volley of missiles powerful enough to reduce a tank to scrap cratered the street where she had been standing. The soldier raised her head, baring her teeth as it marched into view. Stooped like a troll out of legend, its thick legs moved with a brutal fluidity. It was a walking tank, its shoulders bristling with the missiles that had almost killed her. One of its arms ended in a massive weapon that she couldn’t identify, the other was balled into a fist as big as her torso. Blood was splashed across its thorax and up its arm. It pivoted at the waist with disturbing speed, still moving as it tracked towards her through the smoke. Alexandra didn’t stop to gape, opening fire as she charged. The cannon-arm whined as it built up a charge and she threw herself to one side, thermal warnings flashing across her HUD as the street bubbled and hissed, melted by the passing of the weapon.

You’re faster than the last one,” the machine spoke and Alexandra realized that this wasn’t some automaton; there was a person inside it. “Not that it matters.” The cannon shrilled again and she hurled herself through the window of a store, hitting the ground running as incandescent fire strobed through the walls. She couldn’t possibly dodge the incoming bolts – but she could move faster than the cannon could track.

She hoped.

“All squads, this is Lieutenant Savoy!” she shouted as she bulldozed her way through a closed door, leaping out into an alley. “Hostile enemy contact, soldiers down. Unknown pattern – it’s a walking fucking tank! Severe threat value – do not engage without anti-armour support!” In the corner of her eye, she could see the machine’s silhouette as it paced in front of the store. Its weapons had blown straight through the entire building. Wood furnishings had burst into flame, metal supports had melted and even the concrete had run like water. The cannon hummed as it built up another charge.

Come out and play, Vickie,” the Coalition pilot called to her, sensors straining to pick her out of the conflagration it had caused, but it was not so foolish as to try and squeeze itself into the crumbling store.

Alexandra’s teeth bared back in a snarl, every predatory instinct in her body telling her to fight, but reasoning won out and she fled, leaving the machine behind her.

~

Savoy sat up in bed, panting. Her clothes were soaked with sweat, her fingers dug into the satin sheets. She had to stop herself from reaching for the gun that wasn’t there. London. London had been a disaster for both sides. It had been intended to bring the United Kingdom to its knees; instead, the Hegemony had dropped into a massacre. Intel had been bad and the Hegemony badly underestimated the resolve of the British and surviving continental European forces and the engineering capability of the Coalition as a whole. That had been the first time invictus soldiers had faced Knights. It had been just as bad for the Coalition – they hadn’t expected the speed at which the Hegemony had attacked and UK’s government had been all by decapitated, but the King and enough of Parliament had survived to keep the country running. The Coalition counter-attack had pushed the Hegemony across the English channel, almost to Paris.

The invictus tossed the sheets to one side and got up, the plush carpet soft and warm against her bare feet. She poured herself a glass of cold water and gulped it down. Lord Halkein had provided for her use a number of personal servants, but she didn’t need anyone to cater to her. She’d spent weeks in the hospital recovering from the many surgeries and treatments that had saved her life, weeks stuck in bed as curious invictus doctors whispered about her and the disturbingly-intriguing familiar nurses and orderlies tended to her. She’d had enough of that – she could get her own damn water.

Or maybe you just don’t want a serf to see a master suffering from night sweats?

Alexandra gulped down another glass, peeling her nightclothes off. The cool night air felt good against the clamminess of her skin. She braced her hands on the counter and stared at herself in the mirror, at the winding, veinlike patterns of scar tissue that wound across her skin, the faint craters that marked the entry points of bullets, the straight lines that showed where the blades had cut into her flesh. She had often wondered why she was alive; she had seen her brothers and sisters die from far less severe wounds, but somehow she had survived.

The scars had only faded slightly; she wondered if they ever would.

At least I’ll match, she thought sardonically. “Scarred inside and out.” Then, with a dismissive snort. Maudlin crap.

You are as you were meant to be, she’d been told. You were forged. To be free of fear, doubt or regret. You are the hands that will build the Hegemony. Take comfort in that and know that everything you do, is what must be done.

Her hands tightened on the marble countertop and only a moment of self-awareness kept her from shattering the polished stone in her grip.

~

Across the city from the Garuda estates, Darren Hawke was also awake, the man wandering Garamond’s streets, hunched into a beaten jacket that had been made by someone who had once heard of suede. He wandered through the serf districts, ignoring the other denizens. To his right, he saw an inebriated young man about to get rolled by the hooker he was attempting to hire. She made a show of it, dismissing him as being unable to afford her services. Indignant and intoxicated, he waved a billfold at her as proof. Darren sighed inwardly. However he’d come by that much money, by morning that young man would be a pauper. On his left, a child who should have been in bed for school was sitting on the stoop of a brownstone, a lookout for the dealers inside. The entire front of the building smelled like bleach in an attempt to obscure the scent of the products inside.

He kept walking, ignoring the entreaties from the working girls and boys he passed, brushing aside the crackhead who tried to sell him obviously stolen electronics, muttering apologies under his breath as he made way for the local leg-breakers and gang-bangers. Just another citizen out at night, a harmless, hopeless fool – one of many in this city. Darren wandered the streets, as if he had no particular destination in mind. Though he was slouched into his jacket, he was alert and wary of anyone following him. It was second-nature to him by now; but his paranoia was on overdrive and had been ever since his encounter with Savoy. He still didn’t know what game she was playing – but you couldn’t trust an invictus.

Garamond Memorial Gardens was before him. It was a beautiful, well-kept parkland there for the enjoyment of all the city’s citizens. It was also just as safe at night as it was during the day. Well-lit walking trails and frequent sweeps by surveyor drones kept the less-respectable elements of the city from taking the park over at night as had happened in many cities in decades past. They were still here, of course – but they made certain that their business was kept well away from any invictus enjoying a nightly stroll.

Darren found himself at one of the fountains, watching the jets of water shoot out and arc back down in artful loops and spurts, listening the babbling white noise. He rested his arms on the railing, pretending to enjoy the display as lights beneath the pool’s surface made the geysers appear as a kaleidoscope of colour and form. It was actually very pretty; even soothing. To his right, a nervous young man stopped at the end of a trail, looked over at Hawke before turning away, the telltale tremors in his body marking him as a junkie looking for his next fix. To his left, a pair of prostitutes laughed and engaged in an animated discussion, but the sound of the fountain washed out whatever they were talking about.

Hawke remained there for a moment or two, then turned and ambled to a nearby bench, spreading his arms over the back, listening to the water. One of the hookers said something to her compatriot and sauntered towards him, a lopsided smirk on her face. She was blonde – or at least had a very good dye job – with a gleaming blue pleather vest and miniskirt. “Hey there,” she purred. Darren looked up and smiled back. Her voice was like – what was that old cliche? – like smoke and honey. He’d always loved her voice.

“Hey,” he replied. “Warm night we’ve got.”

“Warm’s good,” the woman replied, sitting next to him. She put her hand on the inside of his thigh. “Hot’s better.”

“Could be,” he replied.

“I’m Cherise,” she told him. He knew her real name and that wasn’t it. The blonde smiled a little wider. She had a disarming grin. “You looking for someone to show you around Garamond, handsome? All the,” her eyes twinkled. “Ins and outs?”

Darren looked at her and patted his trousers. “Maybe. Why don’t you have a seat? We’ll talk about the first thing that comes up.” He restrained a snort at the sound of his own words.

‘Cherise’ smiled. “I don’t give out free samples, honey.” She leaned in, whispering in his ear. “What do you want?” she hissed. “You’re not supposed to-”

“I know,” Darren replied, pulling her closer. To anyone looking, it was a prostitute and her client getting to know each other. An easily-overlooked transgression, an obvious reason for two sapiens to be meeting here in the park. “I need some information.”

She grabbed his hand, guiding it inside her blouse. “See?” she said aloud. “They’re real. And spectacular.” Under her breath: “What about?”

Darren ignored the sensations his body was telling him not to ignore. “Savoy.”

‘Cherise’ paused briefly, before winding her fingers along his scalp, ruffling his short brown hair. “You’ve had contact with Vipress?”

“Something like that. She wanted my attention at the opera. Wasn’t what I expected.” They kept their voices low; the fountain might make it nearly impossible to overhear their conversation, but ‘nearly’ wasn’t one hundred percent.

“What do you mean?” his contact bit his earlobe.

“She didn’t have rave reviews about Triumph of Will,” Darren replied. “She told me to give my regards to the Coalition.”

He heard the woman’s breath catch in her throat, could feel the sudden tension in her muscles as she suppressed the urge to look around. “What?”

“I checked everything on my end. I don’t think I’ve been compromised, but I don’t know for certain.”

“So I’m your Judas goat. Thanks for that,” she slapped him, leaning back and shaking a finger at him warningly.

Darren put on an apologetic face and took the wagging digit, kissing her hand. “I’m sorry, Lils. I didn’t know they’d send you. I signalled in. I thought they would have told you.”

“No, they wouldn’t. Not if-” the young woman cut herself off, but both of them knew what she would have said. Not if they’ve tapped an asset.

“I don’t have a lot of other options right now,” Darren continued. “I need to know if I should be ducking for cover or going out in a blaze for glory.”

“You’ve got your lullaby?”

“Always.”

‘Cherise’ let out a breath. “Fuck. All right. Control’s probably checking the network now. If everything’s tickety-boo, you’ll know. If not... you’ll know that, too.”

Darren nodded. “Savoy,” he said. “She’s playing some kind of game.”

“Sounds about right,” the woman replied, slapping the hand inside her shirt away, making a ‘money’ gesture – a hooker remonstrating a client getting ahead of himself. “Not so fast,” she raised her voice. “You didn’t want falsies. Now you know I’m all-natural but anything more than that... you gotta pay to play.”

Darren grinned lopsidedly. “Trust me.” His contact’s friend was on the other side of the clearing, not so subtly watching them. He’d prefer to do without this bit of theater, but he didn’t know if she was another Coalition member keeping an eye on her charge or an actual sex worker doing the same for a friend in the trade. Even if she hadn’t been there, in Garamond you always assumed someone was watching.

“I’ve heard from other sources that all the victors and vickies – well, they don’t know what to make of our dear corpsicle,” ‘Cherise’ told him. “I think they’ve been expecting her to tell them what good little boys and girls they’ve been, how everything’s perfect and Santa’s going to visit them twice.” She chuckled low in her throat. She wasn’t even looking at him, she was glancing over his shoulder for any sign of eavesdroppers. He could feel the hard shape of the holdout derringer tucked into her jacket. “I’ve even heard there’s been some grumbling about her attitude.”

“I can see that,” Darren mused.

“Control is interested, but we haven’t had time to get anyone close to Vipress. You caught her attention. Can you get it again?”

“I don’t know what I did to get it the first time,” Hawke replied. “She picked me.”

The woman made a considering noise, raising it into a louder growl of arousal and irritation. “She’s got good taste.”
‘Cherise’ gave him an appraising look that fit perfectly with their act. “You’ve got something else planned.”

“I wasn’t the only one she had attend her. One of the comfort girls, Verona – Savoy had her for the evening. She’s a familiar, but I thought I’d take a run at her.”

“A familiar? Jesus, Darren. I mean, Jesus Christ.”

“I know. I’m going soft.”

“Soft in the head,” the young woman snapped. “She’s been bred to love those fucking monsters. No one, not one person in forty years has ever turned a familiar.”

“I’m not trying to turn her, Lils. Just... get my bearings with Savoy.”

“Well, you better do it soon. Vipress is taking up residence in her new estates by the end of the week. We don’t have anyone in her household. Whatever made her notice you before, do it again. Get her to like you. I don’t care how. Sing opera, juggle chainsaws, give her the best fuck she’s ever had – whatever. Do it and do it quick.”

“No promises.”

The girl’s features softened. “Be careful, Darren. Okay?”

“Okay.”

“Good. We’ll handle the security check on you. You... just don’t die.” At Darren’s nod, the woman leaned in. “Also, I’m really sorry about this.”

She punched him in the groin. Darren saw stars, doubling over and falling off the bench as the young woman shouted at him. “The fuck you mean you don’t got no money, you piece of shit? I ain’t some fucking bag of grapes at the grocery store, motherfucker!” She kicked him in the ribs. “You don’t fucking get to sample nothing without paying, asshole!” Her confederate was running over as Lily landed a few more blows; even though they were intended more for show then damage, they stung. She stalked away, pausing to turn and jab a finger at Darren’s prone form. “I see your ass around here again, I’m going to cut your balls off!

Darren picked himself up as the two women headed off. “...bastard had me grinding on him like he’s a big spender...” He shook his head, wincing at his collection of bruises. Well, at least he’d learned that he wasn’t the only one Savoy was throwing off. That almost made it worth it. Dusting off his jacket, Hawke headed back on the long and somewhat sore trip back to his apartment.

~

Alexandra yawned as she sat up in bed, running a hand through her hair. Sunlight was filtering through the windows, bathing her room in a warm yellow glow. The invictus sighed. She’d finally managed to get back to a thankfully dreamless sleep. She slumped back into the covers, staring up at the ceiling before looking over at the clock. 9:47. This was the latest she’d ever gotten up in her entire life.

She’d tried to sleep in, but it was a foreign concept. Invictus needed far less rest than sapiens did; she and her brothers and sisters had only ever slept the bare minimum necessary. She kept expecting to hear reveille being called, hear the grinding of armoured vehicles outside or the sounds of aircraft taking off and landing. Instead, save for the twittering of birds, it was quiet. She wasn’t used to that.

The invictus had barely been awake for a minute before the door chime to her quarters sounded. Alexandra raised her head. “Come in.”

One of her attendants hurried in, a dark-skinned girl with frizzy shoulder-length hair. Samantha. She kept her eyes downcast. “Your Grace.”

The invictus felt it again, that... draw familiars had on her. She didn’t like it. She should have – all of her fellow invictus seemed to revel in the presence of Homo familiarus, the way they simpered and fawned over their lords and masters as they’d been conditioned to. Sometimes she caught herself staring, watching them move. Inhaling deeper when they were around, taking in their scent. They were there for her, a conqueror’s rightful due. Her fellow invictus never questioned that belief, never thought anything of it. It made her skin crawl.

What does God need with a starship?

Alexandra’s hands twitched and she let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding. Samantha was still there. “Yes?” she asked, climbing out of bed.

“Young Lord and Lady Halkein beg the honour of your presence this morning,” the familiar said.

Savoy keep her face impassive. “Very well, tell them I would be delighted to join them at their convenience.”

“Of course, Lady Vipress.” Samantha paused. “Will you require anything else?”

Alexandra opened her wardrobe. Samantha took a half-step towards the invictus, but remembered herself. Savoy had made it abundantly clear that she needed no one to dress her. She pushed a score of masterly hand-crafted dresses and gowns out of the way, grabbing a plainer shirt and tossing it on the bed. It was joined a moment later by a pair of trousers. “Have they fixed the training drones?”

“Engineer Hamish offers his most sincere apologies, but several of the machines are still inoperable,” Samantha said carefully. “Others are functional, but are not yet operable at peak condition.”

Savoy examined two pair of white socks, trying to tell the difference between them before simply adding one to the small pile of clothes on the bed. She smiled a little. “That’s disappointing, but I suppose I have been hard on Hamish’s machines. Does he know when they’ll be ready?”

“He expects to have three fully repaired by this evening, my lady. The others he is not so sure about until he can perform a complete estimate of the damage.” The familiar paused. “Lord Halkein has asked me to again offer you the option of live duels with prisoners.”

Alexandra pulled her nightclothes off, tossing them into a laundry hamper. She’d spent virtually all her life in scientific facilities and military barracks where privacy was a luxury. “Thank Lord Halkein for his most generous offer,” she said, carefully picking her way through each syllable. She hated that she had to do that, where she had to worry about the implications of every word. It was as alien to her as everything else in this world. “But... Homo sapiens opponents are not... challenging enough for my usual regime.”

Samantha flushed, carefully looking away from her mistress’s nakedness. “Of course, my lady.”

“I’m going to shower,” Savoy informed the familiar. “Once I’ve done so, I’ll meet with young lord and lady Halkein.”

“Certainly, Your Grace.” Samantha lifted her head, but did not meet Alexandra’s eyes. “Did you wish any company or assistance bathing?” The familiar plucked at the top bottom on her uniform, but did not undo it. Her wide eyes were earnest.

Alexandra paused. Her nostrils flared as she detected the smallest change in the other woman’s scent and an image came to mind, water running down Samantha’s dark skin, the feel of the familiar’s bare flesh in her hands... “No,” the invictus said. Her fingernails dug into her palms. “No, that won’t be necessary.”

When she got out of the shower, Savoy found that her bed had been made up and her chosen outfit had been ironed and pressed.
 

Beyogi

Are you sure?
Oh crap. She actually buys in the propaganda, while the other invicty have simply created their slaves/drug of choice. Well, all revolutions come from the elite. I figure she might be one of those elite who're disgruntled with the way things are.

Anyway, thank you for writing,
Beyogi
 

mdman1

It's a trap! (╯°□°)╯
Just discovered this story. Riveting stuff!

Typo from the first chapter:
Their industrial in ruins, they needed the dispersal systems the Primogenitors had used to poison so many of their cities.
Should be "industry".

Typo from second chapter:
Every minute of every day since she’d been awoken she’d had everyone touting the wonders of the world she’d helped created.
Should be "create", the presence of 3 past tense words make it sound clunky.

Typo from third chapter:
but the King and enough of Parliament had survived King to keep the country running.
This sentence didn't make sense. Bolded word is why. Should it be "London"?
 

TheSandman

From NERV's Heart I Stab At Thee
I suppose what Alexandra could use to get some perspective on this world is a chance to meet whoever it is whose job is to keep this society functioning. Assuming that those are also invictus, rather than familiars or specially privileged sapiens.

It's a question of whether it's just the nobility that's corrupt, or if it goes all the way down.

I also wonder how she'll take it when the first invictus start trying to spend time with her out of either boredom with the current stagnant, decadent culture or out of bog-standard youthful rebellion. Those seem to be the most fertile ground for any attempt to drive home to the upper echelon just how far from their purpose they've fallen.

As for the sapiens side of things, is the current Coalition the old one after a century spent underground, or is it a new one that popped up at some point after the destruction of the original one?
 

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
Oh crap. She actually buys in the propaganda, while the other invicty have simply created their slaves/drug of choice. Well, all revolutions come from the elite. I figure she might be one of those elite who're disgruntled with the way things are.
I wouldn't say that Alexandra buys into the propaganda - remember that she said that the others of her generation did, but she's not so sure. She wants to believe in the better world the primogenitors talked about. Nothing would have made her happier than to see that become a reality. Thousands of her kin died in the war. They scorched cities, burned nations. "I am become Death, Destroyer of Worlds." This was all done in the name of making people better. Of making a 'perfect' world. She bled and fought, killed hundreds, sent her fellow soldiers to their deaths all for this ideal, for the survival of her people. Now she's woken up and seeing what her people have done with the world she gave them. Everything they have, they owe to her.

She hasn't quite grasped that yet; she's still feeling her way through the way the world's changed. Maybe she never will. Maybe she'll become just another genetically-superior overlord with her boot on the neck of a sapiens. Maybe she come to an epiphany... maybe she'll simply become cynical and embittered. Or maybe...

"I devote each beat of my heart to tearing down everything I once raised. Remember this, remember it always: my blade and bolter helped forge the Imperium. I and those like me - we hold greater rights than any to destroy mankind's sickened empire, for it was our blood, our bones and our sweat that built it.

This is redemption.

My right to destroy is greater than your right to live."
-Talos Valcoran, XIII Legion

mdmman1 said:
Just discovered this story. Riveting stuff!
Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the typo catches; I've made the changes.

TheSandman said:
I also wonder how she'll take it when the first invictus start trying to spend time with her out of either boredom with the current stagnant, decadent culture or out of bog-standard youthful rebellion. Those seem to be the most fertile ground for any attempt to drive home to the upper echelon just how far from their purpose they've fallen.
We'll see that in the next part. :)

As for the sapiens side of things, is the current Coalition the old one after a century spent underground, or is it a new one that popped up at some point after the destruction of the original one?
The current 'Coalition' is basically an underground resistance network. It was formed by a core of guerillas, military officers and idealists and has been puttering along in fits and starts ever since. They've pulled off a few high-profile attacks, but they've only ever been a thorn in the Hegmony's paw and as the number of Homo sapiens dwindles, it won't be too long before that particular candle goes out forever.

Exeon130 said:
Thanks; I intend to keep nibbling away at this, but updates'll be slower than normal... which is a sad thing to admit on its own.
 
Ah, thanks, I knew that there is such a thing as Necromancing a thread, but I hadn't found the rule that said how long it takes... :oops:

Musta skimmed it :( Sorry guys...
 
Chapter IV

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
Whew. Been a while between updates, eh? Sorry about that, though with actual work and all the other projects, I can't give this story the full amount of attention that I'd like. Still, it's not forgotten...

[crickets chirp]

...by me, anyways. :)

Here's hoping that this next installment is of some interest.


IV:

“She still dresses like a soldier,” Young Lord Garuda, Trevor Halkein, commented to his twin sister. They were the younger children of Geoffrey and Annabelle Halkein, Lord and Lady Garuda. Both them were black of hair and hazel-eyed, lighter in complexion than their older brother Sammael who was, currently off on official business.

Victoria Halkein, the Young Lady Garuda, shrugged, accepting another sweetened grape from her current favourite, Aarib. The serf plucked another, dipping it in a small bowl of chocolate before offering it the young woman. The invictus closed her lips around the seedless treat, leaning back into her Roman-style couch. “She dressed up for the opera and,” she smiled as Aarib handed her a glass of spiced wine. “From what I understand, she turned a head or two.” The young woman laughed. “Lady Condor looked like a primped-up peacock next to her. I think that might be the new trend. Something simple, yet elegant.”

“Delightful,” Trevor grunted. “Yet I suspect if we take our lessons from Vipress, furniture makers will have a booming year.”

“Oh, please,” Victoria said with a wave of her hand. “As if anyone cares. Father doesn’t. Sir Atlas doesn’t. In fact, he considers it a compliment to see how moved she was by the play! The cast has been gossiping about how they reached the Hero of Johannesburg with the force and depth of their portrayal.” She leaned forward, her eyes alight with amusement. “You’re just bitter that she invited a sapiens and a familiar to her side instead of you.”

“That’s hardly the point,” Trevor sniffed. “We are her hosts. It was only proper that someone from Garuda be with her during an event we staged in her honour. That she chose to view it alone was a deliberate snub.”

“Oh, brother dear,” Victoria purred mockingly. “Had you been in the room with her during that play, you’d now be wondering why she hadn’t chosen solitude if it was going to affect her that much.” She put on an exaggerated frown, deepening her voice to a passable imitation of Trevor. “I don’t know why she bothered to have us there if she was going to get all weepy and emotional. That’s a private moment we don’t need to be a party to!” The raven-haired invictus sagged back into her couch, reaching up with one finger to trace the definitions of Aarib’s muscles, smiling coyly up at the sapiens. “Honestly, I don’t think you’ll ever be satisfied without something to complain about.”

“She’s been distant,” Trevor pointed out.

“She’s a soldier,” Victoria sighed. “She fought in the Final War. That was mere weeks ago to her. Imagine spending your life in blood and fire and then suddenly you wake up nearly a hundred years in the future. Do you, perhaps not imagine a little distance might be expected?” The young woman ran her hand up and down Aarib’s arms. “She was personally created by the primogenitors. One of the primagens, Trevor.” The young woman cast her eyes away from her serf to her brother. “She could break you in half.”

“I hardly think she’s that-”

“She broke Sammael’s records in the gym, Trevor. All of them. All week long. She’s been training with drones set to invictus levels and they’ve been going to the machine shop in pieces.”

Trevor blinked. “I hadn’t heard that.”

“You need to be more attentive,” Victoria chastised. “There are so many things you can learn if you stop swaggering about everywhere. Isn’t that right, Aarib?”

“Of course, my lady.”

The young man rolled his eyes. “And listen to the chatter of familiars and sapiens?”

His sister glared at him. “‘Chatter’ has a usefulness all its own. You can learn all sorts of things.” She smiled then, all teeth. “Like a certain member of Garuda’s penchant for rendezvous with a certain archivist.”

Trevor’s cheeks flushed angrily. “My business-”

“-is yours, of course. The point is that I wouldn’t know about your business were it not for the chatter you so despise.” Victoria arched an eyebrow. It was easy to forget that beneath her decadent, pleasure-seeking exterior lay a wicked – even devious – mind.

Trevor half-bowed in defeat. “Your point is taken, dear sister.”

“Hmm,” Victoria doubted that her brother had indeed, internalized the lesson, but she wasn’t going to press it. Instead, she took another drink of spiced wine, waiting in silence for their guest to arrive. Even with an invictus’s hearing, Savoy was quiet, all but appearing ghost-like in the antechamber’s doorway. True to Trevor’s prediction, she was dressed without flair, a simple grey T-shirt and pair of trousers.

“You wanted to see me?” Savoy said. Victoria hid a small grin. She liked the other woman’s directness. Garuda ruled Garamond; they were the most influential House in the Americas and their rivals and vassals offered too much insincere praise and honeyed words. Lady Vipress was as blunt as a rifle butt to the back of the head. After dealing with so many flatterers and smirking competitors, Victoria found the soldier refreshing. Sadly, her brother put far too much stock in the honeyed words of those same subordinates and peers and saw Savoy’s lack appropriate bowing and scraping as an affront to the house. Personally, Victoria would have the other nobles learn from Vipress rather than the other way around.

“Yes,” the Young Lady Garuda said, sitting up and gesturing to one of the room’s unoccupied chairs. “Please, join us.”

Alexandra set herself down. She didn’t say anything, looking between her hosts. Trevor Halkein, the ‘young lord Garuda’ was hiding a sneer, but then that seemed to be his default facial expression. His sister played at utter decadence – and from what Alexandra had seen it wasn’t all an act – but the truth was in her eyes. They were always assessing and observing, taking in everything while still seeming to belong to someone who neither knew nor cared about much beyond her own world. Since she had woken up, Savoy had seen only one other set of eyes like Victoria Halkein’s.

The former soldier took a small breath. Invictus senses were sharper than those of sapiens and hers were keener still. She could hear the beating of Victoria’s serf’s heart, smell the aromatic food and the flush of adrenalin in Trevor’s veins. She waited patiently for either sibling to tell her why they’d wanted to see her.

Trevor shifted uncomfortably, shooting his sister a discrete yet undeniably annoyed glance. She ignored him. “Thank you for coming to see us,” the Young Lady Halkein said smoothly. “Our parents and elder brother have been called away on urgent business, else they would have done so in our place.” Some might take it as a slight that the youngest members of a bloodline were chosen to speak with them. Victoria doubted that Vipress would see it that way, but it was best to observe the formalities. “We have received word from your demesne. They have almost finished preparations for your arrival. If you would care to depart early, they will have a shuttle for you at your convenience, but I hope you will stay with a few days longer. There are still some people in Garamond who would be disappointed if their missed their chance to meet the Hero of Johannesburg.”

Savoy said nothing, her expression neutral. “Thank you,” she said at last. “If I am not an imposition, I would enjoy the chance to see more of the capital and I do appreciate your hospitality.”

Victoria gestured breezily, speaking up before Trevor had the chance to open his mouth and put his foot inside it. “It’s nothing,” she assured Vipress. “House Garuda is pleased to be able to host such a distinguished war hero. It truly is our honour.”

“Thank you again,” Alexandra said, standing up, her hands clasped behind her back as if she was standing at ease. “Was there anything else?”

“Yes,” Victoria put in. “I understand that you wished to visit the Gardens of Sacrifice?”

Savoy nodded. “I was told that they’d been closed due to terrorist actions.”

“Sapiens vandals,” Trevor snorted. “Flatlines.”

“Yes, well,” his sister said. “They were reopened this morning. Transport is yours if you wish it. If you would like the company, I know both Trevor and myself would be pleased to accompany you.” Trevor opened his mouth and closed it just as quickly. Victoria hid a small smile. “Although I would only ask that I be given a moment to change into something more... appropriate,” she motioned with a self-deprecating air to her outfit.

The taller woman was silent for a short moment, then tilted her head. “Of course, Lady Halkein. I would be... grateful for the company.”

“Then we’ll meet you in the foyer in, say, thirty minutes?”

Savoy nodded once and departed.

As soon as she was out of earshot, Trevor rounded on his sister. “Why did you suggest us going with her?” he snapped.

Victoria sighed, sitting up and summoning a pair of servants. “For the same reason I listen to chatter, dear brother.” She looked towards her serfs. “Find me an outfit for going out. Nothing ostentatious – something restrained.” She smiled again. “Simple, yet elegant.” The women hurried off to fulfill their mistress’s commands. Victoria looked over at Aarib. “You’ll wait here,” she purred. “When I get back, I’ll want some fun.” She tapped his chin. “Go find that page Lucas and be ready when I return. I always like watching you two.” Ignoring the flicker of hesitancy on her favourite’s face, the young invictus stretched luxuriously, looking at her sibling. “You should find something appropriate to wear, brother.” Her grin turned into that of the proverbial cat that had eaten the canary. “The public awaits.”

~

The Garamond Gardens of Sacrifice were located where the Lincoln Memorial and its reflecting pool had once stood. Rather than the much larger Memorial Garden, which commemorated the establishment of Garamond and the more general sacrifices of its construction, the Gardens of Sacrifice were a tribute to members of the Hegemony that had fallen in the war, both forerunners and primagen invictus. Even those sapiens that had fought for the Hegemony were remembered here, as a lesson that even the least of the human races could strive for something more.

It was a masterfully tended open-air arboretum, copses of trees selected from each continent, commemorations of every notable battle memorialized with plants from those regions. At each site, a polished-smooth rock stood, engraved with the names of the Hegemony dead. Like the plants, these gravestones were hewn from the battlegrounds they commemorated.

The air buzzed with the insects drawn to the floral odours, butterflies, bees and flies all clustering around the blossoming flowers. Spring was only just beginning. There were a handful of people present – most were tourists and most of those were invictus, their familiar serfs or human vassals trailing behind in their wake. There were only a few familiars and even less sapiens, the latter watched carefully by security.

There were guards posted at every entrance, looking snappy in their clean uniforms, white trim on blue. The black leather of their belts, boots and holsters gleamed. To Alexandra, they looked like toys that had just taken been out of the box and never used. Nor were they meant to be used; they were there to look pretty and intimidating.

They’d never had to crawl through mud, blood and piss, to fight for hours on end until even their post-human physiologies were on the verge of collapse. She was struck by the urge to scoop up a handful of the rich, moist soil and throw it at them just to see it splatter all over those nice, clean outfits, but that would hardly be appropriate, would it?

A rustle of conversation followed Savoy as she travelled through the gardens, her presence noted and commented on by the other visitors. Heads turned, gawkers muttered and whispered. Her skin crawled. It was like she’d told that sapiens, Darren – they’d made her into an idol, a fetish. The Halkein siblings trailed behind her, Victoria smiling and pausing to shake hands and offer comments and good fortune, Trevor sulking along behind her.

Alexandra ignored them both, stopping at the markers from each of her battles. She had perfect recall; every name came with a face. Every face was matched by the vivid memory of watching them die, or seeing their sheet-covered corpse.

“Samantha Vane,” she said aloud. “Venice. An anti-tank rocket blew away her left arm, shoulder and most of the tissue on that side. She held onto her gun long enough to kill the Coalition trooper who’d shot her and two others.”

She stopped at another marker. “Rolando Vasquez. Rio de Janeiro. He was a Colombian mercenary. He threw himself on a grenade right in front of me. I spent the rest of the campaign with my armour coated in his blood.”

Another marker. “Jacob Xin. London. He was the first one in my platoon to kill a Knight. Its partner caught him. He just... ended at the waist.”

“Katherine Heisler. Johannesburg. When we deployed, she was in the pod next to me. The blast that knocked me off course killed her. Before I crashed, I saw that the only thing left of either of them were bits of shattered metal.” Alexandra looked over her shoulder at the Garuda twins and, past them, the hangers-on. “Do you know what they all have in common?”

Victoria bit her lip and shook her head. “No.”

“They all died for you,” Savoy replied.

“They died for the Hegemony,” Trevor interjected. His sister flashed him a warning look, but he didn’t notice. “They didn’t die in vain. They brought glory to the primogenitors and ensured the success of their vision. All of these honoured dead did.”

Savoy rubbed a hand over her chin. She laughed, low and rough. “Is that how you remember it?” she said quietly, crouching next to the Berlin gravestone. She put her hand out, tracing along the names. “Glory. That’s what you’d tell some poor, dumb sapiens bitch who signed up with us to feed her family. You’d tell her that as she’s knee-deep in mud, screaming over and over and trying to hold her intestines in. She’s getting covered in glory.”

“Yes,” Trevor replied, stiff and haughty. “She would have died for the greater good, to ensure the supremacy and everlasting domination of her betters.”

“Oh,” Savoy said, rolling the syllable down her tongue. “Is that a fact.”

Victoria inhaled sharply as Lady Vipress straightened, turning towards Trevor. There was something in her eyes that the Garuda only seen before in Sammael’s expression and even then it hadn’t been like this. “Then you can tell me her name,” Savoy said quietly.

Trevor blinked in surprise. “Whose name?”

“I’ll make it easy,” Savoy purred. “The Battle of Corsica. That should help. What was her name? You must know; she died a glorious death, after all. You said that she was among the ‘honoured dead’, so you must know her name. What is it?”

The Garuda pursed his lips, his cheeks flushing red. “I don’t know,” he admitted through his teeth.

Alexandra stepped in front of him; even for an invictus she was tall. “No, you don’t,” she said. “How much glory did she really earn then?” She lowered her voice. “Be careful when you talk about the ‘honoured dead’ if you can’t so much as give them the names they deserve.” Her voice dropped lower still. “And never talk about the soldiers that fought and died next to me with that smug little grin on your face again.”

Victoria stepped forward, putting her hand on her twin’s shoulder. “My brother meant no offence, Lady Vipress,” she interjected before Trevor could do more damage. “He was merely attempting to articulate that all the losses of the war were for a purpose. I apologize that his efforts fell short of the mark, but I promise that no insult to any of the soldiers under your command was meant.

“We may not be familiar with every soldier or human auxiliary who perished, but we acknowledge their collective sacrifice. The struggles of your age were awash with horrors, but it was for a reason. It helped bring about this new order. We’ve brought peace and prosperity to what was once a world wracked by war, by racial and religious tensions. We’ve conquered disease and created a unified humanity where once there were only a thousand different groups, each threatening to tear everything part. To you, someone who fought through all the nightmares of the Final War, we must seem like we take much for granted. I suppose we are guilty of that at times. It is easy to concern oneself with the now when we have forgotten the cost in acquiring it. That is why House Garuda is so grateful to you,” Victoria smiled, slowly pushing Trevor back and stepping into his place next to Savoy. “Why all of us are.”

“You come from a time when the wonders we’ve made were only a dream. You saw the cost of what we have now. You fought for it and saved us from extinction. You are a reminder of the responsibility we have, to honour each and every life that came before us, primagen, forerunner and sapiens alike. They gave their lives and we owe it to them to make sure that that precious gift is never forgotten. We must move forward to ensure that the legacy they gave so much for will flourish. You,” she took Savoy’s hands in hers. “Will make sure of it. We owe a debt to past generations.” She turned to her brother. “Don’t we?”

Trevor nodded. “Yes,” he said.

Victoria smiled, looking to the crowd beyond. She’d made sure that they’d heard her. “Don’t we?”

There was a rumble of assent, a smattering of applause and Victoria’s smile widened. She turned back to Savoy, folding her arm into the taller woman’s. “Come with me,” she said. “I want to show you why you’re so important.”

~

“All of them?”

Victoria nodded. “You’ve asked why you haven’t met any of the other primagens. This is why.” She stood next to Alexandra. This part of the gardens were taken up by a single black marble wall, upon which was carved the name of every invictus soldier who’d fought in the war. Rather, almost all. The primogenitors had given their children many gifts; long life had been one such intended boon, but in Alexandra’s generation, that near-immortality had never been realized. The improvements which made primagens such excellent soldiers had also shortened their lives drastically. Very few of the war’s survivors had lived to see fifty. If she hadn’t been in cryogenic suspension, Savoy would have died with the rest of her generation. Fortunately for her, the flaws in her makeup had been accounted for when she had been woken up; she was undergoing treatments to ensure her life would be as long as any other invictus’s.

Alexandra knelt in front of the marker, her finger running along each name. There were so many. This was why everyone she’d asked about the others from her time had given her a non-answer. Maybe to spare her feelings, maybe to spare themselves if she reacted poorly. She closed her eyes, resting her forehead against the cold stone, taking a moment for her grief. Everyone she’d ever known was dead. “Are there any left?” she asked without looking up. She couldn’t imagine that there would be, not after all this time-

“Yes,” Victoria replied. “Just one.”

Savoy’s head snapped up. “I want to see them.”

~

Garamond Veterans’ Sanctuary was a combination hospital and care facility. The latter saw little use these days. In fact, they only had one permanent resident.

Patricia Jayne lay in her hospital bed, connected to life support machines via IVs and catheters. The enhancements that had made her a peerless killer had ravaged her body. She slept most of the days away, unable to do more than that. Sometimes she would tell the doctors and nurses that she wanted out of the bed, that she was going for a walk under her own power. Dutifully, they would disconnect and reconnect each bit of equipment as the woman struggled to stand on shaking legs. Sometimes she almost made it down the hall before she collapsed.

No other primagen had lived as long as she had; by medical logic, she should have died decades ago, with the others, but somehow she had held on.

She was awake when Alexandra arrived, staring out the window at the green, sculpted lawns that she hadn’t set foot on in years. When she looked over at her visitor, she smiled, wheezing and struggling lift herself up. A familiar nurse rushed forward to help her, but Patricia snarled. “I can do it!” After a moment, she managed to sit up, lifting a trembling arm in salute. “Corporal Patricia Jayne, reporting.” Even that exertion was almost too much for her.

Savoy returned the salute. “At ease, corporal.”

Patricia let the nurse ease her back onto the mattress. “Took you long enough.”

“I-”

“Bet those cunts never told you I was here,” Jayne interrupted. She waved in the general vicinity of the rest of the hospital. “Weren’t sure how you’d take it, I bet. Wanted to-” she coughed, taking a sip of water that her nurse lifted to her lips. “Wanted to make sure you wouldn’t pull someone’s head off for bringing you bad news.” She coughed again. “Cunts.” She smiled. “‘course it ain’t all their fault. After the war, we got a... reputation.”

An orderly bustled in a chair for Alexandra, vanishing just as quickly. “Or maybe you gave us a bad name, corporal,” Savoy said, sitting next to her former subordinate. “You were always had a temper. Like that time in Budapest.”

Patricia laughed, started coughing. After a moment, the fit subsided. “Good to see you came out of the deep freeze with everything upstairs. I wondered about that, you know. Didn’t know whether it’d be better for you to remember or not.”

“I’m still not sure myself,” Alexandra admitted.

The older woman grunted. “I know the feeling.” She nodded up at the television screen hanging from the ceiling. It was muted, closed captions scrolling across the bottom. There was a news feed running, switching from stories about the next space launch, to tales of Coalition actions, to gossip about Savoy herself. There was a short clip of her getting out of the car outside the hospital’s grounds, just minutes old. “Camera loves you, though. More’n me.”

“The camera can go fuck itself,” Savoy replied.

“Heh. Remember Berlin? That snot-nosed reporter Command sent us as an ‘embedded journalist’?”

“Not one of my finest moments.”

Patricia rasped another chuckle. “You told him to get his camera out of your face or you’d fuck him bloody with it because,” she tried to imitate Alexandra’s voice. “‘We’ve got a war to fight’. And that ended up on the news, as an example of the dedication and no-nonsense attitude of the soldiers on the ground.”

“I remember an endless series of assholes who liked to quote that line when I wasn’t around and didn’t think I could hear them.”

“Or when you were,” Patricia smiled. “I think the only reason you didn’t shoot me that day was because the Colonel was there.”

“When he did that snort trying to keep his laughter in, I almost shot him.”

Patricia nodded. “Those were simpler days. Take the gun, point the gun, shoot gun. We always had a target.”

“There’s still plenty of targets.”

“The Coalition’s nothing,” Patricia said. “Bunch of sapiens rabble-rousers holding onto a dead name and spray-painting buildings and setting fires. The war’s been over for ninety years. That’s what the talking heads say.”

“Wasn’t talking about the Coalition.”

“Careful,” Patricia said, raising herself up a touch. “They don’t like that kind of talk. I used to get visitors. Reporters asking for my opinion on anniversaries, memorial days and celebrations.” She waved towards the door. “Ain’t so many there now. This generation, they think they’ve done it all and made it to the top. They don’t like to be reminded about the climb.”

Alexandra nodded. “I caught some of that.”

“You? You’re the Hero of Johannesburg,” Patricia coughed again. “Not some bitter old woman too stubborn to die. You went from Hell to Heaven just like that,” she tried to snap her fingers. “They’re waiting for you to tell them how wonderful it is, how they’ve fulfilled the vision you fought for, that you should thank them with tears in your eyes for what a paradise they’ve created.” She coughed again, hacking phlegm into a container the nurse provided. “Cunts.”

Alexandra was silent for a moment. “I should have come sooner. I should have pressed harder to know about the rest of us.”

“Eh,” Patricia waved the comment away. “Don’t worry about it. You were recuperating and then they wanted to show you all the pretty little shinies without putting a damper on your enthusiasm. I’m still here, so it ain’t like you missed the chance. Fucking doctors keep trying to understand why I’m still alive. They think it’s their experimental treatment regimes, recombinant gene therapies and the rest of the shit they spent ninety years stabbing into me. Simple truth is, I was waiting for you. Couldn’t let you be the last one of us left among the rest of these cunts.” She sighed. “I lived a long time, LT. Too long with this. I’m glad you came back when you did.” She closed her eyes. “I’m tired.”

Alexandra took the other woman’s hand. She didn’t know what to say.

“I,” Jayne sighed. It took her a long moment before she continued. “I don’t think it’ll be too long for me now. I know I wasn’t your favourite squaddie, but I left you some things. Figured even if I couldn’t wait for you, they would.”

“Thank you.”

“Yeah, don’t get too mushy, LT.” Jayne closed her eyes. Another long moment passed. “You don’t have to come back. I know you’ve got that shiny new Midwest home that they gave you. I,” she paused, taking another sip of water. “Just needed to make my report.”

The nurse came up behind Alexandra. “She needs to sleep,” the familiar said, gently but firmly.

Savoy stood. “I’ll try and make it back before I go.”

Jayne nodded. “Don’t trouble yourself too much, LT. Just be careful out there. Make sure those cunts remember.”

“I will.” Alexandra turned to go, pausing at the door. “What does God need with a starship?” she said.

Patricia opened her eyes a crack, looking at her former lieutenant. For a moment, she was puzzled, then certainty set onto her features. “Nothing, LT. Nothing at all.”
 

LockedKeye

Scientifically Evil
I hope you won't be offended if I say that your setting makes me want to drop the Tenno and maybe a few ACUs on it.


Other than that, your writing is excellent as ever. And it sounds like Alexandra is...unhappy with the way things are now.
 
YES! It's back!

Heheheh, the Invictus ruling class has not lived up to the sacrifices their forebearers made - and one of them is around, still kicking, and venerated by a lot of the ones with power - but remembers fighting for a future they failed to deliver.

Dis gun be gud.
 
Yay, hope it doesn't take as long for the next chapter...

I wonder just what's gonna happen to those oh so superior Homo Invictus... I suspect it involves fireballs, lots and lots of fireballs...
 

Proximal Flame

In Midnight Clad
I hope you won't be offended if I say that your setting makes me want to drop the Tenno and maybe a few ACUs on it.
I'm not certain what those are, so... no?

Other than that, your writing is excellent as ever. And it sounds like Alexandra is...unhappy with the way things are now.
Heh. I don't think she's all that happym but as to whether she's unhappy... time will tell. I've got a few scenes planned for upcoming chaptgers, but I also need to tighten the plot up as well - we're coming to the end of the adventures in Garamond - then we'll be moving to what's left of America's bread basket and the new demesne of House Vipress.

YES! It's back!

Heheheh, the Invictus ruling class has not lived up to the sacrifices their forebearers made - and one of them is around, still kicking, and venerated by a lot of the ones with power - but remembers fighting for a future they failed to deliver.

Dis gun be gud.
I hope I'll live up to expectations. :)

And they have not; all the propaganda that Alexandra remembers is that the Hegemony was fighting to lead humanity into the next era. They had to tear down the old before they could build the new, they had to fight against those who didn't understand... even then, she was fighting for her survival and the survival of her race. Just existing was a capital crime to the Coalition and like she said to Darren, if it came to a choice between her race and theirs, she would (and did) choose hers every time.

Now, as to what her race did with that chance she gave them... that's at the heart of the matter, isn't it? :)

Yay, hope it doesn't take as long for the next chapter...

I wonder just what's gonna happen to those oh so superior Homo Invictus... I suspect it involves fireballs, lots and lots of fireballs...
I'll try my best to avoid another six-month hiatus between chapters. :)

And I wonder too...

Heh. Heh heh heh...
 
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